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JANUARY 4, 2010 1:05AM

Contentment at the Bottom of the Sea...

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 Contentment on the Sea

Nature is surrounding me

and the 'me'  that I had believed

and thought myself to be is slowly

(and perhaps mercifully)

being whittled away, like the rocks that turn

into sand from the constant pounding

of the waves. Could it be the 'egoic self',

(so to speak), is being whittled out of existence,

along with my penchant for words?

The  longer I am here, the more silent I become,

as I settle into the bottom of the sea,

completely content.

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contentment is good. hope tht is ur own stte of mind. wish you more of such times in the new yr
This is beautifully written, lovely tone and spare. I too have felt my penchant for words whittle out of existence into just an 'aaah'. I understand completely!
This is an excellent poem. I often wonder how many beatings we can take (waves, situational events, emotional erosion) day after day. Keep writing...
PS-- I really like the image associated with the poem...