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"Nel mezzo del cammin di nostra vita," I find myself still asking some of the same questions I did when I was just a punk kid. The Big Things confuse me. Fortunately, though, many little things delight and amuse me, and some Big Things--my wife, our kids, our bird and bunny visitors, food, baseball--make me very, very happy. In my pilgrimage, I try to be guided by the wisdom of dear old Auntie Mame: "Life is a banquet!"

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APRIL 8, 2010 9:11AM

Creekside Spring Soundscape

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Tired, we cut short the normal walk and drooped onto the bench that sits 10 or 12 feet above the creek, nestled in a tree-surrounded asylum a few feet from the edge of the bank. The bench is placed several feet away from the walking and biking path our feet normally travel; as it faces away from the path and toward the creek, it is easy, when sitting there, to ignore any foot traffic or bicycle wheels that pass by.

 

Feeling detached from the world of the path was even easier that day, as there were few feet or wheels disturbing it. We had come to the park late in the day, and the human population was sparse.

 

Midday brilliance had given way to some cloudiness, which combined with the fading light of the sun and the emerging leaves to muffle sight: images had no sharpness, putting us in Monet’s suggestive contemplation, not Caravaggio’s stark drama.  

No, not Monet, either. There was little shimmer of color in the fading day. In truth, we sat with Respighi, for all the color there by the creek was auditory, ancient airs inducing natural feet to dance. Only nature’s feet followed the tune: the forgotten path behind us was untrodden, the dull murmur of distant traffic that can sometimes be heard from the spot absent. The layers of sound were all natural.

 

The first layer was the birds, unaware that day was ending and intent on making their mating music. Or, perhaps, they were primping before a night out with their lady loves—or, rather, as the ladies of Spain would promenade in the nineteenth century, coyly displaying their attractions to the admiring caballeros, though in truth there was nothing coy about the cardinals’ bright music: they were proud of their pipes, unabashed in their self-expression. Maybe they were all teens on one of those good, non-acne days: flush with hormones and brimming with confidence.

Most of the birdsong seemed to emanate from the opposite side of the creek, our ease at hearing them combining with our inability to make the birds out visually to reinforce the auditory, not visual, aspect of the scene.  

A kingfisher, unbidden, rattled sporadically. He was probably not a-courtin’ as much as he was searching for some take-out.  Chickadees chattered cheerfully, and robins rocked their songs of romance. Ducks and geese were staying away, perhaps knowing that their size would make them visible, and that would violate the moment’s feel, perhaps sensing that their deeper tones would not suit the lightness of the sound layers.

As we listened under the birdsong, we could hear the water. The creek here generally has a slow, soundless, and stately flow, but about twenty feet downstream from the bench, and on the opposite shore, a feeder stream enters the creek. The stream’s channel is hidden by tufts of growth, and the point of juncture is not clearly visible from the bench, so we could only hear this joining, this blending of creative juices.  Because of the many spring rains we’ve had, this and all the other feeder streams were still running fast. Over the years, in its fullest times, the stream had carted stones along its flow and deposited them in a long train where it joined the creek. Thus, on this day, we could hear the water from the stream bounce over this stony area, and even make out three distinct sounds: the bright melody of stream over stone, the deeper continuo of the larger creek as it flowed over the stone, and the harmonic gurgle of the two streams blending.

 

Burbling brook, babbling birds: all familiar sounds, however magical. But a new layer emerged, one less common: a throbbing chorus of frogs chanting in the wetlands of the opposite shore, calling their yearning, proclaiming their need, filling the air with ranid wanting.

 

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" Monet’s suggestive contemplation,"-Pilgrim, you certainly have a craft with words that bring art and your keen obeservations of nature's beauty so well into your writing. Love the final paragraph as it sumps up this beautiful piece perfectly. Rated.
Wow! That's a keeper. Copy and get a cop to shoot jailbird walker in the woods, dead? Can I copy and walk slowly with this Post? It reminded me of much ...
But there is a Southern song about Charlie and down at the creek. I heard it by `The Speakeasy Boys, from Shepharstown, West Virginia. It was done by a violin. If you know of it? I'd sure love to hear it again.
It was performed at my daughters wedding last Sept 12. on and on. Thanks. reread.
You could be writing about walking you dog and make it sound like it was the greatest thing on earth. I love your writing!
You described this so well. Life always feels peaceful when I am immersed in the sounds and sights of my fellow critters. The past several days, I have stopped on my morning walk route to watch two chickadees building a nest inside a hole in a rotten flowering cherry branch. Doing that has set the tone of my day. Nothing seems to stress after that.
As I read this I wondered if you would mention the frogs. I went for a bike ride with my daughter last Sunday in a nature preserve nearby and the trill of the frogs was symphonic in the creek-side wetlands. I tried to record them with my Blackberry but to no avail. You just had to be there, and I was so glad I was.

Great piece, Pilgrim.
It is the mark of a good writer that you can bring the sounds of the forest alive for the reader and allow them to "hear" those sounds as they read the entry. This is one of the best crafted blog entries I have read in a long time, my friend.
Thanks for taking me along with you on this delightful walk. It's amazing how your words can make it all come alive.
ranid wanting indeed! how fine the prose, thank you!
Pilgrim, you made me hear it, all of it. Beautiful. Thank you
You have a knack for bringing the simple things so alive in your writing. Wish I had your skill.
I can see the painterly colors of your nature travels.
I wish I could sit, too, still the chaos in my head and just listen.
Fusun: You're very gracious, ma'am. Thank you.

Elisa: You are also sweet to say such nice things!

Art: Not sure if it's a keeper or if it was spring peepers. . . . But sure that I appreciate your words. Don't know the song, but a violin would have fit well by the creek, I think: the birds would have enjoyed it. Thank you!

scanner: 'Cept I don't have a dog, so that would be a real challenge! Thank you, sir: very kind.

greenheron: Good thing to do, to stop and watch. Especially chickadees--they're so cheerful. They speak to us so happily out in the backyard, it's like being greeted by kids.

Smithery: Sounds like a wonderful experience, especially as you shared it. Glad I didn't disappoint you here.

Torman: Giving the quality that's been coming out lately, I am truly honored. *Bowing.*

patricia: Thanks for coming along: I just record what I see and hear and feel.

dianaani: Fine compliment! Thanks!

next: I'm glad it came through: it was a very refreshing pause.

Spuds: Wow! I think you underestimate yourself--but I also thank you!

Caroline: Usually when I paint, I just spatter. Ask Mrs. P (check out walls . . . )

vanessa: It's difficult when you have kids that have to be dealt with: we went a couple of decades without regular walking. Perhaps this summer you can slow down some?
Oh, I love the frogs . . . sometimes they get so loud you can barely hear yourself think . . . and I love it.
Very vivid, I love this. I must spend more time outside...
I just love how you talk, how you see and hear beauty.
I've read this several times and love the brush strokes and layers you've accomplished with words.
I've exhausted all of my superlatives in commenting on your writing, so I will simply say - thank you. I loved it.
Owl: They were so chipper! and charming

She Blogs: Welcome to the Pilgrimage, and thank you. Hope you do and that you enjoy.

LL2: "How you talk": yeah, for a non-Irish guy, I got plenty of blarney . . . Thanks, really.

scupper: Thank you for being so attentive: an honor.

Andy: Stop, you'll make my head big(ger)! At the risk of exposing my ego, I'll say "You're very welcome, and thank you!"
You have given a symphony of bird song within an Impressionist's landscape. Nice.
Good work, Pilgrim. Not an easy thing to do, writing about sound, especially the sounds of nature. And you've managed a kind of rhetorical sonata here. Plus, I learned a new word: "ranid."
Scarlett: Don't forget the frogs! Thanks.

T Michael: Actually, it was supposed to be rancid . . . . Thank you, also: very nice things you say.
You have a calming voice in your writing sometimes that fits so well with a walk like this.
Totally enjoyed it!
JD: That's much appreciated. Much of the past couple of years for me has been trying to learn to slow down.