Divorce Bard's Blog

...Iambic pentameter is for the ear. Read it out loud.

Divorce Bard

Divorce Bard
Location
pretty how town, USA
Birthday
February 13
Bio
While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

MY RECENT POSTS

Divorce Bard's Links

December
November
October
September
August
July
June
May
April
March
February
January
SEPTEMBER 23, 2010 11:45PM

Equinox. Thursday Sep 23, 2010

Rate: 15 Flag

Celestial conflation: orbit, season,
And color, and a thousand years by name,
Old English hærfest mona; such by reason
Of soft-illumined dusk when autumn came,
For gathering what otherwise were lost,
Once left behind to perish under frost.

Tonight I looked it up, so I could know
Who else had seen it, centuries before,
One night on foot, perhaps a cart in tow,
Just coming home from closing up the store.
Things might have gone his way that afternoon,
And though the summer's end had come too soon,
He might have loved the beauty of this moon.

Your tags:

TIP:

Enter the amount, and click "Tip" to submit!
Recipient's email address:
Personal message (optional):

Your email address:

Comments

Type your comment below:
Harvest Moon. Autumn Moon. Lovely and bright.
Bless us this night with your beautiful light.
Lovely when nature gives us reason to stop and notice and just say, "Oh" and "Ahhh." Lovely this.
D Bard ... my favorite moon ... my birthday 24th ... a a great poem ... thanx ... saw it on the eastern horizon ... and just looked, admiringly, for a couple minutes ... lew (rated) ... and just favorited ...
This is one of my favorites. Even as a child I would look at the moon and think of all those who have looked up before me...~r
The moon was indeed stunning on the equinox. A portent of beautiful things to come?
Harvest moon and a crescent. . . two lovely metaphors that have fascinated me. Your poem gives voice to the first masterfully. ~R
I love the moon imagery
I miss seeng the harvest moon .Only see fog
Rated with hugs and happy weekend
The moon was indeed lovely, we had a large storm,then it came out and brightend our entire farm like a spotlight. Thanks DB lovely poem.
really beautiful. it was large and luminous and pendant here in DC, like nothing i've seen. and this poem is exquisite.
"Tonight I looked it up, so I could know
Who else had seen it, centuries before,"

I got caught on this line, I heard it melodically in my head. Gorgeous. R
As usual, only clouds in my part of the world.
But i love the thought
Who else had seen it, centuries before especially having just bene in my great grandparents village, I thought this many times there.
Lovely poem and tribute to tonights moon. It is cloudy and rainy here and I fear it will not appear.
rated with love.
Thank you all for not noticing that I forced "Celestial" to be four syllables long. It was a crime of passion and I am really, really guilt-ridden about it. I'll think of something, I'll find a way to make it up.

Kate, what is the name of the moon down under right now? Honestly, I only know about the Harvest Moon because of the song.

anna1, and that's precisely what happened - there it was, between a pitched roof, a telephone wire, and an oak tree. And with the color and its fullness, it made them all fade away.

Betamale, me too. I was on my way to my kids' elementary school, and there it was, along the way. Thanks for coming by.

Joan, yes! Precisely! And everyone else on the other side of the world right now! (Like Kate!)

Linnnn, I don't know about that second part. I'm keeping my beard till January - not ready for anything yet.

kateasley, thank you.

FusunA, thank you so much. No promises, but I'll keep an eye out for the crescent now.

tg within, thank you.

Poppi, I loved your sheep post. If I had money to travel, I'd come to see the moon on snow where you are - never seen the northern lights.

Linda, I'm so sorry you missed it! But I'll take that happy weekend -- I'll pay it back when I can.

rita, I loved your moon poem as well. You got the aching part better than I did. Very, very lovely.

cheap, and it's free!

Sheila, I am thrilled that the lines did that to you. It is my fondest hope, every time I start a poem.

tril, centuries before and on the other side of the world. It really is almost too much to take in, isn't it.

Romantic, I hope you finally got the moon. Looks like it was pretty spotty for everyone last night.

Thank you all, for such a warm response to this poem.
This caught me up in three readings before I coud post. H.P. Lovecraft would have caught that four-syllable celestial. He was a stickler for that. It was rainy and cloudy here last night too so I missed it as well. But I saw it tonight in your words.
DB, right now the moon Down Under is simply referred to as Full Moon. Actually, right this minute ie Saturday 25 Sept 9 :04pm it is 96% Full ... Waning Gibbous.

It's Spring here but we don't call it Spring Moon. We simply have New Moon, First Quarter, Full Moon and Last Quarter .... We're quite boring I'm afraid!!!