
Like those screen savers of pipes connecting
Popping in and out, here and there,
Purple, green, gold, scarlet,
No place and every place at once
My heart seeks yours, finds the thread
Cats cradle twisting, holding hands, intertwined

I lost it to you, you were persistent,
Always showing up, me wondering
What on earth did you want, why me
Until finally I saw myself in your eyes
The object of your desire and found it
Stepping off the cliff into another universe

Stardust combines, recombined
Nothing is ever lost, just reborn
Incarnation, reincarnation, carnal
Carbon, redeemed by love again
When those strings tear my heart
Then I will follow its thread home



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Always showing up, me wondering
What on earth did you want, why me"
Pitch perfect! Nice.
I wrote something you might find cute awhile back -
http://open.salon.com/blog/toritto/2011/08/07/geek_love_a_poem
Drop by it when you're in the mood.
:-)
I lost it to you, you were persistent,
Always showing up, me wondering
What on earth did you want, why me..who better?.
Until finally I saw myself in your eyes
The object of your desire and found it
Stepping off the cliff into another universe
yes that is where the damn action is, apparently..arg.. : )
I use to wire color-coded computer board forms.
Honest
Maybe that's why I am tempted to ditch my gadget.
The old day wiring was tedious. Wires were pretty.
You solder
The wires:
`
red/blue
green/slate
black/white
yellow/red
and on\on
The wires were tiny and had to be tied with a wax-string.
I had a brief job with the Tote Company. It's too global?
The American Totalizator Co. did race-track odd-boards.
It was an interesting job. My dream isn't a red war puddle.
Thanks
I mean it.
I'll go buy?
I best not.
No beers.
Sip H20.
`
in a Dallas bar
a Austin woman
flirts with cowboy
`
rated with love
Nothing is ever lost, just reborn
Just like Zanelle's blog.
So well done and always nice to see writers working together.
HUGGGGGGG
.....................................................
.........., redeemed by love again"
That really hit home with me. A beautiful poem, darling cc!
♥
Nice words and ... strings.
"Stardust combines, recombined
Nothing is ever lost, just reborn"
Carl Sagan said we are all stardust. I like that.
Thank you for this wonderful poem.
r
well done!