I will meet you in the rain, at midnight,
at the museum of lost things.
We are curators, cataloguing abandoned shoes,
discarded in wild joy or endless despair.
Nothing here comes in pairs.
I'll meet you in silence or a cacophony, the
gallery of tears and cries can never
be opened to the public.
The gates are made of keys and teeth, I'll
meet you just inside where the room of breath sighs.
So much is waiting to be sorted.
We should not even mention love.
When you find my childhood
please alert me. I will always do the same.
I'll meet you in the room of names.
I'll meet you in the dark, in secret, and
ask about the thought of blame.
In the museum of lost things
words maintain their own gallery,
bandied about, floating, snapped,
lobbed gently or just said.
I can ask you to describe the significance
or feel the silence as a separate host.
My work is never done.
I look for signs in all that has been discarded,
the entire detritus of this humanity,
and I keep on finding what still exists,
the gift of sorting, the curation of friendship,
the bottom of the barrel, the wonder of the end.
If love was the question we would be elsewhere and asking.
I will meet you in the pouring rain,
at midnight, at the museum of lost things.
The gates are made of teeth and keys.
There is a room for breath and hope and joy.
I will be there, as if it is the only thing to do.
Because it is the only thing to do.


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I'm of course very proud to make someone like poetry as well! You rock.
I could sum it up that way:
I will meet you in the rain, at midnight,
Because it is the only thing to do.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
very well done
And they're all right. This is just beautiful, aim.
And uh, I lost a red sneaker when moving, it would be in the room of despair, so if you find it... Keep it, and send me one of your shoes instead so I will never forget the beauty of the museum of lost things.
Such is the power of what you have written so beautifully and with such rich emotion weight.
Excellent.
Life is Good sent me a PM asking me to delete one of her comments, because she had a power outage and commented twice. Me being me, I deleted someone else's comment. I so truly apologize. Life is Good - I'm afraid we will have to live with both of your beautiful comments. I'm posting this long discourse and then I'm replying to each of you.
AHP: Thank you so much for reading, always.
O'Really?: I'm so happy this poem has touched you! I feel slightly proud about it!
Life Is Good: Thanks so much, I appreciate your words. ASorry about the comments thing!
Frank Indiana, dustbowl diva and Kathy K.: Wow, thank you all so much.
fingerlakeswanderer, Lea Lane and WSFTC: it's an honor to have you read and be touched;thank you.
I have to sit back for a second. I'm still in Seattle, on vacation, and need to be present for a few minutes. I am overwhelmed by this response, and slightly weepy...from joy that You honor me so much by reading and comenting and, most of all, HEARING my words.
I am a very lucky woman today - you all inspire me. THANK YOU!
I never considered visiting this museum. You took me there on a whim, and now I need to go back.
Powerful.
I'll be home Monday and back to my old OS ways...thank you all so much, truly. xo
I will be back many times to read it. Actually... I think I'll copy it and print it off (if you don't mind.) Oh... and if you find my virginity in there you can throw it out. But that was a llloooonnnngggg time ago.
It is so good to feel that frisson, to have that moment of knowing that this is the real deal, this is the sort of writing I seek when I wade through a lot of offerings from my fellow decent amateurs. (No disrespect intended, but let's face it, most of us can't touch this.)
So, thank you.
I am so touched, flattered, honored by these great comments.
Penguin: Thanks for reading my poetry! There's a few of here struggling mightily to win hearts and minds...;)
Thank you, Lunch Lady!
Apache: Will do. Thanks for stopping by and for your PM. I can't wait....
Walk Away: Your comment really, truly means so much to me.
Thank you, Patrick daniels!
SeattleK8: Yay! And to think I was having such a nice time with you two days before getting this right - it must have been the meet-up and Seattle that were inspiring...
Oh, cyclopic. You would understand this...as you always do.
Sally Swift: Thank you so much, so very very much!
Lisa Kern: Good to see you here! Thank you for your comment.
O'Really: You can print it out and share it if you would like! You're the only stalker I have ever appreciated!
CB (ntf): Thanks...that means so much to me.
Susan Mitchell: I am so honored and flattered by your comment, and also inspired, which is the greatest gift a writer can receive. Thank you.
Thank you, Lainey. That means so much.
JRDog: Thanks!
Sorry I have been so kooky about replying to comments...I didn't want to be rude to my friends and hog their computers. Oh, and also ignore them for OS!
Please feel free to print this, share it, if you would like.
Thank you all so much, again.
I will be there, as if it is the only thing to do.
Because it is the only thing to do.
A moving, big poem full of quiet big things to think about.
This is a very hard piece to write.
Very well thought out.
Rated.
Thank you, Polly Endicott. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Thank you so much, Thoth! I appreciate it.
Hi j lynne! Good to see you and thanks!
Not because I want to. I absolutely loathe it. In college, I would rather light myself on fire than have to read it.
The problem is ultimately, that poetry is not something you 'write'. It's something you feel..Something that is screaming at you while you're just about to fall asleep at night and you toss and turn and get pissed off and finally get out of bed and just start hammering it all out until it's out of your system and you can finally get back to bed.
And yet here I am grudgingly reading this for the fifth time and it's been what? at least a month since you wrote this? And so finally I had no choice but to come here and tell you how great a piece this is and that it chastises me for not having one ounce the poetic ability.
But in the end, it's fucking fantastic..