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CarolinaBlue50

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SEPTEMBER 20, 2009 4:43PM

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desire dawning, softly demanding

arm draped around your waist, caressing

cotton dress descending floorward

fingers stroking swelling curves

silken sheets cool on flesh

mouths open, hungry

tongues dance wetly

bodies join

passion

love

kiss1

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Wow! Great imagery my friend. Let me put it another way....I read this and really got my motor running, now I gotta see if I sneak up on Mel!

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David McClain

September 20, 2009 05:01 PM

Wow. That's very good, eloquent stuff. I can write almost anything except erotica. I'm just way too embarrassed to "go there" in my writing. I've made a few attempts but they always get torn into many, tiny pieces and flushed down the loo!

Eva T. Made Vaudeville

September 20, 2009 05:46 PM

Is it hot in here or am I just having a flash? :) Niceeeeee.

R

KristyCC

September 20, 2009 06:03 PM

I really like this one

Caroline Hagood

September 20, 2009 06:09 PM

Beautifully written, Ken.
Rated.

Unbreakable

September 20, 2009 06:51 PM

I haven't smoked in almost two years, but for some reason or another I feel the urge. Sexy!

wind in my wings

September 20, 2009 09:39 PM

Aw . . . I miss Hubby!

LadyMiko

September 20, 2009 09:44 PM

A very sensual etheree. It's been far too long (since I've composed a poem). Time to get the (creative) juices flowing!

Skye Writer

September 20, 2009 11:30 PM

Torman-- I called and warned her!

Eva-- Thank you. I'm not sure I'd call this "erotica"... maybe I'd just whisper it...

Kristy-- Thanks!

Caroline-- From a poet such as yourself, I'm very pleased! Thank you.

UB-- I appreciate you!

Winda-- I remember seeing a T-shirt once: "Let's enjoy the three finest things in life-- champagne before, and a cigarette after!"

Lady Miko-- I'm sorry...

Skye-- Oh-so-naughty double-entendre... ;-)