FEBRUARY 9, 2010 7:23PM

From the ashes

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Like a ghost

you were caught somewhere between death

and rebirth

rising from the ashes of the past

with an armored smile

and a bloodied heart.


We drift together

in a series of scotch soaked evenings

angel kisses and a hungry wanting

I breathe with you

in the velvet darkness

no longer am I frightened,

This haunting is sweet.



We slide beneath the layers of this cloud like abyss

warm and sacred.

Enveloped in this cocoon of quiet bliss

we are whole again.


Indeed you know these truths.

You have won me over again and again

with your quiet charm

and lost innocence.


In this part joyous

part melancholy seduction

we share moments bitter and sweet

and revel in their divinity

This we know, is sacred.


You lie with me

naked and boyish

and I draw invisible words

on the small of your back.

I softly graze the length of

those limbs

and speak to you in languid strokes.


Lost love

and all its toll taking

have taught us to appreciate

this gift.

The lessons burned

but our wounds give off their own light

and we wear them with honor.


I thank you for the everydays you make into holidays

and for showing me that it's possible

to re arrange the pieces

of a fragmented dream

to create a new destiny

full of boundless beauty, inspiration

and love.


All roads have led to this moment

the path is ours now

with all the days to come shiny and bright.

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Ok, I admit...I don't know anything about poetry, just thought I'd give it a shot. Meant to hit "edit" but hit publish instead...so here it is:) inspired by Stella's recent post.
This was so very beautiful and I can relate to every single word. Thank you for the opportunity to read this.
The only thing that comes to mind to say...and Im sure you didn't intend this..is

Goth lives
I don't care about Hallmark holidays, but I swear, I'm not Goth:)

Torman: Thanks, your're sweet. I hope you're doing well.

Stellaa: Nice idea. I hope the real poets out there will get the recognition they deserve~
"My Lady doth protest too much..methinks" (Shakespeare).
What a lovely beginning! New love passionate and hopeful, perfect for Valentine's Day..
Very nice, liked it.

And therefore,

RATED!
Wonderful poem.
The lessons burned
but our wounds give off their own light
and we wear them with honor.
This is a fantastic piece. If this isn't your genre, it should be.

R
Art: I'm honored that you stopped by...

Rita: Ahh, new love. Thanks for stopping by:)

Tink: Glad you liked it. First stab at a new genre for me...

trilogy...looking forward to meeting you in person soon:) Thanks for stopping by!

aintthatamerica: I'm flattered, really..
It's lovely, Eden...and if you want I'll include it in my Love Letter Project...send me a PM...xox
Robin: Thank you, you're sweet:) sent you a PM.

Zaj: Glad you enjoyed it.....
Smoldering, erotic, breathy, human, passionate, and sweaty (the good kind). And ya can never go wrong with a little scotch.

R.
::sigh::

that's swoon-y, girl!
Reads like a Don Henley song. I like it. A lot.
Kasey: Ahh yes, the wonders of just one scotch on the rocks. Okay, maybe two, adds to the bliss somehow ( and trust me, I really don't drink much, or often. Thanks for commenting.

Mother: Your poem inspired me to try a new genre today...:)

walkawayhappy: Love. It can be really great, sometimes.

Lefty: I'm a lefty too. Glad you liked this.
This is lovely and has a certain lyrical quality to it... very real.
mypsyche: Thanks, I tried. I was inspired:) I like to not write about sad things too, sometimes:) ox
Your writing can really evoke images and sensations. I loved "drawing invisible words on the small of your back." The scotch-soaked evenings made me worry, though, and I expected a different outcome. I'm glad it turned out happy.
Sirenita: your instincts were right on, this, like most of what I write is but a reflection on a moment in time....
"the everydays you make into holidays"--well, it doesn't get any better than that, does it? Nicely done.
Pilgrim: thank you for stopping by:)
Beautiful. You are singing. Sometimes "love" poems make me cringe on sight. But you manage to use the theme in a much better way than most. I'm babbling. I really like this. Well done.
Apparently you *do* know something about poetry my dear.
This is delicate and exquisite and sensual.
"I draw invisible words on the small of your back." _R
Alison: I know. Love. I tried not to be sappy. Sappy makes me cringe. ox

Joan: Well, I tried. It was a fun experiment....:) Thanks for stopping by:)
Lovely, seductive poem. I am not big on fiction or poetry, preferring to write about politics and sports, but this had a lyrical, sensuous softness, which was beguiling. Lovely, rated.
Ahhh..truly beautiful..I like these kind of poems..With love and passion..:)
Professor: I'm not usually big on poems either, this one just came to me somehow:) thanks for stopping by.

Abrahim: Yes, with love and passion. It doesn't get any better than that now does it?
I think this was beautiful! Very nicely done
Thank you luchlady:) Hang in there girl.
Hauntingly beautiful. Much love to you.
Humbled by the real gift of beauty in several lines.

Consider your experiment a success!

-r-
I think this is very beautiful - so many lines I wanted to quote back to you. I quote it all back to you. (Look above.)
Back now from a weekend unplugged--no internet, no tv, just a roaring river, candles and some nudity. All good things on Valentine's day!

Jill: Thank you for stopping by. Much love right back.

Eck: Thank you. Appreciate the encoragement on this, my little experiment:)

Beth: You're sweet. I'm glad you liked it. Something different for me.....
I like how "this haunting is sweet" circles back to "ghost". And all the Phoenix imagery. And the velvet darkness.
Don't know anything about poetry? Ha! Surely you jest.
How about baseball and "outta of the park" hits!
Evocative, sensual, full.
Followed another poet in, looks like they knew where the where going.

Great start. Strong word.

Rated
to re arrange the pieces
of a fragmented dream
to create a new destiny


Just loved that.
scupper~I think I could learn a lot from you. Your writing is breathtaking.

Charlie~Thank you for stopping by.

John~What can we do but work with the fragments we're left with when the original dream fades away? Thanks for stopping by.