consonantsandvowels

NOVEMBER 2, 2010 8:05AM

prayer for the dead

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Under the waning crescent of the hunter's moon,

sliver of fingernail caught on the heavens:

 

May your sins be venial.

May your faults be forgiven.

May you be indulged.

 

To hell with eternities of waiting to be made perfect,

let creation handle snakes and wear an ouroboros bracelet.

 

Living spirits

without descent, immanent

my holier ghosts


 

 

 

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this is such fun! i read it twice, and yep, it is like a chant to sing over the graves, with a big smile on your face. hell with perfection!
ms C&V ... sweet and even more of a comfort than the 23rd Psalm ...
"may you be indulged" for all eternity ... how many peoples in this
world have not known what it is to be "indulged" even for a moment
... short & sweet ... rated ... lew
I love this. To hell with waiting. I wrote about that yesterday, myself. To hell with waiting.
Amazing poem, it needs to be read over an over, like the chorus of a beautiful song.
rated with love
This is perfect. I would rather have this read at my funeral than anything I've come across . . . far more truth here than the usual fare . . .
A marvelous prayer -- may your sins be venial. (And may they have been worth it.)
Wonderful and grand.
Rated.
"To hell with eternities of waiting to be made perfect"

There are some things going on here that I never got as a Protestant... or maybe I just wasn't listening. I'm not sure. But that sentence (the one right there... just up above there, the one I quoted) I get, and the struggle to get there, I get.
may I be indulged .... thank you for this prayer into the universe today C&V...
This prayers for the dead is alive.
"Under the waning crescent of the hunter's moon,
sliver of fingernail caught on heavens"
... autumnal and glorius.

p.s. I like when I have to look up words like I did for venial.
"sliver of fingernail caught on the heavens"--ahhhhh.

To hell with waiting for perfection, indeed. Life in its imperfections is so very rich.
I woke this morning thinking, "when election day is dia de los muertos...." and I sensed that you might be just the person with words to soothe.

to ouroboros bracelets, and "To hell with eternities of waiting to be made perfect," perfectly well-said, poet-friend.

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