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JULY 2, 2010 9:13PM

you don’t want a friend (you want a follower)

Rate: 16 Flag

 

 

you don’t want a friend

at your side at ball games

cheering for the losing team

        no matter who they are.

you want someone to wear

your jersey, sing your

songs and clap at the same moment

you are clapping.

so long ago

before there were

friends there were friends;

humans spoken to not

commented upon.

confiding was okay; betrayal might not

have been recorded by

twenty television cameras.

you wanted me now you have me;

you’ve had me; you used to have me;

you still have me but I won’t be

your black-eyed tinny lipped

follower.

no. I won’t be

         won’t be

         won’t be

merely a fan

   or your scab kneed follower.

 

 

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no scabbed knees here.
excellent poem.
rated
I loved this. No scabby knees at all.....
cartouche....so good to know we are of the same mind on this subject! ;)
yes! besides...i'm old and my joints hurt too much to kneel.
lorianne and wendylynn thankyou. achey joints just not worth it....
Hmmm, this could be applied to many things, like the OS.

Raney
I enjoyed this poem. A lot! Well done!!
love the imagery. beautiful piece of writing.
(R)ated for defiant independence in defense of, and before, during, and after knobbiness!
Ah...too cool. I'm on YOUR team! This...hit me where I live...
thank you all for your comments...and happy independence day....:)
your poetry paints an entirely different side of you.
Very nice piece my new friend. I enjoyed the read and assure you no knee-pads necessary ! Well crafted, great imagery, and oh, so, apropos.
Nice to meet you through such a nice poem.
J-
This sentiment may be a bit lonely but it's freeing and definitely not so exhausting. Great poem.