Divorce Bard's Blog

...Iambic pentameter is for the ear. Read it out loud.

Divorce Bard

Divorce Bard
Location
pretty how town, USA
Birthday
February 13
Bio
While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

MY RECENT POSTS

Divorce Bard's Links

December
November
October
September
August
July
June
May
April
March
February
January
SEPTEMBER 9, 2010 11:04PM

Anonymous #2. Thursday Sep 9, 2010

Rate: 5 Flag

Stay.  I couldn't know that you had heard.
One ruby throat has left.  To know is - soft?
Or genuine, perhaps.  One hummingbird
Will be some sev'ral hundred miles aloft
And take the summer south, a secret place,
Where monarchs pilgrim to the oyamel.
Here, crickets come inside to sing for grace,
Becoming stories ancient writers tell.
Here, I will offer tea, and stare, and hide,
With chitchat-woven gossamer and glitter.
And we can hear the words on winds outside,
Alliterating: Bracing.  Brisk.  And Bitter.
Much later, we will grope for words to say,
And cuddle up, and tell the winter: Stay.

 

Your tags:

TIP:

Enter the amount, and click "Tip" to submit!
Recipient's email address:
Personal message (optional):

Your email address:

Comments

Type your comment below:
This poem called to me in many layers of my being. From watching the hummingbirds start to leave my feeder, to winter sneaking up on me again, to wonder about the journey my body will take me for the rest of my time here on this planet. Such a wonderful poem.
I live where the hummingbirds visit during winter.
Today someone told me a great story about a hummingbird (about having saved one from drowning in a pool and how the bird thanked him).
The flora in my landscape was planted to attract hummingbirds.
My mother loved hummingbirds.
And now, this poem.
A good day. And now, a good night.
Ah.

I had to look up oyamel.

"crickets come inside to sing for grace"

Lovely how you've woven the chit-chat, heard and hear, tell and stories and words through this. And stay. And here.
Yes, stay. Please. Stay.
Becoming stories ancient writers tell~
It just gets better and better. I love it.
Good morning RomanticPoetess, mhold, consonantsandvowels, anna1liese, and catch-22. I posted last night nearly with one eye closed. My schedule is about to be brutal again for about a week, and I may miss responding to comments. I apologize in advance; thank you, always and as much as always, for coming by.
I read you today, to catch up. I should post I'm sorry you were ill last night on your recent post, but this one, "Stay," is my favorite. Very lovely. Be well.