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SEPTEMBER 24, 2009 4:15PM

September

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It’s September—it has to be:

the calendar on the wall, the one you like

with pastoral photos of the Irish

countryside on every page,

says so.

But walk outside to the low growl of

air-conditioning units and see

children running in shorts

with no shirts

and the woman who delivers the mail

from a pushcart mopping her brow

with a ruby bandana.

 

I’m tired of summer—I’m weary

of life at its peak, of days

filled with sunshine, of spontaneous

gaity and ribs charring on the grill

and cold beer and the latest gossip

exchanged over backyard fences.

 

I long for autumn—a time of change,

a time for contemplation and regret,

of things winding down and tied together,

of roaring fires and cold northerly winds

that speak of end times and desolation

and upcoming winter that

will not be followed by the rebirth

of spring

this time.

 

 Words (c) 2009, Kenneth M. Rhodes

23 September 2009

 

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Being a lover of the sun and summertime, I never thought I would find myself agreeing with you on this subject...but I do. I am actually ready for summer to be done.

Rated.
Understanding your feeling about summer and your appreciation of autumn; hoping for you that you're wrong about spring.
This is sad. Summer is my favorite season, but I'm always ready for it to go. But I really hate winter, and the older I get the more I hate it. Course, down here winter is mild. But you can't know the beauty of spring without the bleakness of winter. Beautiful poem, you are so talented. Who knew? :)
The imagery is vivid; the sentiments yearning and yet resigned. Autumn has always been my favorite season — I wish it could be October year round.
A good welcome to September
Living in a country that rarely has more than a few weeks of summer, autumn is just a reminder of the long, cold, dark days ahead. Why can't sunshine be shared equally?

Lovely poetry however.
I'm feeling ready for Autumn this year, too, but it has less to do with the weather than the fact that Summer was disappointing. Your poem is very deep and lovely. Thanks for helping us usher in this new season with some good food for thought.
I am So with you. Especially this year.
I hear ya... fall is my favorite season. If you drop by my place, I've got a poem you might like: A Sensual Soughing.
Darn it... I forgot one thing. Great post, great writing!
This is a beautiful poem. Worthy of an EP if poetry ever made it to the cover. I loved the imagery in "the latest gossip exchanged over backyard fences." Thank you for sharing.