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I like cheese, wine, art openings, art shoes, art installations, poetry, single malt scotch, the sublime if I can define it, the ridiculous whenever i can find it, food in general, ethnographic history ie OPS ie Other People's Stories.

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NOVEMBER 7, 2009 5:19AM

The Museum of Lost Things

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I will meet you in the rain, at midnight,

at the museum of lost things.

We are curators, cataloguing abandoned shoes,

discarded in wild joy or endless despair.

Nothing here comes in pairs.

I'll meet you in silence or a cacophony, the

gallery of tears and cries can never

be opened to the public.

The gates are made of keys and teeth, I'll

meet you just inside where the room of breath sighs.

So much is waiting to be sorted.

We should not even mention love.

When you find my childhood

please alert me. I will always do the same.

I'll meet you in the room of names.

I'll meet you in the dark, in secret, and

ask about the thought of blame.

In the museum of lost things

words maintain their own gallery,

bandied about, floating, snapped,

lobbed gently or just said.

I can ask you to describe the significance

or feel the silence as a separate host.

My work is never done.

I look for signs in all that has been discarded,

the entire detritus of this humanity,

and I keep on finding what still exists,

the gift of sorting, the curation of friendship,

the bottom of the barrel, the wonder of the end.

If love was the question we would be elsewhere and asking.

I will meet you in the pouring rain,

at midnight, at the museum of lost things.

The gates are made of teeth and keys.

There is a room for breath and hope and joy.

I will be there, as if it is the only thing to do.

Because it is the only thing to do.

 

 

 

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I'm going to pass on trying to be clever here. This is too beautiful to touch. O'Really excellent piece of work. This is irresistible. And I am really not into poetry.
Thank you O'Really! That means so much to me. I spent a bunch of time on your blog today, and hope you know....that your writing, your honesty, your talent make it worthwhile to contribute and participate here.
I'm of course very proud to make someone like poetry as well! You rock.
I love, including all of it, the first line and the last line so much.
I could sum it up that way:

I will meet you in the rain, at midnight,
Because it is the only thing to do.

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

very well done
Thank you wakingupslowly! I truly appreciate your kind eye and your lovely ear. I think it will grow and change.
Oh dear... you've got me crying at 8am on a sunny Saturday. This is exquisite. You are simply astounding as a poet. I feel like I want to hand you words and have you curate them into something this fine. Some of the moments in this poem made me come to a full stop without a visible break in the words.... wow.
"There is a room for breath and hope and joy." And a fine room it is, after you constructed it so well. Good work, aim.
I had to come back here again. This is like a really good lover who you want more of, can't get enough of, need inside your skin. And since I haven't had one of those in a while, I returned to this. This is the next best thing.
So moving and beautiful! There is no more I can say. sigh
I will carry this with me the rest of the day. And then I'll come back and read it again. and again. Thank you.
I think everyone has told me to come here this morning.

And they're all right. This is just beautiful, aim.
So moving and beautiful. What more can be said?
I have never come back to read a post this many times. It's haunting me.
Wow. Simply stunning. "Nothing here comes in pairs" . LOVE this!
I am not a big fan of poetry because I can't write it. But, having said that, I know what I like and what is good. And this is a piece that I like very much. The contradictions, the beauty of it, the pacing. Well done Aim.
Beautifully done! I can feel every word, every breathe. Very, very nice.
Man this is KILLER. It would make an incredible Tim Burton like movie. I loved this more than I can express. Really. It is of the richest creativity and the core of us all.

And uh, I lost a red sneaker when moving, it would be in the room of despair, so if you find it... Keep it, and send me one of your shoes instead so I will never forget the beauty of the museum of lost things.
I've read this several times. It has - in turn - taken my breath away, brought tears, left me speechless, pulled me back, and taken my breath yet again.
Such is the power of what you have written so beautifully and with such rich emotion weight.
Excellent.
Hi everyone: I'm a little bit choked up right now. I posted in the middle of the night and wasn't sure if anyone would read this, so thank you so much. I am so honored that my words could touch you.
Life is Good sent me a PM asking me to delete one of her comments, because she had a power outage and commented twice. Me being me, I deleted someone else's comment. I so truly apologize. Life is Good - I'm afraid we will have to live with both of your beautiful comments. I'm posting this long discourse and then I'm replying to each of you.
C.K.: Thank you, as always. You know you have the true measure of my growth with this particular art.
AHP: Thank you so much for reading, always.
O'Really?: I'm so happy this poem has touched you! I feel slightly proud about it!
Life Is Good: Thanks so much, I appreciate your words. ASorry about the comments thing!

Frank Indiana, dustbowl diva and Kathy K.: Wow, thank you all so much.

fingerlakeswanderer, Lea Lane and WSFTC: it's an honor to have you read and be touched;thank you.

I have to sit back for a second. I'm still in Seattle, on vacation, and need to be present for a few minutes. I am overwhelmed by this response, and slightly weepy...from joy that You honor me so much by reading and comenting and, most of all, HEARING my words.
I am a very lucky woman today - you all inspire me. THANK YOU!
Fabulous! Absorbing, the words is a great process... Copied... Wow! RRR
Oh! Oh? Oh.

I never considered visiting this museum. You took me there on a whim, and now I need to go back.

Powerful.
I feel as if I'm living in the museum of lost things, sorting my beloved's memories. Thanks for this work of poetry. cy
I am not usually a big fan of poetry, but you are among the few who are changing my mind. The imagery is so vivid and the emotions so clear and intense and lovely too... I am at a loss to chose a favorite line, there are so many. Just. Wow.
I adore this, aim. One of the finest poems I've read in a long, long time. I'm bookmarking it to read again and again. Thanks so much for sharing it.
I wish I could comment to everyone personally, but I am staying with friends and felt like doing so today was as rude as not acknowledging comments! I would try now, but I can barely figure out where I stopped. Please, please know that every single comment is appreciated and that your words mean so much to me.

I'll be home Monday and back to my old OS ways...thank you all so much, truly. xo
Gorgeous...simply gorgeous. Thank you.
I can't believe you got me to come back and read this again, even though I know how it ends. That your words still elicit that element of breathlessness and surprise is a testament to the power of your words and your writing. That 's it. I can't come back again. You will think I am a stalker. But I really do have a life. I think.
O'Really said what I was thinking as I read this (only I'm not stalking you... she is.) I am not a poetry fan but this poem should be put to music. It IS music on it's own... but if it was put to music it would rock the world.

I will be back many times to read it. Actually... I think I'll copy it and print it off (if you don't mind.) Oh... and if you find my virginity in there you can throw it out. But that was a llloooonnnngggg time ago.
I think you know I have been a genuine fan of yours since the first time I read one of your poems. This is just... incredible. What a lame word. I want to find a proper word because all the ones I usually hand out for things that impress me are not adequate.

It is so good to feel that frisson, to have that moment of knowing that this is the real deal, this is the sort of writing I seek when I wade through a lot of offerings from my fellow decent amateurs. (No disrespect intended, but let's face it, most of us can't touch this.)

So, thank you.
I'm feeling teary after reading this. It's breathtaking in its universality. Thank you so much.
Hi. I'm home!
I am so touched, flattered, honored by these great comments.
Penguin: Thanks for reading my poetry! There's a few of here struggling mightily to win hearts and minds...;)

Thank you, Lunch Lady!

Apache: Will do. Thanks for stopping by and for your PM. I can't wait....

Walk Away: Your comment really, truly means so much to me.

Thank you, Patrick daniels!

SeattleK8: Yay! And to think I was having such a nice time with you two days before getting this right - it must have been the meet-up and Seattle that were inspiring...

Oh, cyclopic. You would understand this...as you always do.

Sally Swift: Thank you so much, so very very much!

Lisa Kern: Good to see you here! Thank you for your comment.

O'Really: You can print it out and share it if you would like! You're the only stalker I have ever appreciated!

CB (ntf): Thanks...that means so much to me.

Susan Mitchell: I am so honored and flattered by your comment, and also inspired, which is the greatest gift a writer can receive. Thank you.

Thank you, Lainey. That means so much.

JRDog: Thanks!

Sorry I have been so kooky about replying to comments...I didn't want to be rude to my friends and hog their computers. Oh, and also ignore them for OS!
Please feel free to print this, share it, if you would like.
Thank you all so much, again.
"I can ask you to describe the significance or feel the silence as a separate host." a very weighty statement! I like the entire feel of the piece as well, drawing one in with the promise of a meeting. rated
There is a room for breath and hope and joy.

I will be there, as if it is the only thing to do.

Because it is the only thing to do.

A moving, big poem full of quiet big things to think about.
Original, captivating, strong yet sentimental.
This is a very hard piece to write.
Very well thought out.

Rated.
This is gorgeous. It's melancholy and wistful....just beautiful.
ramblin rose: Thank you for stopping by! Thanks for "hearing" that line.
Thank you, Polly Endicott. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Thank you so much, Thoth! I appreciate it.
Hi j lynne! Good to see you and thanks!
Wow, A!! This is so fabulous. I'm printing it out and posting it on my wall. A home run, my dear. How many times do I get to rate this???
Jesus, this was awesome. I'd give anything to be able to speak like that.
how did i miss this? it's a gem, pure and simple. fabulous. kudos. A+++++
This is why OS has made me come to love poetry. Thank you.
I write poetry..

Not because I want to. I absolutely loathe it. In college, I would rather light myself on fire than have to read it.

The problem is ultimately, that poetry is not something you 'write'. It's something you feel..Something that is screaming at you while you're just about to fall asleep at night and you toss and turn and get pissed off and finally get out of bed and just start hammering it all out until it's out of your system and you can finally get back to bed.

And yet here I am grudgingly reading this for the fifth time and it's been what? at least a month since you wrote this? And so finally I had no choice but to come here and tell you how great a piece this is and that it chastises me for not having one ounce the poetic ability.

But in the end, it's fucking fantastic..