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While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

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AUGUST 18, 2010 2:18AM

Walnuts. Tuesday Aug 17, 2010

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My son was tossing walnuts at the wall.
The green ones, scattered all around the yard.
I think he hoped that he could smash them all;
Each throw was purposeful, well aimed, and hard,

And left a mark on backyard habitat -
The squirrels will find their fav'rite dinner loose,
Wherever they can find a brownish splat;
A wet corona, made of walnut juice.

I confiscated two.  A silly reason:
I like their scent.  Its late-in-summer season
Can overpower data, voice and phone,
And put me in the woods somewhere, alone.

 

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I love this poem, it's so vivid. And I especially like the last two lines. :-)
It's amazing how a scent can send you to another place and sometimes a little peace.
Rated with hugs
Mmm, certain smells take me to a whole different time and place.
Another wonderful poem._r
Oh, nice! I love the way you finished this.
I don't know how you do this night after night, DB! Another nice poem and, boy, would I love to see a squirrel one day!
lovely... olfactory transportation.
Love the way you link your son's play to the scent of the confiscated two that take you away to "the woods somewhere, alone."
I hear a resonance of Wordsworth inthis poem. And fresh walnuts take me back to memories of a long time ago. I'd love to have a walnut tree in my yard. ~R~
Great poem ! Loved the ending....... I am a poet too, just haven't written in awhile - you have inspired me to get back to it ! Keep writing! Rated.
Bacteria, I've just read,
Sans nose, or even head
Manage things very well.
It seems they have a sense of smell.

So scent and sense can intertwine
To waltz, perhaps, or beguine
In human thought
Or where is wrought
Simplicities of life's design.
Hi everyone. I have been so terribly remiss about responding to comments, and about reading other posts. My work caught up with me early in the week, and then steamrolled me - I look like a cartoon character, squashed to a paper-thin drawing on the street. But I do love to pop in and see who has visited.

Pavanne, thank you. I'm glad you like them. And I have the walnuts here to my left, still.

Linda, it really is remarkable, isn't it. And I do love the richness of this particular smell.

Joan, you too. I think we all have favorites. This time of year mine are mostly about plants -- especially the stuff you can squeeze between your fingers, like mint, or basil.

Pilgrim, thank you. I'm glad I finally finished it at all. The last verse was a bit of a struggle. I'm glad it was worth it.

Kate, incredible - no squirrels in Australia? I'll even tell you something that a lot of Americans don't know: in Ontario the squirrels are black.

Chuck, thanks for popping in. You're there with Linda and Joan, floating on the scent of something favorite. It's great, isn't it?

anna1, I almost felt guilty about confiscating them. But he was getting close to the window. It gave me an excuse.

FusunA, it is so nice to brush someone's memory accidentally. I'm glad I helped bring the memory into focus.

Lynn, welcome to OS. I'll be back to see your posts as well. But I may not be too frequent this week - oh man, work is killing me.

Jan, honest? They have a sense of smell? Well that would explain why it transports us with such lizard-brain immediacy. Thanks for coming by.

Thank you all. Now go to bed, you're all up way too late.
See http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2010/08/100816095719.htm
Nope! No squirrels in Australia ... but we have possums!