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While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

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JULY 27, 2010 12:48AM

Maybe Just by Holding Still. Monday July 26, 2010

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Some evenings when my work is nearly done
(It never really is, quite), I get up,
And have a little something cooked for one,
And make a bit of tea -- a single cup;
Another day has passed.  I used the phone,
And answered lots of emails, did some stuff,
Took notes, and spent the better part alone,
And wondered if it all was good enough.
From time to time the question shows its face.
I don't mean good enough for work.  I mean,
For something I can't adequately place;
For something still to come, and still unseen.
I'm rambling.  But the notion is recurring.
It's time to go to bed.  But something's stirring.

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I raise my cup of tea to you For something still to come, and still unseen
Excellent. I want to see where this goes.
Rambling maybe. In a productive way.
You're on a path, that's good enough.
You're Getting Ready ( it goes on forever ).
The main thing here is where you share,
and have no fear that one of us won't let you know
when you stray too far afield.
Or if you miss a rhyme, even.
"They also serve who only stand and wait . . . " Perhaps that feeling is simply an as-yet inchoate idea of where you're headed.
Sometimes rambling is the most important thing. It helps us rumble through the soil, our soil, to see what is planted, what needs to stay, what needs to go, what is stirring to make our own garden "good enough" for us. Lovely words tonight.
Rumplestiltskin?
It amazes me that you can put rambling into rhythm and rhyme.
Hi everyone. I just finished tonight's post "Genesis" post and it's WAY too late. Just want to stop and say thanks to all before hitting the sack.

tril, let's do have that tea.

froggy, me too. I'll keep you posted.

Kim, it is a bit of a meandering path, isn't it. (wouldn't it?)

Pilgrim, just trying to get my sense of direction, I think.

anna1, so far it's still a mystery.

scupper, that deserves a PM. Too cryptic.

sweetfeet, don't be amazed. Accent on the first syllable, no accent on the second. It drops right into the line. I love English.

Thanks all. Hope you enjoy the next one.

'night.
holding still... or stirring... it comes when it comes...