Colleen Claes

Colleen Claes
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January 08
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Freelance Writer
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I'm a freelance writer and blogger when I'm not working 9 to 5. I graduated in 2009 with a B.A. in film and screenwriting. I'm particularly interested in the intersection of media (usually film) and culture. I've contributed to Examiner.com as the Chicago Cult Classics Examiner and have been interviewed by USA Today for my film expertise. I write at a few other places (both for myself and other people), which you find below My Links.

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FEBRUARY 23, 2011 1:01AM

Why ‘The Social Network’ Should Win Best Screenplay Oscar

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People have said a lot of things about The Social Network. That it’s sexist, that it’s not true to the real story, that it makes Mark Zuckerberg out to be someone he’s not, etc. But the one thing no one really can say is that it’s bad. It is widely accepted as a brilliant film directed by David Fincher, starting with a one-of-a-kind script by Aaron Sorkin that seems to remind us of the power a screenplay can and should have. Even the actors are in awe of it to this day, rarely ever going an interview without mentioning how great the script was to begin with.

“Dialogue” is the buzz word you hear most often when there’s talk of Sorkin’s screenplay. This praise followed shortly after we watched the film and witnessed these young actors rattling off witty conversations we all wished we could come up with in real life. (Especially the famous “9 pages of dialogue” opening scene.) Then they released the PDF of the original screenplay online just before the Oscars (indeed, it’s up for “Best Adapted Screenplay”), and now all that’s left to do is sit back and marvel. Because it’s one thing to hear good dialogue; it’s another to get straight-up schooled by a master.

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While reading, I was only at page 28 when I realized that it’s not Sorkin’s style alone that sets it apart as an amazing script. What struck me is that he doesn’t just write, he navigates – and flawlessly at that. It is loud and clear how the film needs to play out, how the actors need to deliver even a mere one or two words, when the camera is supposed to move, where exactly the editor is supposed to cut, but in an advanced kind of way that is more precise and frantic than most writers could envision – however, it remains a smooth ride throughout nonetheless.

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Sorkin may sound self-deprecating in interviews, but the writing knows better: Within its pages, Sorkin is like an assured, knowledgeable tour guide who can talk while walking backwards without tripping once. Not even once.

If the whole Social Network package is a well-oiled machine, then the script is the machine, with everything else happening to fall into place as “the oil,” helping it work as it was meant to work. In the end, everything was delivered the way it was intended. There’s no second-guessing or doubts between the pages, and it’s as effortlessly captivating of a read as it is onscreen. Sorkin’s writing voice is as confident as his main characters, and the result? The Social Network as a complete film struts in such a way that you can’t blame it. This should not only win the Academy Award this year, it should set the standard for the rest of the film industry.

As for the best part? This did it for me:

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it did win at Bafta and am happy. good movie, a tale well told, casting that was pretty good nearly everyone fit the role perfectly - loved the post. perhaps this one should be an EP :) rated.
So what does that look in your avatar say?
I loved this movie for its dialogue. And its portrayal of an idea that turned into a social revolution. The acting and the dialogue was superb. Who knew Justin Timberlake could be such a great actor? He was perfect for the role.
I loved this movie for its dialogue. And its portrayal of an idea that turned into a social revolution. The acting and the dialogue was superb. Who knew Justin Timberlake could be such a great actor? He was perfect for the role.
Enjoyed this report. Now I'm gonna download the screenplay... Thanks.
glad you did get the EP.
Thanks everyone for the comments! I highly recommend reading the whole thing if you haven't yet - totally worth it.
I downloaded this movie with my Roku last week. The sound was somewhat out of whack (or my hearing is) and I couldn't make out all the dialogue. The opening scene was riveting, even not knowing what their exact words were. I then ordered the DVD from Netflix and watched it again, just to hear every word. That is the first time in my life I have ever watched a movie twice.
Nothing like a well oiled screenplay to remind what a high art writing for the cinema is. Economy of words. So much said in such little time. thanks
Have you read or seen "The King's Speech?" Comparisons?
Yeah, but it's about a real event, and it's a pack of half-truths. So...eh.

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I really enjoyed this movie for the dialog as well , as for the camera directions and editor cuts I think they were included because what was released was a shooting script which is different from other preliminary versions of a script,,, none the less the banter between erica and mark in the first pages set the tone and excellent pace of this movie..
white and black - Interesting point. I'm aware of the difference in script stages. I was trying to search everywhere to see whether or not this was the script that floated around in pre-production or during/after production. All I found was an interview (linked above) that states he INDEED wrote the cuts in there, and it took him a lonnnnng time to figure out how to structure it that way. Not sure about the camera movements, but they feel organic to me, as if they were thought of before production.

It's not impossible to be such a good writer that you envision dialogue cuts, even frantic ones. Regardless, it's pretty clear that he put a lot of time and thought into the details.
Sports Night
West Wing
Social Network

Sorkin is a master of banter and dialog. I still wish Sports Night hadn't been cancelled when it was. Great writing, great cast.
Interesting. Am curious if you've seen a pdf of any of the other scripts? That is, have you read the other nominees, in order to do an apples-and-apples comparison? Just wondering.
I loved that it was so incredibly contemporary and complex, the competitive undercurrent reflects the life of undergrads and the stress of the way we choose to live now. It was spellbinding...I did not think that I would enjoy the movie, but I did. However, my Oscar vote goes to The King's Speech!!
I figured if anybody would know about the various script versions given your educational background it would be you.. I agree with you whole hearted Aaron Sorkin is an experienced screenwriter who would have a vision
Actually disregard the shooting script comment, if it were a shooting draft it would have had scene numbers next to the headers and likely comments like ommit or revised as it doean't it is probably just a late draft
white and black - Thanks! Yeah, I just know I wondered the same thing while reading it... like, "This can't possibly be this detailed before the film was made..." But then I remembered how many times I, and my peers in writing classes, would do the same cut to this, cut to that technique in screenwriting, and then I realized that Sorkin was just THAT good and that experienced, he was able to master it perfectly. Impressive stuff. He clearly knows how things are shot and is able to incorporate that in his writing.

I really liked the interview linked here where he talks humbly about his process, but that he stuck with this script for so long he was able to come up with the perfect vision for it. So impeccable that the director hardly had to "mess" with it - I respect that everyone just trusted the script so much to go with his structure.
I think this should win best movie and best actor, but again, have you READ any other scripts? Otherwise, your blog is limited in its perspective. Just asking.
Great insight!! rated!!
Well when you're Aaron Sorkin, you don't get doctored.. You should check out the documentary "tales from the script" it talks about all the crap that happens to screenwriters
I havent seen such great admiration/praise for *any* writer in quite awhile and its refreshing to hear it, and you know what? I agree with you that its totally warranted. the guy makes it look easy. the movie was brilliant. I have some quibbles with it, but overall, a masterpiece for the ages. people have compared it with citizen kane and not at all unjustifiably. its cool to think that, after a brutal decade of deteriorating status, writers can still have a tremendous influence/impact. of course sorkin is like a virtuoso among men, slaving decades at his craft, but inspiring nonetheless.
agree with you it should win an oscar for something. along with Tron. just kidding. about the tron part. :p
For everyone asking, I did read the other screenplays up for "Adapated." None of them were nearly as impressive in style/structure. Not even close.