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While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

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AUGUST 27, 2010 1:51AM

Pets #2. Thursday Aug 26, 2010

Rate: 9 Flag

I'm not sure what has happened, but the dog
Who lived upstairs, whose fam'ly fell apart,
Is back.  Some sort of canine epilogue
Is playing out -- tonight the dog will start
His baying, broken-hearted, at the door.
His owners, and the furniture, are gone.
His simple love may still be hoping for
The husband and the wife who can't go on.

The cat is now a puzzle.  He's not here.
I liked him, though I found him insincere.

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there's forlorn and the sad opening and closing of the heart's valves in this piece. i hope you know, i've long ago become an adoring fan.

inqusitive, such a poetic response, and in form too.

respect to both of you.
one moves on another stays longing for a family gone...
The cat was quiet and stayed to himself .. Enough said hahaha
Rated with hugs
Everything you write... ahh.~r
This breaks my heart. r
Grief for what has gone and can not be replaced. Canine keening. Makes my heart break for all who lose before they can find life again.
Beautiful.
All these sub-plots, or threads. I feel like I'm involved in a drama ( not a soap ...) and want to offer advice.
Let the dog in. The cat will come back, and all will be well.
Cats aren't insincere, db, just very good at what they have to do.
They do so often mirror us don't they?

We are not so far apart, we varied species.

Rated for hope undying.
Insincere cats make the best domestic judges.
Hi everyone, I am very late responding to your comments. Work is getting busier and busier (this is a GOOD thing) and I've been in a cycle again of work, work, work, write, post, sleep. I have not been able to do any OS reading to speak of, in the last week. I am so sorry - I miss it terribly.

I'm going to catch up with the comments on the next post, but in case any of you peek back here,

thank you

thank you

thank you.