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APRIL 30, 2012 11:07PM

saying what can't be said

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There is nothing at all that can be talked about adequately, and the whole art of poetry is to say what can't be said.
 -  Alan Watts

 

The Language for Loss

 

What is inarticulable remains so.

Now I am told things differently
and everything speaks of you.
I have learned a new tongue
and tell you grief.

Yes, everything speaks of you,
but not for you -
sanctimonious Sunday gossip,
it is not to be trusted.

But under my own breath, hidden
and bereft of formal insult,
a mean colloquial pain
hisses at me. 

 

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Unmediated experience

by

Bob Hicock

 

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In Tennessee I Found a Firefly

by

Mary Szybist

 

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The words that trick
The mind to dance
Through generalities
To specify specifics,
To photo click
Through sound and chance
To snare realities
That grasp and stick
Are bricks that can devise
Edifices to open eyes,
Convey delights, surprise
By spelling truth with lies.
Insofar as Tennessee is concerned,
ANECDOTE OF THE JAR
I placed a jar in Tennessee,
And round it was, upon a hill.
It made the slovenly wilderness
Surround that hill.

The wilderness rose up to it,
And sprawled around, no longer wild.
The jar was round upon the ground
And tall and of a port in air.

It took dominion every where.
The jar was gray and bare.
It did not give of bird or bush,
Like nothing else in Tennessee.

Wallace Stevens
Thanks, c & v ~
Thanks, Jan Sand ~
i'm stumbling around in the words here. the ones in the Hicock poem scared me and almost made me cry, the Szybist poem is reassuring even in death, impossible as that seems. and yours - well, i think i'm reading too much of my own life in it, these last few weeks, some awful mean people, which you couldn't possibly know, but it reads very much like you must. my favorite word is 'inarticulable.'
Jan ~ Yes, I'm with catch: thanks. Stevens' "The Poems of Our Climate" is one of my favorites:
The imperfect is our paradise.
Note that, in this bitterness, delight,
Since the imperfect is so hot in us,
Lies in flawed words and stubborn sounds.


catch ~ and thank you for stopping by for the finale.

femme ~ oh, honey. I know. ("inarticulable" is so hard to say it's practically onomatopoeia)
you post the stuff that captures our humanity in elegant, sometimes jagged but beautiful ways. i appreciate that. 'cause i feel...really feel when on your page.
"Yes, everything speaks of you,
but not for you -"

the 'you' of your poems I'm sometimes frightened of knowing...but only because I also have 'you's that inhabit similarly dark, inarticulable spaces...

thank-you for the poem and poems....
Oh, Renatta - you honor me. Still waiting to read more of you.

L. ~ You're welcome, always welcome.

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