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While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

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APRIL 15, 2010 1:18AM

Great Circle. Wednesday Apr 14, 2010

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The kids were looking at the map tonight.
The World.  Along the wall, above the table.
My son was asking what's the longest flight:
From Greenland to New Zealand?  -- I was able
To give a fairly educated guess,
For measuring in hours.  Twenty-four
Was pretty much my biggest, more or less.
But being who he is, he wanted more.
I tried to say there isn't any point
In flying any further than you need.
My answer only seemed to disappoint -
He always half expects that I exceed
His expectations.  So it doesn't matter
If earth is flat, or round, or in between;
He wants to see superlatives all shatter,
And daily wonder at the unforeseen.
For now, his love of big and fast and high
Obscures an elegance of how to fly:
That if the trip takes longer than a day,
It makes more sense to go the other way.

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"For now, his love of big and fast and high
Obscures an elegance of how to fly:"

So true of so many of us. But not you.
"For now, his love of big and fast and high
Obscures an elegance of how to fly:"

I see I've selected the same lines as the ladyslipper.
Two lines that capture a boy's fascination.

I'm once again enjoying your meter in my morning.
kids and maps... nice combo. you know kids so well DB. reminds me of how much we loved our grandfather's globe. It sat on a little desk in the hallway with a wonderful dictionary on the shelf below -- that globe and dictionary were great treasures to us. xox
I was going to pick out my favorite line, but they're all so wonderful! Excellent! R
i so look forward to these poems.
This is a truly charming post!