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JANUARY 25, 2012 9:29AM

"Old Literacy" v. "New Literacy:" A Five Paragraph Essay

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This morning my husband pointed me towards a story in The New York Times. The article focused on Duke English professor Cathy N. Davidson, who advocates for the replacement of term papers with blogging. Speaking of the term paper concept, Professor Davison says that “[a]s a writer, it offends me deeply.” On the other side of the argument is Douglas B. Reeves, who asserts that the rigorous structure of “old literacy” research papers and essays is a fundamental part of learning to think and to advance an argument in a coherent manner. According to Reeves, blogs might be inherently more “interesting” than term papers, but “nobody would conflate interesting writing with premise, evidence, argument and conclusion.” Another academic type says that students are “more impassioned by the new literacy,” finding more motivation and reward in writing personal blogs with immediate feedback and no formal, structural requirements. As a product of the “old literacy” currently enmeshed in the “new literacy” of blogging, I fail to see why the two sides of this pedagogical argument can’t be harmonized.

My background is totally “old literacy.” Beginning in seventh grade, we wrote research papers with a set of rubber band-wrapped notecards. We learned to write a “cogent” five paragraph essay about pretty much anything, and to produce one in 50-minute exam settings. We were learning how to marshal arguments, make a point, and drive it home. By the time I was an English major at Oberlin I was writing at least a paper a week, some very brief and some final papers over 15 pages. I wrote about logogenic and pathogenic music, the quality of ingegno in Sir Gawain and the Green Knight, humor in Byron’s Don Juan, and the controversies surrounding Piero della Francesca’s “Flagellation.” I did not love it, and it did not teach me to be a better writer. (Reading taught me to be a better writer). What all of those essays, term papers and other formal, academic writings taught me was how to be an organized thinker and a persuasive advocate.

During the years of writing in a rigid format, I always understood myself to be relying on literary training wheels. The rules made sense to me – if I wrote a paper in which my thesis statement was “I believe in capital punishment,” I was simply expressing my own, personal opinion. Unless I was an authority on the subject, no one cared much what a sixteen-year old girl thought unless she was asked, specifically, to write a paper about her feelings on the subject. I also knew that, although it was a clumsy form, the standard issue thesis + support was a recognized academic semaphore, and that if I executed properly, my message would be understood and (usually) well-received. There was a comfort in learning with the training wheels on; I knew perfectly well that I could write creatively, or express my own opinion, but that I tended to be all over the place logically without a little structural support. I am grateful, as a thinker and a writer, that I was given that support so that I could later break free and do my own thing.

Although I see value in learning to write a formal persuasive essay or research paper, there is much to be said for using the available tools to cultivate a love of writing. Blogging is fun, and writing without any rules is a great way to encourage creativity without bringing down the hammer of judgment. A blog might provide just the right opening for a contemporary student bursting with emotions, arguments and ideas that have no place in formal academic writing. As a writer, as a parent and as a proponent of civilized discourse, I see no problem with integrating “new literacy” into the classroom. However, and this is a major “however,” what I see in my son’s education is a trend towards reading very little, and writing even less. At times, the approach to literature pedagogy seems to be much like getting honey from angry bees – tiptoe, keep the creatures happy and comfortable, blind them with a dense fog of popular movies and personal journaling and then expect in high school and college that you will pull out combs full of the honey that is logical, cohesive writing. If todays’ students don’t read, and are never expected to produce a rational argument based on what they read, “fun blogging” becomes not a creative tool, but a default based on the inability to think critically and write persuasively.

In the end, I see enough value in both “old” and “new” literacy that it’s difficult for me to fathom why it would be necessary to choose one over the other. No one ever flunked life because they used “I” in an objective essay, or failed to use three compound and three simple sentences in every paragraph. There is great value, and empowerment in writing freely, unencumbered by rules imposed by dead white guys. A person might, however, be unable to find success in life if she is not able to read, assimilate and explain material on a variety of subjects. The material may be digital, it may come from Wikipedia, but the rules of analysis and explication are not magically suspended in such a way that one’s personal, fluid ramblings provide a feasible substitute for formal argument. It seems entirely possible to develop pedagogy that combines the personal disclosure and freedom of blogging with the rigorous requirements of traditional academic writing. It might take mad skills, and great flexibility on the part of instructors, but it might produce a generation of writers able to express themselves in a range of styles depending on the situation.

And just to show that I was not scarred by my early training, I am ending this five-paragraph essay with a sixth paragraph. It begins with a conjunction, and so far I have not been struck dead. It is worth the risk in order to say this one, last, thing: a person can learn a lot of things in the writing process, be it blogging or the construction of a formal paper, but a person learns how to write well from reading. Accept no substitutes.

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Ann I so agree with you - my son just passed required composition - he has no future plans to be a writer, but I have future plans for him to be a logical thinker - the structure he learned is invaluable for that - I think you can't break the rules until you truly understand the rules. Great post.
Thank you Ann...I too think about the old and the new literacy. I also realize that I have been complacent and should be spending more time editing.
Your deductions about incorporating both approaches are right on. Some windy bags may be holding forth on one or the other, but the reality is that we're using both in creative and exciting ways, at least at my day job.

Your honeycomb harvest from angry bees metaphor cracked me up! More precisely, the bees are sleeping and the honeycomb is laced with empty honey-less chambers and marijuana seeds.
Illinois schools have this strict writing format that they teach that drove me crazy when my daughters were in school.

First, I told my daughters to follow the rules while in school.

Second, I told them to forget the rules after they learned them.

Finally, I think learning the structure may help to organize thoughts in the very early years, but at some point it just gets silly.

In conclusion, find your own voice.

Good post.
Right on! So well put. Thank you for sharing your very well-organized, but open-minded thoughts on this!
I couldn't agree more. Like you, I am disappointed in how little reading my high school child is assigned. She reads some on her own and that's nice.
Here here to LammChops for her point about needing to understand the rules before you can break them. It's much like jazz singing. An arranger once cautioned me to learn and truly know the original before going off the chart to improvise.
this piece isn't going to be a rate-buster here on OS, annie, but you knew that when you posted it, i bet. that's too bad, because more people who write (or try to) ought to read it, even if only for the advice that they should read more and try to figure out why reading a wonderful piece of writing *is* wonderful. some of us know it's in large part because of the way it's written, which involves structure. so i'm chiming in and voting yes with you on the "both" choice. picasso could draw a true-to-life woman (or horse or apple or ...) and practiced doing so for a long time before he moved into abstract art. same thing goes for writers. excellent work, my friend.
In a sideways manner, Prof. Davidson and those who would dump "old literacy" remind me of educators in California some 25 years ago who didn't think it was important to teach spelling to kids. The result being that however many thousands of students (my niece included) never learned to spell. Blogging is wonderful for what it is. However, replacing old literacy with informal personal blogs as an educational tool is simply foolish and a disservice to students.

If you take a quick survey of all the writing being done every day, my bet is that you'll find the majority (perhaps a large majority) to fit under one of two categories: informative or persuasive. To do either style well, you need to apply structure to be effective. You aren't going to learn the varieties of business writing in a creative writing class, but more press releases are written every day than short stories.

Ann, you can speak to this better than I -- try to imagine someone jumping from an informal writing background to being asked to write a legal brief. Take away the legal language and what's left is a step by step analysis and argument. Now witness that basic structure used by a sports writer in a column on why the home team should trade for Player X instead of Player Y.

Writing is communication. Plenty of communications aren't "fun" or "interesting," just simply formal (has that tech manual put you to sleep yet?). If educators come up with a better tool than term papers to teach structured writing, that's great. Otherwise, good luck to all those who only know the joy of blogging when it comes to writing that business plan your banker wants to see during the loan process.

The masters of old learned the rules before they broke them. And Ann, I stand right next to you -- the best way to improve your writing is to read.
Ann, this is brilliant. Mostly because I realize most days that what I learned in college wasn't Victorian poetry, or theories of modern writing, but I learned how to think. I learned how to come up with an idea, present it, and back it up. It might have taken reams of term papers to do it, but that skill alone takes me far in life, long after anyone cares what I think about Chaucer's view of women or what the Bronte sisters ate for breakfast.

Well done.
And I so agree. (or should that be "Ann, I so agree"?)

I taught myself to read and did it without regard for content (books, cereal boxes, cleanser labels). I think it taught me things I might have had difficulty with later absent a certain understanding that I came to early in my reading life (why rough, through, thought, bough, cough, and dough are all pronounced differently) Um, because.

I also learned to love the structure and beauty of writing through Hardy, and detest the metric verse of Shakespeare (it was a new language). I was sucked in by the story telling abilities of Margaret Mitchell and got so much satisfaction from kick ass fiction, Steinbeck-style.

By the time I was subjected to rote rules of reading and writing, I embraced those training wheels. I knew they lead to bigger things and I've always felt some comfort in order. I like sitting in a quiet library. But I love to stand in crashing waves and blowing wind too. There's every reason to embrace both, which you express so well here Ann.

I can no longer define 'dangling participle', but do recognize departure from what was taught as 'correct' American English. Eats, Shoots and Leaves is my punctuation Bible, but I often fall short in that area as well these days. Is punctuation changing? I think it is.

I agree with Lammchop that in order to depart with much hope of success, you have to know the rules before breaking them nicely, or should that be 'well'?

Nice palavering with you Ann! I mean great soapboxing! er... no,...neither of those observations are quite right. I'm having some difficulties with this writing thing. Okay, I'm off to take the cure by reading some more now............
* and there had to be at least ONE correction -- that would be 'led' vs. 'lead', right?
I think the importance of good academic writing in general is going the way of the dinosaurs. My husband is an adjust professor at one of the most prestigious social work graduate schools in the country, and he is routinely stunned that the majority of his students -- even ones from elite undergrad colleges -- can't put a sentence together or craft a cohesive argument. Not sure why this is happening, but it sure is sad...
I did a post yesterday about how I became a late-life "writer." The first thing I wrote was very much informed by the "old literacy." I laid out my main points I, II, III and sub-points a, b, c and it turned out well. Though I've rarely structured in such a formal way since, it's always in my mind even today.

But I love the "new literacy" freedom of starting paragraphs with a conjunction. I also agree wholeheartedly that reading is the most important element in becoming a good writer.
As far as I know "blogging", or some form of it, has already been in effect for a while in schools here. I was at the pioneering tip of it. Although blogging hasn't replaced the "old school" of teaching writing, it created a different dimension in written expression. Consequently, we evaluate students' term work based on their writing portfolios handed by them on a disc.

I agree reading is the best tool for improving one's writing. But, one needs to be comfortably intimate with the language that's to express his thoughts. Without understanding the structure of that language, the idioms, nuances, puns - the tools, one cannot write with the abandon, craft, and ease as great writers have. I justified my teaching grammar, punctuation and usage religiously - defying the curriculum of the times - as an excuse to explain to my students why they lost points. When they understood the tools needed and their importance for that much coveted poetic licence, their blogging took on a new life too.

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I love, love this post. I have to admit paragraph 6 is my personal favorite, and the blending of these two philosophies seems very feasible to me, too. Very insightful all around! ....r....
Yes, beginning a sentence with "and" is one of those taboos I long ago consigned to the dustheap of pedantry, along with ending a sentence with a preposition. Churchill, a pretty fair writer, had the perfect squelch for such nonsense when he replied that that sort of niggling criticism was something up with which he would not put.

Interesting that your blog in this case, and oftentimes, violates some of the cardinal rules of the "new literacy". One of those rules concerns the "wall of text", which holds that an online paragraph should have no more than two sentences. I routinely violate that rule.

Another cardinal rule is that one should not use compound sentences, since they apparently place too heavy a burden on the thought processes of the modern "educated" reader. I shudder to think what would happen to their television-befeebled brains if confronted by the page-long prose of Jonathan Swift or other writers of a far more literate age than ours.

That thought brings me this: I consider the new literacy more akin to the old illiteracy, since it too often lacks the most basic elements of good writing, elements such as punctuation. I dealt with this in my post Pardon My Punctuation, in which I referred to the untimely death of the comma.

You are quite right that the best way to learn to write is by reading good writing. But in our post-literate age, fewer and fewer young people read anything, let alone books by good writers. Instead of Homer's Iliad, we have Homer Simpson; instead of Henry Fielding we have Facebook, and instead of Tristram Shandy, we have Texting and Twitter.

We have traded Miss Persnickety, the old-maid school-marm with her glasses on a chain, for MS Word, with its ever-intrusive paper-clip instructing us about grammar. And we have traded spelling for spellcheck.

The result? LOL.
As a new substitute teacher full of my new authority and certified charge to guard the gates of civilization from the barbaric hordes I was hoisting my red pen to mark your paper with a big fat F when I saw the "And" and counted the paragraphs. Then, as I lowered the pen slowly into position, I read the 6th paragraph and came to my senses.
I am all for the evolution of language and grammar, but teachers...unless you want all of your students to graduate talking and writing like me, lord please do not give up on making them write cogent papers. There will be holdouts, but I would have to hire someone else if I ever needed to publish something in a nursing journal. Think about how sad that is. I write for fun daily, and there is no possible way I could write something a journal would even look at beyond the second paragraph.

and I read alot too-reading does not teach grammar. There are too many oral interactions that cancel out the good influence of reading.
I find your distinction between writing well (learned from lots of reading) and thinking and arguing clearly (requires some discipline, probably from a teacher) an interesting one. I never thought of it that way.

But I'm thinking that ultimately really good writing, including creative writing, has an underlying logic and organization, if not always the 5 graf structure.

I think it's the writer's job to make the point, not the reader's job to sift through the writer's ramblings to discern what the heck the writer thinks -- when the writer hasn't bothered to figure it for herself before setting pen to paper, er ... fingertips to keyboard.

Thanks for this!
Like this a lot. Davidson is all about new media, almost to a fault. I get tired of these either/or contrast arguments. I like the comparison, and would also like to think that education has room for both new and old ways of learning.
A good blog is the result of spelling, grammar, vocabulary, informative reading, illustrations, and practice writing. As others pointed out, term papers require time, research, effort, examining evidence, logic, and you don't get practice putting all that together in a creative blog. I have met people I think have the vocabulary of third graders but without the curiosity and energy that even third graders can bring to a discussion. It's not that print is dead, but English might be dying for our education-starved citizens.
Why do we assume that blogging assignments imply writing without rules?
The 5 paragraph essay exists because it teaches several lessons:

Define and state your point. (Topic sentence.). Expand it a bit (para 1).

Have some evidence/ideas to support your point. (paras 2,3,4) Make them flow (transition sentences). Define and state each supporting point (first sentences of paras 2,3,4)

Sum up clearly. (Para 5).

Note, defining and stating your point, supporting it, and summing up smoothly are the things that have to be learned. It doesn't matter if it is in the context of a letter to a congressman, a blog, business proposal or a 5 para essay.

If the structure of a logical argument is maintained, calling it a blog post is fine, but if we are exchanging writing a cohesive argument for ramblings about my life, then students are in trouble.

When you drop stuff, kids have to learn it on their own, which increases the divide between the kids with literate, educated parents who can help their kid when they need to write a logical, well-supported essay and have no clue how to do it and kids with parents who can't help.

And ultimately, whether the 5 para essay is flexible or not has to do with the teacher. I'm sure blogging can be taught badly, too.
There's only one rule in writing: communicate. One can follow all the "rules" for communicating but still not communicate. But it's far easier to focus on rules than actual competent writing.
I couldn't agree more, and I am "old school" as well. Better yet, I went to Catholic school where not reading was seen as despicable as as breaking a commandment. The love of reading is necessary for good writing.
Perhaps if any of the Republican candidates for President had learned some basic writing and research skills, they might have something to say that the rest of us could understand and support. Alas, this does not seem to be the case, they all come across as uneducated. Thanks for your post.
As I was instructed long, long ago, a verbal presentation or a written essay should follow this structure: 1) tell them what you're going to tell them, 2) tell them, 3) tell them what you told them. And, without any "um's", "you know's", or "like's"!
As a former high school teacher, I say as long as no one includes, "I am going to write about," or, "This paragraph will be about," I'm cool.
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