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While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

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APRIL 28, 2010 11:49PM

Laundry #2. Wednesday Apr 28, 2010

Rate: 6 Flag

I'm doing laundry.  Mostly towels today.
They all were in the queue behind the stuff
The kids had worn, and needed right away,
Like favorite pants -- they never have enough
To go a day or two, or even three.
So only the essential things were done,
Like shirts and socks, a couple things for me;
But anything that I had in the sun
To dry or disinfect, would have to wait.
Until tonight, from roughly six to eight.
There's lots of other stuff I have to do.
I'm catching up.  Th'apartment's cleaner too.

 

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Yay!!! I love it, Bard. My mother always spoiled us by doing all of our laundry, too. I know some parents have their kids start doing it at a fairly young age but it is something I always remember about my home -- even into my teenage years -- the laundry all folded neatly for each individual person and stacked on the stairs kid for kid, so we could carry it up each day on our way to our rooms.

I love laundry memories and laundry writing. I am terrible at it myself by the way. It takes TIME! It's sort of an art. Mine is heaped up in a pile at the moment. And it was heaped yesterday, too.

Sweet poem. 'nite. :-)
This poem is just a joy - I love the idea of having a laundry queue, with the towels waiting their turn. Wonderful.
Bard. Based on the initial comments, you have captured the imagination of your female readers. See how a reader's experience influences their reception of a poem? Imagine the reception you would get with a diaper change poems. (I know, the kids are too old -- but you could reminisce in your poem as I do in most of mine.) I have changed diapers, and I undoubtedly helped wash clothes. I'm just not very good at it. PattyJane and ladyslipper make clothes washing sound like something other than a CHORE.

@PattyJane. I didn't see any line about "neatly folding" in Bard's poem.
The aftermath: full of reminders of the event. . . .
Catching up after the visit. You capture the catching up wonderfully even as you reflect the love you showed while your kids were with you. Lovely. And done by looking at Laundry #2!
Hello, welcome visitors. Thank you for stopping by, as always.

PattyJane: my mother stopped spoiling us when I was around 12 -- I think she was tired of trying to tell whose socks were whose (and we probably complained terribly when she got it wrong).

ladyslipper: it's so nice to write something on a subject I think of as so ordinary, and have it come back with the label "joy". You lifted my spirits extra.

dlv: oh, there may be one about diaper changing yet. Depends on how deep I have to trawl in my memory for subject matter. Thank you for avoiding calling it women's work -- I would have had to put you out back to smoke your stinky cigar.

Pilgrim: Yes, they left reminders everywhere. All over the table, their beds, the kitchen floor, etc., etc. I cherish it, and then I vacuum.

anna1liese: Yes, this is Laundry #2. There's a link to Laundry #1 way down at the bottom of this page, on 1/1/10. My outlook has improved some over the last four months.

Thanks again everyone, all who commented, and all who were just passing through. More to come.
I'm still catching up, DB. Carry on with the laundry.