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Divorce Bard

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While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

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OCTOBER 7, 2010 11:44PM

Anonymous #5. Thursday Oct 7, 2010

Rate: 10 Flag

What I imagine you, you cannot be,
But I will tire of goddess, and of sprite.
I overspoke.  Don't go -- stay here with me.
It isn't that I'm frightened of the night;
God knows I've spent enough alone, so much
That more would just be more.  It must be this:
Sometimes your simple, absent-minded touch,
Just walking by.  As though you leave a kiss,
Not even real, to hover in the air
Like mist.  A light, uncomplicated haze
At morning.  And I turn.  You're down the stair,
And gone.  That I could have ten thousand days
Of simple touch.  That you might have it too.
It's lost to words, what I imagine you.

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Most beautiful, Bard. I love the internal rhymes as much as the content of your poem. ~R
beautiful wrought, easy as a breeze, soft to the touch and sexy. nice. should we all have 10,000 nights such as those.
I love when I see your nightly poem is posted. Each is unique. This one is beautiful.
I think I will come back to this a thousand times.
Sometimes we speak of the universal in literature.
It speaks to all readers of all time.
I feel that here.
Ah, now you've pressed a bruise in me. It's a lovely conceit to begin and end as you do.
Your touch is true, and lovely.
Imagination is a powerful thing. Beautiful flow to this beautiful poem DB.
i've read and reread this
i don't have an intelligent comment to follow
the sadness gets to me and makes me think of hands wishing to reach out and touch and not daring to
So I did a little calculation, and realized that 10,000 nights would get me deep into my eighties, and that seemed like it might work. Since I liked the sound of 10,000. Here's hoping.

Fusun, thank you. I always am glad to see you come by.

Oryoki, it depends on how old you are. I think you might deserve a few more - say, 15,000? I can't tell from your picture.

heidibeth, I love knowing people have an eye out for them. And I'm glad you liked this one.

anna1, come back as often as you like. Truth be told, I was kindof pleased with this one.

c&v, if I can touch that avatar...

Pilgrim, thanks so much.

trilogy, thanks to you, as well. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

vanessa, oooohhh, be careful. You are getting too close.

Kim, thanks man. Thanks.

Thanks to all of you, as always, for spending a little time here. It is a great pleasure to have you come by.

And I am so down for the count. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......
I love your Anonymous posts DB .... just so very beautiful .. ethereal ... like I imagine her to be.
Kate! Where on earth have you been, young lady! We were worried sick about you! Do I have to take away your car keys?
My dearest DB! I'm okay .... taking things a little slowly ... trying to find my feet again.

I'm so sorry I haven't been here much of late ... I'll have a lot of catching up to do. I have missed you, my friend.

Please keep writing these beautiful, beautiful poems.