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While the ashes of marriage #2 were cooling, I began a journal here in verse, to keep myself out of trouble. So far so good, and one day at a time. I took a hiatus this past January, and I missed it terribly. Writing daily had changed the way I think - not my opinions, but the process of thinking itself. So here I am back again, and hungry. I began with three rules: (1) Iambic pentameter, (2) Perfect rhyme, and (3) It had to be true (no hyperbole). I hereby amend rule number 3: If I'm writing about myself, yes, it has to be true. But it doesn't, if I want to tell a story.

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DECEMBER 20, 2010 2:06AM

After Moore: V. Sunday Dec 19, 2010

Rate: 11 Flag

*Spoiler alert!* This is a serial - don't jump into the middle!  Part I is here.

Sometimes, when sound and sight present the mind
With things too difficult to comprehend,
Or leaps too unprepared, we leave behind
Our senses -- facts and vertigo can blend,

Until the walls themselves begin to move.
At first, I felt a thousand miles away.
And even as my balance would improve,
I couldn't speak.  The things I tried to say

Were caught inside, like shouting while I dreamed.
He stood, and held the cat, and looked at me,
Still tenuous from how unreal it seemed,
And then he asked, "Do you have any tea?"

And I came to.  His voice was mild, and deep.
And I recalled it reading me to sleep.

 

- End of Part V -

Go to Part VI.

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Sweeeeeet!!! I love how this keeps going!
O. I thought
And then, the cat. He tapped me with his paws,
And jumped. And there he was.

Yes.

Santa Claus.

( Part IV )

was Santa Claws ( the cat, in your lap ) ....

I see now it's real, DB. And I wonder ...
Bard, Have you been waiting all your life to write this one. I find this time that as I read these words, I begin to forget who I am for much of what you describe here is where I often live. Senses falling away. Is this the way our veils fall so that we are once again the child we were. Is that where magic lives.
You getting surreal on us? And why not?
yes, blending can be so comforting...once the weirdness wears off.
It is good you got good rest that night.
Love this. I'm on the edge of my bed.
Still seated in my satin robe and jammies and glued to your every word. I know that voice that use to read to me at night. Thank you for continuing the tale. I am really loving it. I thought it was over as well with the last entry. Carry on dear bard! Again, brilliant!
I smile now as I think I see another slight turn in the road here and I wonder where it leads. I think I know ... but I'm not quite sure and so the anticipation builds again as I wait eagerly for more ...

His voice was mild, and deep.
And I recalled it reading me to sleep.


Oh I think I'm going to like where this road leads ... so very much.
Good evening dear everyone. This is getting a bit longer than I expected - by now Clement Moore had him going back up the chimney, and here I have him just sitting down for a cup of tea. I don't know what to say in my own defense, except I do love tea.

heidibeth: I'm glad you love it, and I do hope it doesn't start to meander too much.

Kim: I neglected to put the little "End of Part..." thing at the bottom of IV, and I confused more than just you. My own sister, even. Sorry if I misled you for a night.

anna1: not all my life, exactly, because most of it was not spent with words, but music. But I think it's fair to say, all this year. Very fair to say that.

Leon: milk and surreal for breakfast. Lots of sugar. No saccharin.

catch: I saw a performance once of Los Munequitos de Matanzas, from Cuba. Having been trained as a classical musician, I spent a lot of the evening trying to find the downbeat, so I was already a little disoriented. Then a number started with a couple of dancers dressed up as gods, in costumes made of straw. Way, in the back of the hall, with not terribly bright spotlights on them. I was confused, both visually and aurally, for a good 30 seconds, and I swear I felt the floor start to move. It was a relief when the weirdness wore off, but the blend was oh so intoxicating.

HarleeGirl! Thanks for letting me know you're there. I hope you continue to enjoy the ride.

pastvoices: You're getting it almost as fast as I can cook it. Thanks for being so attentive.

Kate: and thank you for waiting for me to figure it out. I'm not done yet, but I'm about to post the next bit. I hope you like it.

Again, thank you to everyone. This is being such a cool ride. I hope you all stay with it.
Goodnight!
Pulling up the rear, as usual (been a busy, busy week). I can already see this in print, with beautiful illustrations.
Hi tril. As long as I know you're there, you can come as late as you like.

Now, if someone could just recommend an illustrator...
Ummm ... I think I know a beautiful illustrator. Goes by the name of Kim .... I think you might know of him perhaps? : )
Awwwwww; I've been off of OS, what a treat to find this!!!

I like tea with my cookies too.
Always knew Santa was a tea kinda guy.
Santa asking for tea is just precious, it seems the perfect thing to say