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While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

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OCTOBER 27, 2010 12:23AM

Doohickey. Tuesday Oct 26, 2010

Rate: 11 Flag

My son has lost an aglet, on his shoe.
It makes it hard to get them on, you know?
There's not a lot that I can really do,
But wait until his laces fin'lly go.

Each morning, as we're getting set for school,
Just putting on his high-tops stops me cold.
I wish I had some special sort of tool;
That missing piece is worth its weight in gold.

I told him I would write a bit about it.
He asked, "You mean a poem?"  And I said yes.
And then he said -- now this is true: "I doubt it.
It doesn't have a rhyme."  And I confess,

He's right.  And I could stay up half the night,
And wish there were.  But there's no rhyme in sight.
I'm giving up.  It isn't worth the fight.

Oh by the way - it represents a word
I hit my thirties never having heard.

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I have little doubt you could write an engaging poem about anything.
( stickytape works )
... but to those who think orange, and aglet
have no rhyme I remind them of the time
I was fishing and on reeling in was stuck
on what at first I took to be a snag,
but one more tug and away it came.
It wasn't a snag but a snaglet.
Driving home,
no fish, and a little cough, but
nothing an orange lozenge couldn't cure.
I laughed out loud! Gee, I’m really sorry!
But as thoughts of shoes just stopping you cold
Ran through my mind and conjured a story
With pictures and words worth their weight in gold
I could not help it … a giggle did slip
As though I was reading a comic strip!

Without this thing .. aglet .. this doohickey
Life and shoes do become kinda tricky!
Somewhere there is a crossword missing just that word.
I would bet you won't regret
The loss of just one small aglet,
A short length of a tube, metal
Could easily your problem, settle.
Any model store would sell
This thin tube, quick to quell
This worry. Merely chop it
to a stub and pop it
On the lace end, wet with glue,
Or plier clamp it. That should do.
There's an app for that!
Would send you an aglet if I could! Love that your son knows you are writing about his missing aglet in a poem and better yet that he knows you might not find a rhyme. Love the responses your missing rhyme has won.
Rated. Funny how loss spurs creativity, isn't it????
A poet can find beauty in the oddest places. This was wonderful and funny.
Thanks for informing me, Again, Bard.
ps I love the word doohickey.
Aglet is one of my favorite words. I only have a few. Honest. Aglet is one of them.
Your thingamabob came whatsahoo?
A setback at work has set me back in time to spare.

Not only are you are all appreciated; you feed my habit. Thanks for keeping me in comments.

Goodnight !
Aglet sounds like a small animal. Wonder what they eat?
Not sure I know what an aglet is, but I am glad it sparked this bit of verse.