That's The Story of My Life

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ddcatwoman

ddcatwoman
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February 05
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What defines me? I'd love to write this really great adventure story, but alas, it be a work of fiction. I'm a mom of one, my son, now 15 (yes we're dealing with the teenage years) my furry children I have 4 cats, 2 dogs (1 is on loan from a sick family member) and 3 chickens. I try to do the best I can at whatever I do, keep out of trouble (which never seems to work) and get as much out of life as I possibly can in the short time I'm allotted. After all, " You only live twice" ;) Well, that's me

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NOVEMBER 1, 2008 10:48PM

That Night

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The winds deep voice shook through the night,

the stars they did not shine.

I sat alone in the dark,

icy chills ran up my spine.

The night it was black as pitch,

I felt alone and cold.

Then he came up to me 

and offered his hand to hold.

I had not heard his footsteps approach

not a whisper or a sound.

I do not remember seeing his face

as I rose from off the ground.

He lead me through the darkness,

the trail seemed to glow.

Of what he used to light our way,

I shall never know.

He brought me safe to my front door,

of this I was quite glad.

When I tried to introduce him,

they thought I had gone mad.

For on the porch I stood alone,

the space beside me it was bare.

When I looked at the hand I held,

mine held only air.

 

 

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At least you know how you made it through the night, through the cold. You were never alone.

That was beautiful!

:)
Moiko
You've got a kack. Keep it up.
It's in those moments of despair that the Silent Being leans close and breathes respite. How impossible to introduce another to that nameless formless One who may only be described inadequately, as Love.

Thank you for the lovely peom.
Thank you both, I am glad you liked it :D
I loved this poem--it's beautifully written, and so haunting. For some reason, I had the image in mind of a woman being visited by her dead husband--that's what is really neat about the poem--it's open to interpretation and a number of possibilities!