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While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

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AUGUST 17, 2010 1:20AM

Letter. Monday Aug 16, 2010

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For sev'ral years, the coming and the going
Had life in bags and boxes, packed away;
Then suddenly, there wasn't any knowing
Where things had gone, on any given day.

And when we came undone, dividing out
The contents of it all became a task
That neither of us cared to talk about,
Though ev'ry now and then, someone would ask

Have you seen this or that, I just can't find it...
...the bookcase maybe, have you looked behind it...
But after many months we ceased to bother.
And so, I lost a letter from my father.

He'd written it when marriage number one
(That's mine, not his) had all but come apart,
A simple note, a father to his son,
His observations on the human heart,

And something something this, when love has died,
And something that, when everything was tried...

The memory is faded.  He's been dead
For fifteen years; exactly what he said
May not have been enough to make it better,
But still, I wish that I could find the letter.

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A simple note, a father to his son,
His observations on the human heart,

Here's hoping that one day you find it. It sounds like a very special letter.
It makes me sad, D.B. I hope you find your letter.
A treasured letter from father to son
Holds memories dear, perhaps words of advice
It cannot be replaced nor be re-done
And nothing but it will ever suffice.

I hope you find it, dear DB.
Sigh, so sad.
I hope you find the letter or peace.
Rated with hugs
The memory is significant. Hug.
i'm not a keeper of much stuff, but i do have a few momentos, most of which are all in paper form, that mean so much. i hope you find it. r
Connections. Sometimes when so much seems to come undone, they are the links to ourselves that help to keep us whole. May at least the memory of the letter link you to one who loved and wanted to help and to keep you whole.
Hi everyone, thank you as always, and it's way too late for me to be out of bed.

Please accept my apologies for this one blanket thank-you. I hope to have some time to answer comments this weekend. In the meantime, you're all the greatest, every single one of you.

Goodnight all!