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While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

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SEPTEMBER 29, 2010 12:12AM

Seuss Story #2. Tuesday Sep 28, 2010

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Cat Carnival in Venice (Dr. Seuss) 

Cat Carnival in West Venice.  Dr. Seuss.

 

One night, the local vertical was lost.
Some found it terrifying: stairways curled,
And lines in parallel bent close, and crossed;
Dependable perceptions of the world
Began to melt, and soon gave way to vision,
As mullions turned to whimsy, and fatigue
To decoration; commonplace precision
Was given up to rumor, and intrigue.
The evening seemed forever.  Once, outside,
Unfazed by shifting geometric proof,
Two cats passed by the window, dignified
And radiant, and self-absorbed.  Aloof.

The cat upstairs has landed on his feet.
He told me of the couple in the street,
When last he came to get a bite to eat.
 

 

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Stunning, I love it.
rated with love.
One need not be a child to be beguiled
By Dr. Seuss who sets loose the obtuse,
The mild or outrageous wild
And woolly universes bedeviled by Circe's
Whims and curses, incurable by nurses
But always curious and fun where,
In shining sunlight, blossom scented air,
one could dance in sun with Dali
Twist and turn in Escher's odd configurations
Giggle at weird intimations
And land flat footed back from folly
Into sane reality, somewhat wiser
Out of contact with this mad advisor.


The outrageous wild and woolly
Sorry, one line got loose and wandered off down at the bottom.
Quite the flight of fancy, even if verticality was banished.
Yep. I used to do a little acid, too.
How you do shine the world. Glad the kitty is doing well.
One of my favorites.~r
DB, I absolutely loved these lines: Dependable perceptions of the world
Began to melt, and soon gave way to vision,
As mullions turned to whimsy, and fatigue
To decoration; commonplace precision
Was given up to rumor, and intrigue.
Magical!  Thank you!
Seuss is one of my favorites. Thanks. What with all the cats around here?
So thought this me...

I fed my cat Kitty, to Max the dog

he squealed delightfully like a hog

and promised silence with first bite

the end of Kitty. So long, good night.
I'm a little fixated on that special egress for the tomcat's tail...and that vaporous skirt...and the stairs...

Fantastical poem.
The painting is in the book "The Secret Art of Dr. Seuss. I got it at the library, and kept it on the kitchen table for a couple of weeks for the kids to look through. I may have to check it out again for myself.

RP, that is a very strong adjective. Thank you.

Jan, thank you for your poem as always. I read a lot of admiration for Dr. Seuss. Let's raise a glass.

Pilgrim, I actually read the phrase "local vertical" first in an article about SkyLab. Apparently where there is no gravity, some people still need an arbitrary vertical, to avoid vertigo. Somehow it fit the painting.

Ken, oh man, how everyone's back story leaks out from time to time.

anna1, he is doing fine. I'll tell him you were asking about him.

Joan, yeah? Thank you!

Kate, I'm very happy that you liked it. It's funny, none of that came until I had the word "mullions".

tg within, Seuss is in my Pantheon, alongside Shakespeare. He is the reason I won't go near anapests - I'd be terrified.

trilogy, I'm glad you hopped on for the ride. And that you enjoyed it.

c&v yes, the stairs. I was considering having the lady cat lose a slipper on them. That all went away with the vertical. And that hole for the tail really does pull focus, doesn't it.

Thank you all for coming by -- and for your kindness, no matter which way my writing goes. You are all very instrumental in it happening at all. Thank you.
I had to look up the word "mullions" ... I'd never heard it before ... and look what you did when had it! Wonderfully magical!!!