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"Nel mezzo del cammin di nostra vita," I find myself still asking some of the same questions I did when I was just a punk kid. The Big Things confuse me. Fortunately, though, many little things delight and amuse me, and some Big Things--my wife, our kids, our bird and bunny visitors, food, baseball--make me very, very happy. In my pilgrimage, I try to be guided by the wisdom of dear old Auntie Mame: "Life is a banquet!"

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SEPTEMBER 17, 2011 8:12AM

Autumn Lament: A Chilling Sonnet

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Now comes new season for no good reason,
Indian summer days just made to tease ‘un.
Yes, fall has colors bright and slanting light,
Tempting playoff delights deep into night.
Autumn, withal, makes Pilgrim’s spirits fall
When acute shadows fall across the wall,
When closed window locks confine him in box,
And chill air’s knocks compel outrage of socks.
Angry scream then shatters midsummer’s dream,
Faces that beam when tasting night ice cream.
As weather wetter makes him wear sweater
He thinks swelt’ring days surpassing better.
            Summer’s enwrapping heat cannot be beat:
            Its freeing gift, the treat of naked feet.

 

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A little the opposite for me I'm afraid. I found myself lamenting the warmer weather down here today. I just wasn't quite ready for it to hit yet.

I certainly got your disdain for socks from your sonnet, Pilgrim. Very chilling!
Totally agree: the golden shout of July and the humid hug of August are "surpassing better." Nifty sonnet, AHP: delightful it its play with language, yet wrapped around a look at what's ahead that I can relate to.
46 degrees yesterday morning, 51 today. I, too, do not want the closed window or the sock, but even more than those, the 4:30 p.m. darkness.
I do love Fall and Spring both. These two seasons offer respite between Summer and Winter's extremes.
i love your poem because it's a good poem and it's you and i laugh at your sock-hating rants every time you make one, but i'm ripping summer off like a sweaty blanket the instant i'm sure it's not coming back for a year. mmmmmmm, socks. and booooooooots. nirvana.
It's never easy for the tropical at heart to submit to socks.
I try to keep my feet free until the snow flies. I will think of your lovely sonnet as they begin to freeze.
rated with love
Itchy wool pedal prisons,
Why do you slide down
to bunch around my toes?

Too cool for sheets alone now
But too warm for quilts
Make up your mind, autumn nights!

rated!
I am just so happy to see leaves from my fruitless mulberry across my truck hood every morning..Sorry...maybe try funny socks that make you laugh :)
You describe with such graceful flow the very things I consider during this season change. Simply magnificent poem. R
Kate: Perhaps what I need to do is live every six months in alternate hemispheres!

Jerry: "the golden shout of July and the humid hug of August"--well said! (Though our August this year was so humid as to be absolutely dripping. Didn't wish to be hugged by that!)

heron: Indeed, the absolute worst is the 4:30 darkness!

Tor: I'm with you--on Spring.

Candace: I think your summer was more difficult to endure than ours, and I'm happy for you that you're pointed towards relief. To each, as they say, his or her own.

catch: If I had a truly tropical heart, wouldn't I have some sense of rhythm?

Rom P: Your toes are remarkably stalwart then! I'm getting cold just thinking about them getting cold!

Shiral: Brilliant! Ha! "Itchy wool pedal prisons" is sooooo true!!

LL: Maybe that would be the answer!

Michelle: Thank you for saying such lovely things. To warmth!!
Sounds like a plan, Mr P!!!

: )