"Old Literacy" v. "New Literacy:" A Five Paragraph Essay
This morning my husband pointed me towards a story in The New York Times. The article focused on Duke English professor Cathy N. Davidson, who advocates for the replacement of term papers with blogging. Speaking of the term paper concept, Professor Davison says that “[a]s a writer, it offends me deeply.” On the other side of the argument is Douglas B. Reeves, who asserts that the rigorous structure of “old literacy” research papers and essays is a fundamental part of learning to think and to advance an argument in a coherent manner. According to Reeves, blogs might be inherently more “interesting” than term papers, but “nobody would conflate interesting writing with premise, evidence, argument and conclusion.” Another academic type says that students are “more impassioned by the new literacy,” finding more motivation and reward in writing personal blogs with immediate feedback and no formal, structural requirements. As a product of the “old literacy” currently enmeshed in the “new literacy” of blogging, I fail to see why the two sides of this pedagogical argument can’t be harmonized.
My background is totally “old literacy.” Beginning in seventh grade, we wrote research papers with a set of rubber band-wrapped notecards. We learned to write a “cogent” five paragraph essay about pretty much anything, and to produce one in 50-minute exam settings. We were learning how to marshal arguments, make a point, and drive it home. By the time I was an English major at Oberlin I was writing at least a paper a week, some very brief and some final papers over 15 pages. I wrote about logogenic and pathogenic music, the quality of ingegno in Sir Gawain and the Green Knight, humor in Byron’s Don Juan, and the controversies surrounding Piero della Francesca’s “Flagellation.” I did not love it, and it did not teach me to be a better writer. (Reading taught me to be a better writer). What all of those essays, term papers and other formal, academic writings taught me was how to be an organized thinker and a persuasive advocate.
During the years of writing in a rigid format, I always understood myself to be relying on literary training wheels. The rules made sense to me – if I wrote a paper in which my thesis statement was “I believe in capital punishment,” I was simply expressing my own, personal opinion. Unless I was an authority on the subject, no one cared much what a sixteen-year old girl thought unless she was asked, specifically, to write a paper about her feelings on the subject. I also knew that, although it was a clumsy form, the standard issue thesis + support was a recognized academic semaphore, and that if I executed properly, my message would be understood and (usually) well-received. There was a comfort in learning with the training wheels on; I knew perfectly well that I could write creatively, or express my own opinion, but that I tended to be all over the place logically without a little structural support. I am grateful, as a thinker and a writer, that I was given that support so that I could later break free and do my own thing.
Although I see value in learning to write a formal persuasive essay or research paper, there is much to be said for using the available tools to cultivate a love of writing. Blogging is fun, and writing without any rules is a great way to encourage creativity without bringing down the hammer of judgment. A blog might provide just the right opening for a contemporary student bursting with emotions, arguments and ideas that have no place in formal academic writing. As a writer, as a parent and as a proponent of civilized discourse, I see no problem with integrating “new literacy” into the classroom. However, and this is a major “however,” what I see in my son’s education is a trend towards reading very little, and writing even less. At times, the approach to literature pedagogy seems to be much like getting honey from angry bees – tiptoe, keep the creatures happy and comfortable, blind them with a dense fog of popular movies and personal journaling and then expect in high school and college that you will pull out combs full of the honey that is logical, cohesive writing. If todays’ students don’t read, and are never expected to produce a rational argument based on what they read, “fun blogging” becomes not a creative tool, but a default based on the inability to think critically and write persuasively.
In the end, I see enough value in both “old” and “new” literacy that it’s difficult for me to fathom why it would be necessary to choose one over the other. No one ever flunked life because they used “I” in an objective essay, or failed to use three compound and three simple sentences in every paragraph. There is great value, and empowerment in writing freely, unencumbered by rules imposed by dead white guys. A person might, however, be unable to find success in life if she is not able to read, assimilate and explain material on a variety of subjects. The material may be digital, it may come from Wikipedia, but the rules of analysis and explication are not magically suspended in such a way that one’s personal, fluid ramblings provide a feasible substitute for formal argument. It seems entirely possible to develop pedagogy that combines the personal disclosure and freedom of blogging with the rigorous requirements of traditional academic writing. It might take mad skills, and great flexibility on the part of instructors, but it might produce a generation of writers able to express themselves in a range of styles depending on the situation.
And just to show that I was not scarred by my early training, I am ending this five-paragraph essay with a sixth paragraph. It begins with a conjunction, and so far I have not been struck dead. It is worth the risk in order to say this one, last, thing: a person can learn a lot of things in the writing process, be it blogging or the construction of a formal paper, but a person learns how to write well from reading. Accept no substitutes.


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Your honeycomb harvest from angry bees metaphor cracked me up! More precisely, the bees are sleeping and the honeycomb is laced with empty honey-less chambers and marijuana seeds.
First, I told my daughters to follow the rules while in school.
Second, I told them to forget the rules after they learned them.
Finally, I think learning the structure may help to organize thoughts in the very early years, but at some point it just gets silly.
In conclusion, find your own voice.
Good post.
If you take a quick survey of all the writing being done every day, my bet is that you'll find the majority (perhaps a large majority) to fit under one of two categories: informative or persuasive. To do either style well, you need to apply structure to be effective. You aren't going to learn the varieties of business writing in a creative writing class, but more press releases are written every day than short stories.
Ann, you can speak to this better than I -- try to imagine someone jumping from an informal writing background to being asked to write a legal brief. Take away the legal language and what's left is a step by step analysis and argument. Now witness that basic structure used by a sports writer in a column on why the home team should trade for Player X instead of Player Y.
Writing is communication. Plenty of communications aren't "fun" or "interesting," just simply formal (has that tech manual put you to sleep yet?). If educators come up with a better tool than term papers to teach structured writing, that's great. Otherwise, good luck to all those who only know the joy of blogging when it comes to writing that business plan your banker wants to see during the loan process.
The masters of old learned the rules before they broke them. And Ann, I stand right next to you -- the best way to improve your writing is to read.
Well done.
I taught myself to read and did it without regard for content (books, cereal boxes, cleanser labels). I think it taught me things I might have had difficulty with later absent a certain understanding that I came to early in my reading life (why rough, through, thought, bough, cough, and dough are all pronounced differently) Um, because.
I also learned to love the structure and beauty of writing through Hardy, and detest the metric verse of Shakespeare (it was a new language). I was sucked in by the story telling abilities of Margaret Mitchell and got so much satisfaction from kick ass fiction, Steinbeck-style.
By the time I was subjected to rote rules of reading and writing, I embraced those training wheels. I knew they lead to bigger things and I've always felt some comfort in order. I like sitting in a quiet library. But I love to stand in crashing waves and blowing wind too. There's every reason to embrace both, which you express so well here Ann.
I can no longer define 'dangling participle', but do recognize departure from what was taught as 'correct' American English. Eats, Shoots and Leaves is my punctuation Bible, but I often fall short in that area as well these days. Is punctuation changing? I think it is.
I agree with Lammchop that in order to depart with much hope of success, you have to know the rules before breaking them nicely, or should that be 'well'?
Nice palavering with you Ann! I mean great soapboxing! er... no,...neither of those observations are quite right. I'm having some difficulties with this writing thing. Okay, I'm off to take the cure by reading some more now............
But I love the "new literacy" freedom of starting paragraphs with a conjunction. I also agree wholeheartedly that reading is the most important element in becoming a good writer.
I agree reading is the best tool for improving one's writing. But, one needs to be comfortably intimate with the language that's to express his thoughts. Without understanding the structure of that language, the idioms, nuances, puns - the tools, one cannot write with the abandon, craft, and ease as great writers have. I justified my teaching grammar, punctuation and usage religiously - defying the curriculum of the times - as an excuse to explain to my students why they lost points. When they understood the tools needed and their importance for that much coveted poetic licence, their blogging took on a new life too.
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Interesting that your blog in this case, and oftentimes, violates some of the cardinal rules of the "new literacy". One of those rules concerns the "wall of text", which holds that an online paragraph should have no more than two sentences. I routinely violate that rule.
Another cardinal rule is that one should not use compound sentences, since they apparently place too heavy a burden on the thought processes of the modern "educated" reader. I shudder to think what would happen to their television-befeebled brains if confronted by the page-long prose of Jonathan Swift or other writers of a far more literate age than ours.
That thought brings me this: I consider the new literacy more akin to the old illiteracy, since it too often lacks the most basic elements of good writing, elements such as punctuation. I dealt with this in my post Pardon My Punctuation, in which I referred to the untimely death of the comma.
You are quite right that the best way to learn to write is by reading good writing. But in our post-literate age, fewer and fewer young people read anything, let alone books by good writers. Instead of Homer's Iliad, we have Homer Simpson; instead of Henry Fielding we have Facebook, and instead of Tristram Shandy, we have Texting and Twitter.
We have traded Miss Persnickety, the old-maid school-marm with her glasses on a chain, for MS Word, with its ever-intrusive paper-clip instructing us about grammar. And we have traded spelling for spellcheck.
The result? LOL.
and I read alot too-reading does not teach grammar. There are too many oral interactions that cancel out the good influence of reading.
But I'm thinking that ultimately really good writing, including creative writing, has an underlying logic and organization, if not always the 5 graf structure.
I think it's the writer's job to make the point, not the reader's job to sift through the writer's ramblings to discern what the heck the writer thinks -- when the writer hasn't bothered to figure it for herself before setting pen to paper, er ... fingertips to keyboard.
Thanks for this!
Define and state your point. (Topic sentence.). Expand it a bit (para 1).
Have some evidence/ideas to support your point. (paras 2,3,4) Make them flow (transition sentences). Define and state each supporting point (first sentences of paras 2,3,4)
Sum up clearly. (Para 5).
Note, defining and stating your point, supporting it, and summing up smoothly are the things that have to be learned. It doesn't matter if it is in the context of a letter to a congressman, a blog, business proposal or a 5 para essay.
If the structure of a logical argument is maintained, calling it a blog post is fine, but if we are exchanging writing a cohesive argument for ramblings about my life, then students are in trouble.
When you drop stuff, kids have to learn it on their own, which increases the divide between the kids with literate, educated parents who can help their kid when they need to write a logical, well-supported essay and have no clue how to do it and kids with parents who can't help.
And ultimately, whether the 5 para essay is flexible or not has to do with the teacher. I'm sure blogging can be taught badly, too.
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