JANUARY 22, 2010 9:21AM

Rust

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The road weary Volkswagen bus has become cartoon-like with age. It leans to the right, almost as if it’s nursing a lame foot, while parked overlooking a favorite ocean view. Its tires are worn and textured from the hot summer asphalt and slurry beneath.

Grandpa fell in love with it in 1968. Now it owns the grandson - heart and soul. 

The sand, the wind, and the salt spray from the Pacific, relentlessly blow upon the thin sheet metal top and body of sun-bleached white and yellow.

The faithful agéd van seems to tremble and shake with each new wafting gust, buffeted by the elements and the sea.

Underneath, behind, and around the fringes, gaping red-orange holes corrosively eat away like cancer at a cherished ancient friend.

The rust signals its intent to claim a beloved companion.

rust divide

Grandpa’s trusted pocketknife with its deer horn handle, shiny chrome appointments and damascus steel blade, resists all attempts to be opened.

It stubbornly wrestles against chipped thumbnails and raw fingertips, fighting to remain closed.

When finally its elderly jaws yield and are pried apart, the air pops with the unmistakable smell of rust; a smell like the taste of a copper penny on the tongue.

Tiny deep orange flakes fly about, decorating hands and arms with corrupted metal freckles.

The blade rasps against its corroded hinges as it locks open. The formerly honed sharpness infected with a dreaded orange pox of death.

The knife is still a treasured heirloom. But only to those who know the man who owned it.

The rust claims a once useful and cherished keepsake.

rust divide

Visibly showing long years of toil and trying, a weary mind and exhausted heart faintly tussle inside a geriatric frame as it folds itself into a well worn upholstered chair.

Eight decades of laborious living have rubbed the edges off both wit and agility.

Feeble age spotted hands - once deft and accomplished - now tremble as they hold a pen, or newspaper, or drinking cup.

Joints and thoughts creak along at a third of the speed that a younger, more spry version of the same man enjoyed.

Lifelong loves, departed friends, and cherished memories are now recalled with an effort tantamount to navigating a maze.

The determination to live remains. The hopeful loving support of family is present as well. But the withered musculature, fractured bones and confused gray matter will obey neither what is wished nor willed.

The bountiful years were beautiful, but they have run their course. What was born in the foundry of love and forged in the furnace of life now prepares to be melded into the ethereal world of treasures passed on.

As the rust of age prepares to claim a deeply adored grandfather soul.

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What a wonderful tribute to your grandpa. You hit spot-on how some things that appear broken or in need of replacement are actually invaluable when we knew the one who cherished them. The illustration is charming.
This is awesome, Dennis. Everything works so well together. And the drawing is a great ode to rust.

Truly inspired and inspiring writing.
Ashes to ashes, rust to rust... My grandmother lived to be 101. She will forever be forged in my heart so alive and fun that I moved to Maine where every day I am in the land of the beloved memories she made for me. Beautiful writing.
Ah... RUST! I was waiting for that one. A nice weaving of memories and tangible images ...
"When finally its elderly jaws yield and are pried apart, the air pops with the unmistakable smell of rust; a smell like the taste of a copper penny on the tongue."

Well Dennis, you know what Neil says ... Rust Never Sleeps.
Rust never obscures the value in my book. Love the threads you wove together in this one.
Really strong work, and a tribute, in three parts, to your grandpa. Reminds me of my grandpa . . . rust was not his friend, yet not an enemy. Does that make sense?
Brilliantly nostalgic. What a great idea.
Dream-like, elegant and inspiring.
Dennis, this is just great writing! The way you managed to tie up everything at the end is what separates the bloggers from the real writers. Excellent~
Words are about to fail me, Dennis. This is so ... poignant, I guess, and so true. Although at my age, it's my father and father-in-law who would fit your evocative post. Both were vital, strong, clever and resourceful men who have been eaten away by time, our most remorseless foe.

For most people, it's not that they can't believe how old someone is ... but that he was ever young. You, on the other hand, have captured it up perfectly.
Love this, Dennis. Will try to come back to comment more substantively later.
This is a beautiful piece, Dennis.

I had a grandfather I adored. A few years ago, all the men in my family took him on a fishing trip; at the time, he was 84. I can remember him creaking onto the transport at the airport, plopping into the seat, and remarking, "Oh, to be 80 again."

Thanks for reminding my of how much I loved my grandfather, Dennis. Thanks for telling us about yours. Rust is beautiful.
Thanks for this Dennis, a wonderful, sad and inspiring piece. Everyone can relate to the trials and realities of aged love ones, and you have concisely and pointedly illustrated that fact with your excellent writing.
Well, brother-friend... First of all, I owned and loved that exact yellow van. But I'm not going to be surprised by coincidences anymore. I owned it on the gulf coast, and then drove it northeast, where it lived an island life, rusting beautifully. Second... I could smell the rust from the knife, taste it... and heard the creaking bones, and rust gears of the mind. I hear those gears squeaking when I see my mother-in-law, deep in the hole of Alzheimer's, trying to make connections. You have made rust beautiful in my eyes. No surprise.
I will never see rust the same way again. Truly inspired. Thank you.
"Corrupted metal freckles"! I like how the rust "claims," too. Really nice work.
I really appreciated the symmetry of the composition and the imagery is quite evocative. Thanks.
Very lovely. Your words conjure images that linger. "...they are not long, the days of wine and roses..."

Perfect title.
"What was born in the foundry of love and forged in the furnace of life now prepares to be melded into the ethereal world of treasures passed on." Great writing, Dennis. First time I've read a peaen to a VW bus, but I get it.
Terrific piece. R
When you think about it, rust is simply another step in the transformation of metal.

As you so deftly transformed the peripheral items that sometimes get obscured by our lives into tangible reminders of who we are.

Highly rated. This was an excellent piece, Dennis.
beautiful tribute... wonderfully composed... reminds me how much i miss my grandparents... and my 73 beetle...

Sláinte agus Síocháin...
As I creaked out of my bed this morning I remembered this lovely article which I read last night. And thought about. How true. It is a bittersweet truth for sure. But I love especially how you majored on the strength and beauty and value of each in the three vignettes. This writing gives great hope of leaving a meaningful and precious footprint before the rust gets us for good!
Oh, and p.s. the artwork is wonderful.
Thank you all for the generous, thoughtful comments. The piece is actually fictional, but inspired by many real life people, places, and things that are and were dear to me.

mypsyche - thank you. You nailed what I was aiming at. The real value of things is rarely in the price tag.

Chris - thanks for your very kind words. I really appreciate them.

Mary - thank you for the wonderful tribute to your grandmother. I’m grateful you liked the piece.

Kathy - thank you for your kindness.

Scarlett - I do indeed know what Neil said. He is one of the many reasons I many move to Canada :) Thank you for your kind words.

Melissa - it never does in mine either. In some ways it increases the value. Thank you for your encouragement.

Owl - it makes perfect sense, Owl. Things need not be enemies though there are not friends. Thanks for the thoughtful comment.

Steve - thanks man. I appreciate your kindness.

Daniel - ah! I’ll aim at “dream-like” in my writing ‘till the day I die. Thanks very much.

scanner - you are way, way, too kind my friend. Thank you.

Lorraine - though the characters were fictions they are inspired by the real men - as you know all too well. Thank you.

Boanerges - you offered some really thoughtful poetry in your comment. “For most people, it's not that they can't believe how old someone is ... but that he was ever young.” Thank you for that with all my heart man.

Lorraineflw - thank you for your kind words. Your post today was brilliant.

Frank - leave it to you to leave a comment more poignant than my piece. I love you heart man. I really do.

Reid - thank you for such a generous and kind remark. I really appreciate it.

CK - well little sis, why I am I not at all surprised by you owning a ‘60 vdub bus? But your all too kind remarks gratefully acknowledged, you know well I am a ham and egg writer compared to you :)

Mary - thank you my dear friend. Ad I will never see A the same either :)

Randy - thank you for the kind comment.

Stacey - thank you for the kindness and thoughtfulness of your comment. My illustrations pale in comparison to yours my friend.

sophie - thank you :)

Clark - thank you very much for your kind remarks.

John - thank you so much. You know how much I admire your work, When I can write a paean as well as you write humor I will have gotten somewhere.

Bill - thank you my friend. Because you capture the peripherals so well I really appreciate your kind words.

NOVA - thank you very much, I miss my vdub as well!

chey - you cheated so your comment doesn’t count :) Seriously thank you for your kind words.
I am feeling you brother. On every level as I go about my day feeling this and that new pain here and there.

You know, I never knew my grandfathers. But my dad was a good man. I got to see the rust you speak of claim him. Sad indeed. But he's still here. I have some pictures, a money clip, not much else physical - but the memories. Oh the memories! I am afraid nothing on this earth is impervious to rust.
Beautiful post. Well written and moving. I really enjoyed reading this.
bear - thanks bro. It’s hard to put into words how much you joining OS to comment on my stuff means. I love you man.

Gwen - thank you very much for your kindness.
And I've pointed out that a vegetarian could never be a "ham and egg" writer. BAM!
@CK - yes you did. But there is veggie ham and tofu. But you're not really going to make me say, "I'm a veggie ham and tofu-er next to you" are you?

And hey? What happened to yer avatar?
I wuz jus' cutifying it. Howz that?
@CK - stunningly cutified!
This was so moving and true. I still miss my grandpa and think to call and share something with him and it has been around 10 years since he passed. This truly moved me.
Wow. What a way to write about rust! The way you describe the knife.. the opening of it... your grandfather. Great writing, Dennis.
having grown up a bit south of you in north county san diego, I have lovely memories of volkswagen vans--wet dry sandpaper removing the sixties hippy flowers eventually getting to a beautiful restoration and then a trip to Big Sur with a tight new engine...nights spent in another and discovering the aromas of love...I know I can't go back to the Encinitas that I grew up in, but I love that you made me go there anyway.

I feel all oxidated now in my own distance from that time.
LunchLady - thank you for the kind words and for sharing about your dear grandpa.

Amanda - thank you for your generous comment. I’m anxiously waiting for your son’s next post.

Barry - thank you for offering your own nostalgic thoughts here. They were beautiful. It’s amazing how many folks have precious memories about a vdub bus. Thanks my friend.
that was lovely!

"Authors, like coins, grow dear as they grow old: It is the rust we value, not the gold."
~Alexander Pope

Rated!
Dennis,

No more generations of VW buses and '55 Chevy's - so ubiquitous in our "youth." Beautifully written post, you really had me. I busted quite a few knuckles under my own VW's but I sure got around in them, too. Age. What a bad idea. For anything (except, maybe, wine?) To quote Mr. Allen - "I'm not afraid of death, I just don't want to be there when it happens."