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While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

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JUNE 20, 2010 10:35AM

Repost for Father's Day

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This was originally posted on March 9, before I had gotten much attention at all here on OS.  I hope you enjoy it.

Spring

My father died some fifteen years ago.
Azaleas sang. The spring was at its height
With blowing petals everywhere, like snow;
Our sadness lost to dogwood, and the sight
Of everything in bloom spoke resurrection.
The color brooked no compromise with grief
And every spring I still see his reflection
When rhododendron shows its newing leaf.

Today I nearly stumbled on a crocus.
A single color, born of dirt and sun,
And heralding the season into focus,
Reminding me of all I haven't done,
And here and there, a love all unbegun.

A thank you to my father.  From his son.

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"The color brooked no compromise with grief...." Seasons. Cycles. Life. Love.
I really love the way you write. _r
Beautiful tribute DB, Happy Father's Day, to a wonderful father, I have been touched many times by your devotion to your children. Relax today. Best,
Great, db.
Nothing to add. Just : great.
"a love all unbegun" -- great phrasing and the pangs of things undone. Know you miss your Dad.... Very nice, DB.
DB, you do beautiful work. Each one of your poems is like a blessing. Hope you have a good day with your kids.
This was beautiful DB. A beautiful tribute to your father. Happy Father's Day to you today. i can tell you are one of the great ones.
Hello all, catching up, catching up. I want to be sure you know, that when I fail to respond right away, I am still very appreciative of your coming by, reading, and commenting. It would be very difficult to keep this up without you.

anna1, I 'm very happy that you picked out that line.

Joan, that is such a nice thing to say. Thank you, sincerely.

rita, I am happy that you've been touched. I hope they are touched as well.

Kim, thanks. Nothing more: thanks.

Moose, thank you. I do. He died way before his time.

froggy, what a lovely thing to say. Thanks so much. And the day with the kids is the subject of the NEXT post...

trilogy - like Jackie Gleason? Sorry, couldn't resist. Still, I keep in mind an obit, years ago, about the son of A.A.Milne. Milne was apparently better at writing about Christopher Robin, than at being a father to him. I try to be careful.

Thanks everyone. And I have just posted the REAL post for the day. I hope to see everyone over there.