
When the storm comes you feel it
A time that uncovers
The stuff that you’re made of
As gusts rage and blow.
It descends where it wants to
None can control it
It reveals our foundation
Things buried below.
The strength of our roots
How deftly they’re planted
We feel all too keenly
When routed and tossed.
There’s hurricane fury
And blasting gale forces
Threatening shrill voices
Scream all has been lost.
High floods and erosions
Of things we called precious
And places of safety
Where we used to flee.
Temptations to worry
Fears that dishearten
‘Till truth breaks the darkness
And sets our soul free.
For after the deluge
After the raging
After the violence
Have finally let go
There’s soft, quiet healing
A deep rain cleansed feeling
New anchors of love
Steeped in longing to grow...
...after the wind blows.
Photo: NOAA Photo Library, NOAA Central Library; OAR/ERL/National Severe Storms Laboratory.


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"that uncovers the stuff you are made..." how true.
That's one 'weird' sacred analogy, huh?
Amalgamation. -- by Harry Folsom. - Lil Copan.
The art piece depiction is of a colorful painting.
The painted Faces are scrunched-up, smirking,
snarling, teeth-gritting, and howling looking.
People aren't participating in Life's process.
Often, even if actively critiquing Life's mess:`
Human participants still feel sadly estranged.
People are sandwiched between thick smogs.
Skies are pressing-down and laborers clench.
Clenched? Clenched in crazed sad confusion.
They are in shock of buildings shaped in box.
Box? Boxes of colored buildings. Lunchboxe.
Colors? Colors that seem familiar. Betrayals.
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Wars, industry, bank bail outs, Lies. War. Lie.
Lies. War. Bloodshed. Death. Red Blood. Cry.
War's are lies. Sad. The effort to transcend it?
The grief denied.
Enormous pains.
War. Lied. Greed.
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I understand you.
Then, the silence.
Ya get leek soup!
Medic sees red boo boos.
People are blown to bits.
I appreciate Ya for Hope.
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This eve new? B.` Obama?
You need to raise B.Hope?
Bob Hope and Bob Dylan?
A Christmas go go dancer?
A troops gaze out airplane.
Knowing they are deceived.
Go GI! Lies. Betrayal. Wars.
on and on
Thanks for the upside poem.
Thank you for your kind words. And yes. I’m sure of it. For you.
CK,
I’m very grateful for your use of the hymn metaphor. There is that Cathedral of life where creeds and dogma are forgotten and the living is what matters most. I know you’ll sing it just fine in that sanctuary. Oh. And BAM.
Scarlett,
Thanks for commenting on the meter. It’s nearly a disdained art nowadays :)
Art,
You’re a treasure my good man. I bow to your use of words and metaphors. Thank you very much for your comment.
jlynne,
You won’t wait too long I’m sure. The fact that you’re a person who waits at all sort of makes that certain.
Melissa,
Thank you for your very kind comment. You know well the soft, gentle, quiet “place” is not about geography. It’s about seasons. And it’s also about heart. And you have plenty of that.
appreciated
thanks
Ms. Scarlett
Thanks for your question. Check your mail for my long-winded answer.
Listen to the sky instead of the wind.
The tension grows all the way until the cataclysmic end...
And then peace...
Rated with thanks
I appreciate your kind words very much. The poem was actually written some time ago. I posted it in hope it might bring some healing to those who are hurting and confused.
Mary,
Thank you for such a generous and thoughtful comment. Your insights reveal a heart that has embraced the meaning and purpose of the challenges we face in the only way that leads to growth and wholeness. The fire and new life are such excellent examples of this truth. Thank you.
JL,
I’m grateful for your comment. I have a hunch artistic folks are fueled for their craft by these challenges in ways they seldom realize at the time.
Femme,
You touched on the central point. Roots are so vital. And often their size and mass underground is far larger than what appears above. Thank you for your words.
Lorraine,
You’re welcome :)