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Duaneart
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Digital Alchemist
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DuaneArt
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Artist: someone who uses imagination, talent, and skill to create works that may be judged to have an aesthetic value. --------------------------------------------------- Observer: One who desires to understand the world around them and receives knowledge through the senses. -------------------------------------------------- Deviant: A person who deviates or departs markedly from the accepted norm. -------------------------------------------------- Iconoclast: a person who attacks settled beliefs or institutions.

NOVEMBER 2, 2009 3:46PM

Eight Colors - A Graphic Short Story

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Viktor Painting aa
8 Watercolor pans

1 One

A pretty young first grade teacher played an upright piano at the front of a classroom of six-year-olds, as she led them in song.  One by one the kids stopped singing until the teacher noticed that their attention had been redirected to the back of the room.

Viktor Popov was painting at an easel but was oblivious to the attention he had attracted.  He was short for his age, his clothes were ill-fitting and he had a lop-sided haircut.  He appeared to be in a trance as he dipped his brush in small pots of paint and attacked the heavy sheet of paper clipped to a hardboard easel.  His focus was intense and drool hung from the corner of his wide-open mouth.  

The teacher walked to the back of the classroom as the children giggled.  A little girl pointed at him.  “Miss Pennington, he’s having a fit or something.”

She leaned next to him and put a reassuring hand on his shoulder. “Viktor?  Are you okay?  Do you feel alright, hunny?”

He slowly came out of his trance, stopped and looked around. 

When Miss Pennington saw what he was painting, she stared in disbelief.

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

A few nights later, Viktor sat on a folding chair in the school hallway, right outside a classroom door.  He drew on the seat of the chair with a ball point pen.

Inside the classroom, Viktor’s mother and father were stuffed into child-size desks.  Miss Pennington leaned casually against her desk in front of them.

Viktor’s father spoke with a thick Russian accent, “Did boy do something wrong?”

“No, no, no, Mister Popov, he’s not in trouble.  Not at all.”

Mrs. Popov looked anxious.  “Why are we here?” 

“Maybe it’s better if you see for yourselves.  Let me show you something.”  

Miss Pennington lifted up a large sheet of construction paper from her desk and held it front of them.  On it was a child’s painting of a house on a hill. 

 

Childs Painting

 

“This is done by a girl in Viktor’s class.”  Miss Pennington noticed their puzzled looks.  “This is a good example of the kind of paintings these kids do.”

Viktor’s parents looked at it and nodded slowly.  Miss Pennington placed the sheet on her desk and carefully picked up another.

“Now… This is what Viktor painted.”

 

Maya by Vikto
 
 
Upon seeing it, Mrs. Popov immediately covered her eyes as Mr. Popov erupted, “I will… kill him.”

“Hold on Mister Popov, Viktor is not in trouble.”

“He painted naked woman!” His voice rose and his face grew redder.

Mrs. Popov started to cry. “I am so sorry, he doesn’t know better.”

“You don’t understand.  This is not just any naked woman.”  Miss Pennington pointed at the picture.  “This is called Naked Maya by a painter named Francisco Goya.  Here, look for yourself.”

She opened a large coffee table book to a place saved with a little yellow post-it. 

 

Naked Maya

 “Same picture,” Mr. Popov looked up at his wife, “It is same one.”

“There was no book or picture anywhere near him.  It is as if he memorized it.”  Miss Pennington showed them some squeeze bottles of tempera paint.  “And he did it with only these six colors.  Have you ever witnessed him doing anything like this at home?” 

Viktor’s parents looked at each other and Miss Pennington saw she was on to something.  “Does it ever seem like he goes into a dream or maybe looks like he’s having a… maybe a mild… seizure?”

“There is nothing wrong with boy.”  Mr. Popov started to get angry again.  “If you say he did nothing wrong then we go home.”

Miss Pennington looked worried and followed them to the classroom door.  “Viktor has a real gift.  This kind of talent needs to be nurtured.  The maturity of his brush technique is… is… startling.  Kids Viktor’s age just do not paint like this.”  Her eyes pleaded with them.  “I don’t know if anyone does.” 

By the expression on his face, it became quite clear that Mr. Popov’s patience had finally run out.  He took his wife’s hand and led her out the door where she grabbed Viktor and they walked away.  Near the end of the long hallway, Viktor turned and looked back at Miss Pennington.  She smiled.  He smiled back.

She noticed something scrawled on the seat of the folding chair:

 

Viktor was here

 

 

8 Watercolor pans

2 Two

For many years after that night, Janice Pennington stayed in teaching.  She became the art teacher at the high school and was Viktor’s senior year art instructor.  At his graduation, she presented him with a beautiful black leather portfolio case with his initials emblazoned in gold across the top.  She also made one last plea to his parents to help him become the artist he was born to be.  As always, it fell on deaf ears.

She married a man who owned a local dairy farm a few years after that.  She took a job teaching art appreciation at a local community college.  Within ten years her husband, Jack Kilduff, turned that little dairy farm into a successful dairy distributor, servicing most of the state.

Dairy Farm2

She put off her own career to help Jack with his burgeoning company.  Occasionally, during weak moments, she complained that “living on a farm” just wasn’t her idea of living.

Very soon after that, Jack and Janice sold the dairy to a much larger national distributor and retired in their forties.  Their blissful retirement together ended the night Jack was killed in a car accident, a year later.  Janice sold their house and finally got her wish to live in the city and happily adapted to the city lifestyle.  After months of interviews and phone calls, she landed a job writing a small column called “City Art Scene” for one of the smaller newspapers.  In her first year on the job, she wrote a piece about a young artist from the Mid West named Mandy Blair.

At The Gallery

Mandy was the toast of the city art world and Janice was the lucky one who discovered her.  At her first major show, which was an enormous success, Mandy was photographed for a front page article with Janice standing next to her in every shot.  That was how she caught the eye of New York Times Arts and Leisure editor, Andrew Vogel.

She was contacted discreetly and at a somewhat secret meeting in his office, Andrew himself challenged her to find another Mandy Blair - and if she could, he had a place for her at the Times.

In the taxi cab ride back to her apartment, Janice made a call on her cell phone.  “Hi, Sheila.  Listen, I need to find someone and you’re the only one I know who can help me.”

 

 

8 Watercolor pans

3 Three

A week later, at Baldy’s Snooker Lounge, Ray Azzini parked his car in the back parking lot and noticed the brand new Mercedes.  He walked by it on his way to the back door and grumbled.

 Fifteen minutes later, Ray held a glass of scotch and stood across the bar from Janice.  The bartender, Skinny Louie, stood nearby, listening in and trying to look busy.

Baldys Snooker Lounge

“He took off last Tuesday, haven’t seen him since.  I don’t go stickin’ my nose in nobody’s business.  End of story.”

Because the helpful attitude had slipped away, Janice tried lightening her voice, “Does he usually stay away this long?”

“I don’t know.  Ain’t my job to watch him.  Long as he pays the rent…”

Janice looked a little frustrated.  “Could you do me a favor Mister Azzini…?”

“Ray, name’s Ray.”  When he smiled, she did her best to not stare at his missing front tooth and chapped lips but his breath was impossible to ignore.

She asked in her sweetest voice, “Do you suppose we could take a look upstairs?”

Ray shook his head, “Now, I don’t think I’d be very… comfortable with that, I live by a code, y’see?”

She put her hand on his forearm.  He looked down at it as she squeezed, “Now… Ray, I would be so grateful if we could take the shortest look.  I wouldn’t disturb anything.  He would never even know we were there.”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

When they arrived at the apartment door, Ray made a big show of looking for the correct key on a big chain of keys.  He picked one, stuck it in the lock and twisted.  “Hey, he ain’t retarded or nothin’, is he?”  

“Of course not.  He…” At that moment the lock clicked, the door open and they gasped as the inside of the top floor apartment came into view.  Every inch of wall space was covered with sheets of exquisite watercolor paintings roughly taped to the walls.  The apartment was completely empty except for the paintings and a thin metal case on the floor.

“He’s gone.  There use to be furniture and shelves and books and…”  Ray trailed off as he watched Janice wander around looking at the paintings.  “How did he get all that stuff outta here?”

Janice moved around slowly and spoke softly to herself.  “Gainsborough.  Turner.  Homer.  Butler.  Klee.”

“What?”

“It’s as if he is teaching himself to paint in watercolor by copying the greatest watercolorists.”  She looked at each one individually as Ray watched her from the doorway. 

She bent down and picked up the slim metal case.  She flipped it open to reveal a simple 8-color watercolor set and a sable brush.  Each color pan was almost empty and dried up.  “Eight colors.  He uses eight colors, now.”

Ray noticed something underneath the last painting.  He lifted it away from the wall and written underneath…

Viktor was here
 
* * * * * * * * * * * * 

 Two months later, 30 year old Viktor Popov exited the Seattle Art Museum onto First Avenue, holding a small pad and a cheap watercolor set.  He crossed the street and entered the Cherry Street coffee shop.  He found a seat at a back table and opened his pad and paints.  He went into the men’s room to put some water in a small travel cup.  When he returned, Janice Pennington-Kilduff sat at his table waiting for him.

 

Cherry Street Coffee House Color

 

8 Watercolor pans

4 Four

She looked at him anxiously.  “Viktor.  I would know you anywhere.”  But her face gave away the lie. 

He was tall and built solidly.  So different from the awkward boy he had once been.  He had the swollen fingers of a laborer.  His bulky sweatshirt had holes in it and his hair and beard were long and messy.

 Viktor sat down across from her and cleaned his glasses with his sweatshirt.  “What’re you doing here, Miss Pennington?”

“It wasn’t easy finding you, I’ll tell you that.  I’m sorry to hear about your parents, by the way.  You’ve been traveling a lot, I guess?”  Viktor put his glasses back on and squinted at her while she continued nervously, “I saw your work - the watercolors at Baldy’s.  They’re beautiful.  How could you just leave them like that?  They're in a safe place now and I can ship them to you here if you want?”

He shook his head.  “You can have ‘em, I got plenty.”  He looked back out onto the street as if he had forgotten what he is doing there at all.  Suddenly, he turned to her, “How old are you, Miss Pennington?”

“I am fifty one now, Viktor.  Why?”  He shrugged and looked back out onto First Avenue.  She continued, “I came to ask you… I have, what I think is, a wonderful opportunity for you, Viktor.  For us.”

He chuckled softly to himself.

 

Viktor at the Coffee Shop

 

Janice grabbed his two meaty hands and leaned her face closer to his.  “How would you like to come back to New York with me and see if we can get you set up in your own studio and get you some press - some big press?”

“What makes you think I want press?”

“Every artist needs publicity.  Right?”  Viktor sat back and smiled so she continued,  “I’ll bring you to New York with me – everything will be taken care of.  You just relax and enjoy yourself while I show your art work to some very important people.  Now, how does that sound?” 

He turned away again and looked out across the street at the Art Museum.  After what seemed like ten minutes without any reaction, she slowly tried again.  “Viktor?  Doesn’t that sound good to you?”

Another long wait until he finally turned to her.  “How old are you Miss Pennington?”     

“I am fifty one, remember?”  She started to look worried as he seemed to drift in and out of the conversation. 

“Is your parents’ money starting to run out, Viktor?  I can help, you know.  If you come back with me, I will make sure you never run out of money again.  It'll be great.”

Viktor grabbed his stuff and stood up next to the table.  “I have to go now.”

Janice scrambled to her feet.  “Wait.  Before you go… where are you staying?”

“Round the corner.”

Do you think you want come back to New York with me?”  She tried to keep up to him as he made his way out of the door and onto the sidewalk.  “Viktor, please come with me.”

He stopped so suddenly that she almost walked right into his back.  “Fine.  I'll go with you.”

“You will?  That's marvelous!  Can you leave right away?”

He shrugged. “Tomorrow?”

“I’ll pick you up.  I have a driver and I can get a flight for tomorrow afternoon.  Can you be ready?”

“Sure, I guess.”

She handed him a business card.  “Here, write down your address and phone number on the back.”  

He wrote down his address.  “I don’t have a phone.” 

“That’s okay, can I pick you up at noon?”

“Sure, I guess.”  He handed the card back to her.

She gave him an uncomfortable hug.  “Oh, Viktor, this is gonna be great.  You’ll see.  I am going to make you rich and famous.”

 

 

8 Watercolor pans

5 Five

She arrived at his door at exactly noon, just as she had promised.  When she knocked on the door, it swung open.  The apartment was completely empty again, just like at Baldy's, except for the leather portfolio case she had given him for high school graduation.

She knelt on the floor in front of the case and started to cry as she read the note taped to the outside of the case.

She opened the case to find hundreds of original watercolor paintings.  She gasped at the beauty of his work as she sat on the floor, looking at each and every one through her tears. 

Portfolio Case VP with note

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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What an amazing story. I bet there are a lot of "Viktors" out there in the world.
Spectacular.

It's like 8 creative streams meeting and carrying me away.

Really, really well done, Duane.
Fabulous. I was anxious that he would not go with her and sad to see he did not. But he had his beauty to carry with him. Maybe, in his eyes, he was already as rich and famous as he needed to be.

Really lovely.
i love: the layout, the drawings, the colors, the chapter headings, the story, and especially the links. and that the cherry street coffee shop is linked, too. smashing. may i hope there will be more?
Great story, and I love the way you separated the chapters!Awesome illustrations, as usual, but I wonder if the biggest challenge was creating Cindy's "masterpiece"?
Would have been interesting to watch you channel your inner 6 year-old. ;-)
xoxoxo,
You produced such wonderful, real characters that I'd almost forgotten this was fiction.
You've outdone yourself in a splendidly creative way.
Extremely original meld of your talents, with a bittersweet story. SO glad you're here.
This is some of the best writing I've seen on OS. You are very good at what you do. We should all be so lucky!
R~
I really enjoyed this piece--is all your artwork?? (except of course for the Goya) Very creative. I've always been facinated with savants, too.
Fantastic story: compelling and imaginative and presented so well. Impressive piece of work!
Duane, a wonderful post! I don't think I've seen any posts on OS before that had this type of attractive and interesting format. Your illustrations are perfect!!
A thought provoking story textured with incredible illustrations. There is a Viktor hiding in many artists: few have the foresight to eschew fame — fortune. ~R~
I really love this. And how you use the text to texture the art...
Wonderfully written, wonderfully illustrated. A great experience, all the way around.
That's why I'm not rich and famous too -- I told the talent scouts, no thanks -- no way I want to be rich and famous.

Seriously -- great great and great.
Outstanding, Duane. Thank you.
Wow. The illustrations - absolutely fabulous. The writing is equally captivating. Wonderful job.
I absolutely love this. Thank you.
Viktor is here in you, Duane. I hope you can feel the warm smile I have after reading this.
There is so much I could say about the wonderful drawing of adult Viktor and the way you wove the text into the artwork. Your Goya sketch is beautiful. Hell, Duane, they're all great!
"How old are you, Miss Pennington?" ?? I hope there is more to come, please!
Viktor has won my heart. He doesn't want to be rich and famous but what does he want?
POY,
S
Could we meet for a drink at Baldy Snooker's Lounge to discuss suffering for the sake of staying pure or some such interesting dilemma ? Wonderful.
O'Really - As far as I know, some artists are Viktors.

Thanks Cat! - You weren't very heavy - I'd carry you anytime.

mypsyche - Viktor is till the man he was 5 minutes before Janice showed up.

Femme - Now who doesn't like a nice coffee shop like Cherry Street?

Spotted - I did cindy's painting and Viktor's handwriting with my other hand.
Duane, you are so damn good.
Walk Away - Fiction?

Lea - I wish i was THERE!

scanner - Dude, that is way too generous.

Anne - yes, it's all mine. The Cherry Street graphic is just a Photoshop effect.
wow. That was wonderful.
I like Viktor. I get him.


Well done, Duane.
Incredibly beautiful--the drawings, colors, everything about it. I really enjoyed reading this!
I've read it through from start to finish at least three times now. You have put it together magnificently. It is well-written, with your usual ear for dialogue, beautifully illustrated, and you have tied the sections together very well. You are very good at this particular type of episodic construction.
Additionally, I find a startling resemblance between your grown Viktor and MicalPeace. Coincidence?
Duane -- Everyone has their own definition of success. We need to listen to our own voices. I loved this, all of it. r
I just came back to read this again. And pimp it into the feed.

This is just hands-down the reason I'm on OS. To read, and see, work like this.

Saddle up, Duane.
Great stuff, Duane. Loved this.
Pilgrim - thank you very much.

designator - Thanks, I keep pushing and working hard.

Chuck - Is there anything better than thought-provoking? It is the job of an artist.

marcelleqb - Glad you noticed the text-texture. Good eye.

Frank - Thanks, man. Glad it wasn't too long for you.
dude, that must have taken forever to put all that in a single post. very impressive. outstanding.
Great stuff, Duane. I like your style - both the story and graphics.
skeletnwmn - me too. Thanks.

Coyote - Thanks very much.

Philip - Thanks, man, I appreciate it.

voicegal - That's nice of you to say.

LifeIsGood - Maybe he just wants to be left alone?
Duane, I feel so honored that you used my painting!
You know, this would make a great picture book. If any publishers are reading, sign this guy on before he disappears into a coffee shop somewhere!
Rita - I will race you there but can we talk about you?

Unbreakable - alright, who told ya?

Spotted - I have been known to be clever at times.

odette - Glad you think so. Thank you.
Well, Duane, he's your character but I don't think he wants to be alone so much as that he just doesn't know yet what he wants other than his eight colors. For now that's enough but look at his face. He's looking for something!
WU Slowly - I'm so glad you like him.

Karin - thanks so much for reading, I appreciate it!

Wordsmith - you know, that bothered me - he reminded me of someone. I think you are correct. Maybe it was a subconscious thing, I don't know. Thank you for all your help.

OE - exactly. Who's to say what makes an artist successful?
Duane, you are a brilliant man . . . the story, the art, the colors . . . I am blown away yet again . . . just brilliant.
Cat - Saddle up? Last time someone said that to me... Hijinks ensued.

Kathy - you like my stuff, huh? Thanks!

vzn - no kidding - it took almost four weeks. My last two posts were done in the midst of getting this one done. Thanks for noticing.

Smithery - Thanks, buddy.
See what happens when I'm so late in commenting? People have stolen all my words.
Amazing, spectacular and fabulous - right off the bat. Then lovely, awesome, wonderful, best, fantastic, compelling, imaginative, perfect.....do you believe us now?
I can tell you put a ton of work into this. Putting all the elements of your arts together in a way that only Duane knows how to do. You are extremely original and it's not like anything I've ever seen before. It's absolutely fantastic.
you have a genius for art and a story too
I wish I could rate 100x. This, by far, is the most beautiful melding of artistic talent I have seen on OS. This is my favorite piece here.

I love the ending because it didn't feel like an ending. The colors, the variety of style, bringing in the "greats", and of course including my hometown ; )

Dear God, if I were Miss Pennington, I would be looking for you. Rated with awe.
Awesome as always Duane.

It's wild, I was just thinking today about the old artists, writers, poets, etc. and thought about how they likely didn't seek fame and fortune. I suppose many artists just want to create because they enjoy what they do.

Thanks for the incredible story man.
Wow. There are some that don't buy into the American Dream, but I don't know any. This was great!
wow, this is spectacular! a story of many colors, man. lvoe love love
shit, sorry. i meant to say a story in technicolor.
Fresh, unique, enjoyable!
Fabulous story, and the pictures add so much.
What a great use of your talents!
But not all of them, Nora.

Nyuk, nyuk, nyuk.....
Incredible journey in this piece Duane... Most loved!
RRR
Oh, Duane. You're such a show-off. I love you for it.
wonderful . love your stories. love your illustrations.
this is great. i love the illustrations with the text peeking through.
Miss Ross - What can I say to you? I owe you a lot. I hope I make you proud of me.

LIG - Is he? I don't know. Isn't it possible that some people are satisfied with their lives?

Owl - Your support has always been important to me. I hope you realize that.

j - it was all worth it just to see you write that. Thank you so much for everything.

Kathy - so nice to know you read my stuff. Thank you thank you.
Duane, you don't owe me a thing. As soon as you started posting one incredible art post after another, you became one of the most popular people at OS. I hope you realize that you are truly loved here.
This felt like a book to me. I don't mean that in the OS you-should-write-a-book way. I mean, I had the uncanny sensation of turning pages, of having a tactile experience. Like the color was something solid that I could hold, or the divisions between parts, with the decorated first paragraph, lit up some place in my brain where the book reading experience is stored. Mostly, I think it was the leisurely way in which the story arced, the way you kept adding more detail to the characters as they aged and changed over time. It was a great illusion.
Kate - you are so generous with your comments. Thank you so much.

scupper - I hope "A" means you like it. It is important to me that you do. Maybe you will let me know.

Boomer - you get it, man.

Mr. Rodgers - thanks, buddy.

THEO! - thank you so much!

wind - three of my favorite words for just about anything. Thanks.
Gentle nudge....okay, boot up the arse. Take your pick.

THIS IS THE BEST FUCKING THING I'VE SEEN IN HERE....IT HAS IT ALL!!!!

Sorry. (Tucking in shirt and smoothing my skirt).
Kate - Thankity Thanks

Miss Nora - Thank you for the compliment.

Cat - even YOU have NO idea.

patrick - that was nice to hear. Thanks.

Miss Vowels - Show off? Shoot, you haven't seen nuthin' yet.

km - But nowhere near as beautiful as your photos.

bstrangely - TEXTure.

Miss Ross - We disagree. But thank you so much.

Miss Lake - Thank you so much for enjoying all the layers.

Cat - stop it, you nut.
Everything about this is incredible - the story, the artwork, the way it comes together and speaks as a single piece. Just terrific, Duaneart...simply terrific!
Oh, this is just so different than anything I've ever seen! I love it! What a great story!

(thumbified for artistic merit)
I am blown away, a simple tale told so well and the illustrations -- marvelous. Thank you.
Brilliant work Duane. Cat knows of which she speaks!
Yes, yes she does....(inspecting nails)
On baited breath to see that tiara on you! ;)
Duane,

When you return Cat's tiara you may have to stretch it out a fair bit first. It seems that her head may be going through a bit of an expansion!
Wow, wow, wow. What Sirenita said about the book experience. I didn't know where I was or what else was happening when I was reading this. Beautiful work... What Cat said. This IS the best thing I've seen on OS. You deserve the whole royal ensemble for this, and I can't wait to see you sport your well-deserved tiara! Did I mention that this was stunning, amazing, and delightful? It is.
It's really not fair that you are so able to paint with both words and images. Weren't we supposed to get married at some point? Don't you owe me a couple of lawnmowings, at least?
Amazing. Are you single? Just kidding.
One of the finest and most creative posts I've ever read. Extraordinary.
Oopsie - Thank you for your seemingly never-ending sweet comments.

Thank you so much, Jodi!

Emma Peel blown away? Is there a better compliment?

Mr. Canuk - She hides it well but she is actually a nice chic.

or I could've just waited until Cat answered herself...

Kate - for some reason, Cat does not find my picture with the tiara appropriate. Please pester her.

CK - Okay, that was just the best comment - talk about blowing me away! I love your work.

Ms. Bells - Do you not know what I would do to mow your lawn. We are being euphemistic here, aren't we? Cuz I would mow your front lawn, your side lawn, and of course, your back lawn - twice!

Hope - Not yet.

Steve - Dude, such an incredible compliment. Thank you so much.
Wonderfully done. You have such amazing talents.
I am speechless. This is wonderful.
This was wonderful, full of color and light and life. I'm glad I stopped by!!!
This was beautifully told and illustrated, I loved every second of it!