Blinddream

One Tree Short Of A Forest

Blinddream

Blinddream
Location
Mississippi, United States of America
Birthday
February 08
Title
An Ordinary Soul
Company
if they leave early
Bio
"Under the circumstances... are more circumstances." Born and raised in Wisconsin...23 years in Upstate New York and retired in Mississippi. Viet Nam 69-70 44th Scout Dog Platoon 25th Division Printer of magazines for 30 years. Published Poet. All pieces posted are original works of mine therefore copywritten. These pieces are soley for the reader's enjoyment and cannot be reproduced without the author's consent.

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AUGUST 29, 2012 9:19AM

Storm

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Storm

The birds act peculiar
as the clouds pass
in several layers, colors, speed.

Strange behaviors on the wind,
as if an orchestra was gathering;
each player taking their seat,
tuning the instrument of choice,
creating the ambiance of loose correlation
just before the ensemble
breaks into a fevered symphony;
storm.

Blinddream 08/2012

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Tuning up for the big entrance. Yikes!
Excellent metaphor.
ambiance of loose correlation
just before then ensemble
breaks into a fevered symphony;
storm.


is a good grasp on the metaphorical (human)
reality & odd teleology of the natural world.
some say: nature is to be imitated,
while
the reality is: we , natural beings, provide
natural metaphors.

storms.
Isaac,Aug.2012,"fevered symphony",the finale is yet to be seen.

Rated
'Peculiar' is a wonderful choice! You capture this moment so well. /R
thanks all...we're getting hammered by the storm today.
keep yer head down,man,good luck...