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SEPTEMBER 16, 2009 12:46PM

Watching Leonard Cohen’s Concert from Earls Court, London

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Watching Leonard Cohen’s Concert from Earls Court, London on PBS

 

Suzanne takes you down

to a place by the river

touch her with your mind

 

He stands on the stage, band off to the side, leaving him by himself.  He is rumpled.  He wears a dark fedora, jacket and slacks, a white dress shirt the only relief; a lighthouse beam interrupting the dark. 

 

your faith was strong but

you needed the proof she gave

the Hallelujah

 

He grips the microphone tightly, strong, wrinkled fingers wrapped around it like a baseball bat.  His other hand cups the mike, directing his words, channeling them, protecting them—from what?—like a tenuous flickering flame of a match struck in the wind.

 

ponies run, girls young

you win a while, then it’s done

thousand kisses deep

 

He crouches in a boxer’s stance—prepared to run, perhaps to dance?  The twinkle in his eye suggests that he knows, but no one else.  Then he opens his mouth in growly baritone and sings of truth and love and life.

 

dance me to beauty

dance me to the end of love

dance me on and on

 

© 2009, Kenneth M. Rhodes

NB:  The haiku verses are my arrangements of, and were inspired by, lyrics of Leonard Cohen's songs.  No copyright protection of these lines is claimed by me.

 

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Your prose is beautiful, very image packed. I see the scene perfectly. The links of haiku don't speak to me personally, probably because I don't know Cohen's music as well as you do, so there's information I don't have.
Love Leonard Cohen. Suzanne indeed.
beautiful. i was lucky enough to see his concert here at Red Rocks...was one of the most beautiful experiences i have had.

thank you for reminding me of these moments.
This was so well done Ken. Thanks for sharing it.
Ken, I don't know of anyone who can paint a word picture with the clarity that you do. It was almost as if I were standing there in person, watching him perform. Thanks for this my friend, you are truly on top your game with this entry.
Thanks for letting us have a glimpse of this wondrous experience with you.
I watched it too but your prose makes me feel as if I was actually there! It was a marvelous concert and a rediscovering of older talent.
It's a great concert, but maybe you also need to credit the lyrics to Cohen since you copyrighted the post for yourself.
I was at that concert and it was an amazing performance. He is somethin' special
I was introduced to Leonard Cohen's various works by a close friend—just about a year ago—and would treasure the opportunity to see him perform. Your haibun is clever and artist—What a creative way to share the experience!