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SEPTEMBER 2, 2011 8:53PM

ones who carry the weight of the sun

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Faceless job, circling,

un-Enola Gay fliers,

Fukushima bound.

 

“No morality

in war” Tibbets said.

No sentiment

 

in business; just a

geiger counter

and the fragile ground.

 

To force the body

not to flee—who remembers

Cherynobyl, mon

 

amour? 5.6

roentgens per second. “Off scale.”

Telyatnikov

 

received his medal

for bravery, two others,

posthumously. Four,

 

the number that burned?

Down’s syndrome up--Germany.

Deer racing from the

 

red forest. Cost of

oil wars or black lung. None

costless. Know us, then, we

 

breathing women, men,

pouring sea water over

icarus, the sun.


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"'we breathing men, women,
pouring sea water over
icarus, the sun."

fly too high, wings burn.
lots of kind of burns.
all is combustion.
heat and light.

to carry the weight of the sun
is an interesting phrase.
the sun has no "weight"
(a gravitational field is needed to measure this number
for a mass...)

then again, weight is also an emotional concept,
meaning ... responsibility, 'the weight of the world'...
or misery, 'poor hapless guy , wish he could unloose that
weight on his soul'

weight means importance too.

still, i say: all need gravity.

tough job indeed, the weight of the sun itself,
the first and last lifegiver,
the light and heat
itself.
Apocalyptic and beautiful, dolores.
thank-you for that meditation, james....it makes me wonder though if there is some other gravitational field of which the sun might be a part and have....weight....

or maybe that's too strange and the universe isn't organized that way.

but thank-you for reading.

and sirenita, so nice to see you. thank-you....I wonder how you are these days. xox.
I still think Icarus stole a space vehicle and was aborted by the mother ship or something like that. Where Icarus flew from there is hardly anything there. It makes good sense that this labyrinth was a space ship
and hence all the genetic experimentation. otherwise great post feels like this poem should be on my sunflower Post.
algis,

I was thinking that icarus is the perfect metaphor for the nuclear power industry....heat wise and otherwise. mini-suns....

have also been thinking of this lately...maybe the weight of the sun is life itself...and we all carry that weight...

but, on another note, I find your sunflower photos spectacular. I wish I could post one here. thank-you so much. I thought of posting this poem with sunflowers of some sort....but I didn't see any that worked. now that I've seen yours I see what I was looking for.
That last stanza....wow...Rated.
"Cost of

oil wars or black lung. None

costless. Know us, then, we



breathing women, men,

pouring sea water over

icarus, the sun."

very unique style here, and I loved that last line...read it 3 times. thanks ~

oh yeah - I tried to rate and it wouldn't let me?
Heidi and Michelle thank-you for reading.
Brava! I've got glowing adjectives galore for this, but they pale in its radiant glare.