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JANUARY 2, 2009 11:26AM

Obama: When No One Is Watching

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(Repost from October 2008) 

 

Malia Obama probably wasn’t sure if her Dad would make it home from work to watch her soccer game this past Friday night. 

He’s been pretty busy lately.

But her Mom and her little sister would be there.  

The flow of the kids moving the ball down the field, under the lights of a chilly night in October. The families chatting on the sidelines. The starlight glow of downtown Chicago rising up from the north.  Malia Obama at mid field shouts “Mom!” And the smile, grace, and presence of the woman whose eyes never once leave her daughter---no matter who else she speaks to, waves back and sends a radiant smile. 

In that one wave and smile, you see hope come alive before your very eyes. 

Then just a few minutes after eight; something like a shift in earth’s gravity occurs. To the casual observer, nothing in this scene has changed. That pull of the earth’s power must have been imagined. 

The true city dweller will feel it first, before they even see it.  Blink your eyes and they appear. 

Ringing the shadows of this soccer field are people with guns. Serious people with guns. Like oak trees that move. The phrase, “Not on my watch” flashes through your head.  

You have to look hard to make sure they are even there.   You never really see a gun.   You’re not even sure they are moving.  But when you blink your eyes, somehow their positions have changed.  Something about the way they just appear calms your breathing.

Instinctively you know.  These are the good guys.  

With that feeling of true safety pressed firmly in your very soul; you can remember the real secret at the heart of the city: we of the city are just a million small town kid's soccer game scenes all strung together.   So the kids laugh and kick the soccer ball. 

Then some guy in a blue cap walks out of the gym next door.

Hands in his pocket, face down, by himself. He walks over to Malia’s Mom, who has 3 conversations going on simultaneously with folks on the sidelines.

The quiet  guy in the blue cap puts his arm around Malia’s Mom. Shakes hands with a couple of the people.  Talks with Malia’s Mom for a minute or two. 

Just then a small miracle occurs.  The quiet guy in the blue cap who nobody in the crowd of really paid all that much attention to; scrunches down so he is face to face with Malia’s little sister Sasha. He lifts up the brim on the cap.

And then, standing in shadows behind Sasha you see what she’s seeing up close.  You see that smile. That smile that resounds with the very power and the glory of the city lights behind it.   That smile now almost ready to take it's place in American history. 

You can’t hear, and are happy not to hear, what he’s saying to his youngest daughter.   But you do hear her giggle. 

The father takes the daughter’s hand. The younger daughter. The one who is not in the game. The one who by all rights and purposes and measures any of us know at this time in our history---was destined not to get a lot of attention tonight. 

They move back deeper into the shadows, behind the sideline crowd. Still watched by that quiet show of force here to keep them absolutely safe.   

Then the miracle: they have a foot race.  

While the soccer game is still going on. Just the two of them. Sasha and her Dad take off together, both running at full speed, as fast and then faster then either of them could ever imagine. Sasha laughing, and laughing at the finish line. Her Dad swoops down and picks her up. 

Then that smile. This time only for his daughter. It was just for her. 

His youngest daughter’s giggle. It’s the music of his promise to make sure that everyone’s included. 

And this past Friday night in Chicago: Malia Obama’s team won the game. 

 

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Yes!!!
Your 25 post revealed you to be a humble and completely loveable man.
Thank you O'Steph--I was asked to repost this and out of curiousity did a search on the title. I found it had been picked up by several other blogs---some implying authorship. So it was exciting to find I had written something somebody wanted to steal! I also found this piece on the Drudge report---so I thought I better put it back where it belongs on OS. It will be part of the book I'm currently writing--
I never get tired of that ...
Excellent :) Excellent :) Excellent :)
I loved this post when you first put it up and I love it as much now. Thanks for finding it and putting it back on. It's a treasure and one that I will save and reread during the coming months.
Hey Tarheeltoker---thank you. Kerry actually did ask me where it went---so NO editorial complaints from me.

John Hammond was a genius---thanks for the tip on the piece!
I am SO glad that you put this up for me to read (I wasn't around in its first go round). I'm happier still that the editors got it right. This is a wonderful piece that deserves being the pick. Rated and proud to call you friend.
Roger, I remember this post, and I loved it the first time I read it back in October of last year. Yes, Malia's team won that soccer game, and her father's team won his big game a few weeks later...thank God! Well, Barack and his family will spend their last two days as residents of Chicago today and tomorrow before they will be living in Washington, D.C for (hopefully) the next 8 years. The Windy City has lost its finest family as they now become the nation's "first family." Paul
Good post, Roger. NO...great one!

The people who stole it..or stole from it...were paying you a great compliment...

...damn 'em!
One of my top ten as well. Glad to have it back.
Did you complain to whoever hosts the stolen blog?

Thumbed AND bookmarked. Don't let it slide off OS again!
Thanks IM, Frank, Cartouche, Paul, O'Kathryn and --especially L&P.

From what I could tell the person who claimed authorship got it off a blogger in Brooklyn---who did attribute it to OS. So no, I didn't complain because I knew if there was any more trouble---Frank would go pay the guy a visit and set him straight!
Marvelous post, Roger. I loved it in October, and I love it all over again now.

Now that the new year is in, I can hardly wait until the Obamas move into their new home! Eighteen days left...
Roger, you have a good eye for other writers, now it's time to learn is how good--often GREAT--your own work is. You mentioned on Kerry's post you hadn't felt this was one of your better efforts... jeez, dude. It's exceptional in every way, the precise choice of words, the graceful flow, the set up and the punch line, the descriptions of the people, especially those amazing descriptions of the Secret Service and of father and daughter... the quiet inner corner of a huge picture. All brought to life in your words.

Bravo for turning the everyday into the extraordinary. Which, come to think of it, is you. :)
What a wonderful glimpse into the "private" life of our Great Black Hope! Your story confirms my instincts about the guy....and boy, I hope what you see is what we get! Thanks for sharing this simple hour.
Here I am, Roger, the first and (for now at least) the last commentor. Over here to grab for redecorating my blog site. rearranging my lists and have a list called My Best of Others. You lead with this post.
It is perfect.