Athena Bradford

Athena Bradford
Location
Atlanta, Georgia, US
Birthday
November 07
Bio
Athena Bradford is a writer, explorer, researcher, and the author of “The Intelligent Woman’s Guide to Vibrators.” She suffers from delusions of candor and longs for days when there is no embargo on pleasure.

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SEPTEMBER 4, 2009 6:43PM

Words Become You

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Your words set in motion

six months of savory days and

liquid nights that poured over me like icing

On a gingerbread house.

 

Stories rolled off your tongue

like Maypole ribbons, and I tethered

myself to your mast and grew

tangled in the strands.

 

You wove spells as you wrestled with

Donne, elegies full of  satire

And sparks, striking

flint upon my pavement

 

And I fell in love

Beguiled by your whispers

And your lines, which pierced

My heart like inky tattoos.

.

I exclaimed Hurrah!

And tried to build rafters

Around your prose, but they

Could not hold me.

 

Our parting was swift and silent

After all those words, no explanation was forthcoming

future perfect dissolved into imperfect tense

I was left with remembered conversations and

A dowry of dreams

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pretty... and extra points for talking about icing... and gingerbread... :)
"remembered conversations and a dowry of dreams" - wow - just wow.
'word pimp'... Hmm, guess that makes me, what, a john? Because I'd like more please.
so many thoughts and no words to say...
Beautiful use of semantics. :-) I loved it.
Lately, the word that has become me far too often is "fuck". As in, "these fucking RWNJ's are driving me fucking nuts."
I wish they would stop, so I can.
RATED
I want what you had the good and the remembered conversations, heartbreak, all of it. It is so much better than nothing, and this is lovely. Thank you.
Stories like maypole ribbons! What a lovely image. Rated.
Beautiful.

Rated,but of course!
A touching tribute to the power of the right words, by one who know how to masterfully employ them herself. rated
poetry should withstand, if not demand, re-reading. this does. props to you, athena.
To use your words to describe the effects of your words: "I grew tangled in the strands."
Breathtaking and beautifully written. Wow is right.
You are a master of this art form and ironically, somehow its mistress, too. Just gorgeous.
wow, do you have a way with words...
Ooooh do I ever like "future perfect dissolved into imperfect tense"; not as an experience, of course, but definitely as a turn of phrase...
Oh my! Your poetry is such a treat; tactile and flowing like the finest fabric. This was so lovely. I look forward to reading more.
"After all those words, no explanation was forthcoming
future perfect dissolved into imperfect tense
I was left with remembered conversations and
A dowry of dreams"

Wow, did you just describe a piece of my life to a T! Someday I may even heal completely from it. One can hope.
I really, really like this one.

I know, not a poetic tribute; I'm sorry. It's Munday.
like Emily Dickenson. rated.
so well-crafted.

"future perfect dissolved into imperfect tense "

ugh. isn't that the truth sometimes.
i love your weaving of words. beautiful