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Some believe in destiny and some believe in fate ---------------------------------------------------- I believe that happiness is something we create --------------------------------------------------- And you'd best believe that I'm not gonna wait ----------------------------------------------------------'Cuz there's gotta be something more ------------------------------------------------ There's gotta be more than this ---------------------------------------------------------- I need a little less hard time ------------------------------------------ I need a little more bliss ----------------------------------------------- I'm gonna take my chances ------------------------------------------- Taking the chance I might --------------------------------------------- Find what I'm looking fo-oo-oo-oo-or ------------------------------- There's gotta be something more --------------------------------------

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NOVEMBER 6, 2009 4:13PM

Claire in Paris: explicit sex in Calvados (Chapter 3)

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            Claire drove the rented car.  Jack navigated.  The Mini had a stick shift.  Jack slid his left hand between her thighs. Every time she changed gears or braked, he squeezed.  She parked near the market in Calvados and they went to buy food and wine.  Choosing onions, Claire realized she remembered nothing about the drive from Paris except how his hand had felt.

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             They had been kissing for an hour, maybe more, moving around the house from one room to the next, trying to unpack, find things.  Standing in the kitchen, sitting on the couch, rolling off onto the rug, leaning against the tall footboard in one bedroom.  Stopping for a moment, trying to talk, unable to look away.  The air around them vibrated; the tiny house pulsed.

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             Her fingers shake on the buttons, the buckle.  He tries to help her.  She pushes his hand away.  He is standing and tightens his thighs to stop the trembling.  As the zipper snicks, she rolls her hot forehead on his belly. And moans.

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             Claire is dreaming.  The baby nurse is saying, “Nose to nipple. See?  Her mouth will open and it just falls in perfectly.  See?  That’s a smart baby.”

            A ping of pain, then a fullness, a gathering.  Her eyes almost open.  His head is above her left breast.  She rolls to her side to make it easier for him, combs her fingers into his hair.

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             There is a mirror in the dark bedroom, full length, propped against a wall.  A trapezoid of silver in its black rectangle plays a black-and-white movie Claire can barely see:  a slice of Jack’s upright torso, one hand holds the crux of her off the mattress, the other’s thumb … one heel is on his shoulder.  His back arches, relaxes, arches, relaxes, in exquisite rhythm, that perfect pace between slow and slightly faster.  She watches him drive her off the cliff.

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             Claire crawls toward the pillows.  Their mouths slide together.  "See?"  she says, "That's what we taste like."      

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             It’s just dawn and Claire is sleeping.  She’s a noisy sleeper, sounds like a loud purr or a low growl; sometimes she talks, “Not the coffee, just toast.”  She dreams; her eyelids flicker.  She lies on her side.  Jack has been watching her face, gets up, goes around and climbs back in bed behind her, tucks himself into her S.  Claire pats his hand, doesn’t wake.   Jack kisses her shoulder.  His eyes close.  It’s Saturday.

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intermittent works well here. ~R~
Femme, its Friday night, I got two hours more at work and about a two hour commute home, you gotta post this? Can I be Claire? Huh, just for a little while? Thanks . R
chuck: it may be the only way it works. here. -)

rita: and what are you doing reading sex stuff at work,?
you go ahead, be claire. i'm going out to find jack ...
How the fuck did I miss this hot piece of writing? Damn. Just damn. O'Really sexy and provocative. Considers going back to bed and reading this once more with hands under the covers... This was fucking awesome.
*SIGH*
Thanks for taking me away for a few moments!
I am really enjoying this story and I love the way you are writing it!
This was so well written that I came back for a second round of it. This must mean that I'm horny for your writing. Or that your writing makes me horny. Oh shit. You know what I mean. I need to find a man. Today.
The implicit as explicit. Excellent.
If only life imitated art, I'd become Claire! Your writing is erotic and romantic. I love it.
Oh my. I remember this. The trembling, fingers combing through the hair, a heel on a shoulder. I'm there. You're really good at this. Such an economy of words, yet so full of passion.
Excuse me, I have to read this again... and again...
Rated? Oh yeah!
Oops, almost forgot - that song! Wow! **long, slow sigh**
spotted: you're welcome. you deserve a flight of fancy. and thanks.

O'R: gets the point across, don't you think? i tried hard with this one, no pun. i so get what you're saying, but i've got a man. need a jack .

unbreakable: thank you thank you. that song is a killer, isn't it? damn
rainee and trudge: how did i miss you? please forgive me. thank you for loving it, rainee.

and trudge, i'm so grateful you came over and that you like it. see you again ...
Unbreakable led me to this post and I shall thank her. This is great writing. Very provocative, emotional, and extremely gripping. I couldn't look away and that is good.
O'Really: You need a man? Not surprising at all. Have you tried an assisted living facility?
Damn. That was some cliff!
GJI: not being able to look away is very good. thanks so much. hope to see you again.

blumenthal=incorrigible.

steve: indeed. [ahem]
I shouldn't read stuff like this on Sunday morning.

Damn! That was very hot and very well told.

This one almost killed me:
"As the zipper snicks, she rolls her hot forehead on his belly. And moans."

wow.
You should be writing romance. Seriously. This is good.
thanks, gwen. i'm thinking about it.
Forgive my being so late in coming ... to the party. You asked if this was too hot for this forum -- are you kidding? This sort of piece is about as close as most of us get to sex anymore!

By the way, I think it's time for an explicit sex TV soap opera -- how about As the Zipper Snicks -- they might get Viagra as a sponsor.