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Divorce Bard

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While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

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MARCH 21, 2010 8:27PM

Traveling North. Sunday Mar 21, 2010

Rate: 4 Flag

Along the highway up to Montreal
The forest changes in its composition.
The paper birch is hardly there at all,
And then a little north, it takes position.
While further south the early maple spray
Is confident enough to hazard red,
And scattered here and there, a willow may
Be yellow green -- up north, the birch instead
Shows starkly white against the other trees,
Abused and ragged from the closing season,
From icy winds that brought it to its knees
In winter, that it loves beyond all reason.
It puzzles me a little, driving by:
Without this bitterness, the birch may die.

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Poetry EP. Right here on this blog. EP-rated!
Scupper is right. This was beautiful
Hi scupper, hi tril. Thank you both for stopping by, as always.

It is NOT SPRING in Montreal!

On the way up, I was looking at the maples, and Edna St. Vincent Millay's "The Wood Road" came to mind:

http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-wood-road/

The phrase "maple spray" is hers. At least, that is how it came to me. And I do love her poetry.
Wonderful.. your tags also and possible analogies. I love ESVM also...
"Abused and ragged from the closing season,
From icy winds that brought it to its knees
In winter, that it loves beyond all reason."

wow...glad to have discovered you.
Rita - thank you for stumbling on me! I haven't seen you before, and now I have to read all your poetry.

Y Heron - I'm glad it touched you. And thanks for your post earlier, it meant a lot.
The highest praise, right here!