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femme forte aka candace

femme forte aka candace
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Some believe in destiny and some believe in fate ---------------------------------------------------- I believe that happiness is something we create --------------------------------------------------- And you'd best believe that I'm not gonna wait ----------------------------------------------------------'Cuz there's gotta be something more ------------------------------------------------ There's gotta be more than this ---------------------------------------------------------- I need a little less hard time ------------------------------------------ I need a little more bliss ----------------------------------------------- I'm gonna take my chances ------------------------------------------- Taking the chance I might --------------------------------------------- Find what I'm looking fo-oo-oo-oo-or ------------------------------- There's gotta be something more -------------------------------------- ♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫ ♪♫•**•.¸♥¸.•*¨*•♪♪♫•**•.¸¸♥

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AUGUST 10, 2011 9:55AM

out of the clear blue sky

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Toms-stripe-espadrille 

 

 

 

        The sounds of slack boat sails slapping masts and chains clanking carried on the gusty breeze from the harbor to the waiters’ bench at the Body Beautiful car wash two short blocks away. A twenty-degree respite from the convection-oven heat of August had drawn me (and, by the length of the line at the vacuums, many of my fellow hundred-degree-haters) out of the house to blink in the springlike sunshine and wash summer’s grime off my car. The blue bench matched the gentle sky.

 

            I usually try to pair the cars, each circled by a bead bracelet of wiping, spraying Mexican men, with the waiting people, but today I tilted my iPad, trying to read Facebook’s news feed in the glare. Squirming, I arched against the slatted back, the bench flexed, and the stranger sitting at the other end glanced left. I looked right.

 

            “I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to rock us like that.”

 

            “It’s okay,” he smiled from behind the black aviators that ridged his buzzed temples.

 

            Military was written all over him:  straight back, clean shave, pressed khakis and slow-heartbeat calm. Confident. A pilot? Tan neck, arms … a gold ring on his left hand, a fast sparkle. Was that a little ruby? Perfectly clipped, clean nails, white against toast-brown fingers.

 

            Out among the dripping, drying cars was a woman, her back to us, standing next to a white sedan while the last rub-rub man worked on the doorjamb she pointed at. She had beautiful legs in high striped espadrilles, caramel skin stretched over her muscled calves and spurs of anklebones, a black skirt sucked by the wind against the backs of her thighs.

 

            Long auburn hair dropped on her shoulders and kept going, ending halfway down her back in an absent-minded curl. The wind kept trying to pick it up and roll it tighter, only succeeding in turning the ends a bright copper where they thinned to wisps before falling back and sticking with dirty–penny.

 

            He watched her, those legs, that hair, the dome of her ass. The wind touching her.

 

            His right hand held his ticket and folded tip money between thumb and fist. The left lay wrist down on his thigh, heavy, waiting.

 

            I could see my fingers curling over and into his palm, crooking my pinkie around his thumb, squeezing gently, his hand closing on mine. I could whisper, “I know.” 

            Looking up, I was caught by his eyes, behind that dark plastic, finding mine above my blushing cheeks.


            “I know,” they said. “I know.”

 

 

 

 

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thanks for the morning smile sweet beautiful writer
Carwash fantasy. Him, not her, of course. Watching over the rub rub guys and pointing to missed spots, not sexy.
whoo! whew! don't think you missed any spots, candace! exquisite little detour in my morning :)
Super cute shoe! Cool fiction too.
Love this! And Barry's comment: spot on - candacesbrain.com indeed. A lovely site that I am so happy we all get to visit from time to to time!
Candace,
What great "fictionalized fiction"! The shoes are fabu too. :)
Men are so visual, aren't they?
("Long auburn hair dropped on her shoulders and kept going, ending halfway down her back in an absent-minded curl."

Dang, but that reminds me of someone....)

Anyway, a nice piece of writing, Candace.
Ah, empathy.

Just this morning I was reading a piece by Ian McEwan ("Only Love and then Oblivion") where he said (wait, gotta go get it): "Imagining what it is like to be someone other than yourself is at the core of our humanity. It is the essence of compassion, and it is the beginning of morality."
There's a lot to be said for quality espadrilles.
I was there. I was watching the "long auburn hair (that) dropped on her shoulders and kept going..."
connection :D
I love that the connection is between the two people on the bench and not the object of fantasy- very nice
Ooh, I think it's time to go get my car washed!
A great short, sweet sexy piece ...
I know, I know. xo
this brings a big grin from ear to ear dear.
Thanks for that today.
Good connection to me here...
Jeez louise I love that.
Summer sun, cool shoes, hot woman, heated man, wet car... and your imagination. Perfect in every way.
I have been the lady in this story more times than a few. Not the object of beauty mind you. The knowing onlooker, that's me.
I like how you're both in the fantasy, two strangers, appreciating beauty for very different reasons.
Hey, kids. Here’s a new trick: typing a long response comment in Word (then copying/pasting) so the OS s/w doesn’t eat it when you’re halfway finished. Grrrrrrrrrr. At least it will get the caps right.

Barry, that was a perfect first comment at 7 AM my time. For a second, I thought I had a real website. So funny and lovely. thank you.

I think the fantasy was going both ways, miss heron. And maybe the rub rub guy didn’t mind, as close as he was to those gorgeous calves. ☺

Sharon, glad you liked the turn around the block!!

Thank you, Christina!

Blue Tejas woman, you are too kind, like your Tejas compadre up there.

DHSS: thanks!! (pssst: those are actually my shoes but don’t tell. It’s part of the fiction.)

Linda, they are. As are women. At least some of us. I mean them. (no admission here. Heh)

Bo, that does sound like someone you know, doesn’t it? A redhead, perhaps, that you’ve written about? Oh, yes, I think so. Thanks, dude.

c&v: I love that quote, don’t you? And I’m sure glad that I’ve taken at least the first baby steps on the morality path. A hard one, that, especially with handsome men hanging around the car wash. ;)

nana: bwwwaahaahaaahaahaa. i’m saving that one. Might be my new motto.

Jeff, you and bo up there had the same picture in your heads, I think. Well, I mean generically, not that you were thinking of his wife or anything. Wait. Let me rephrase this.

Drema, get your keys, woman, and move yourself quickly to the nearest Body Beautiful!!

Thank you, ms. Scarlett. I knew you’d know. ☺

Thanks, smithery! Glad you like it!

Keep grinning, mission. That’s what Wednesdays are for!

Kim, I love that you said “jeez louise.” One of my favorite expressions. xo

Awwww, sally, I love your comments. No one nicer on the planet than my sister.

BB, me too. That’s an excellent phrase, too, “knowing onlooker.” Stealing that one …

Thanks, bell. That was the idea, the duplicity of it. Though I’m not sure they had absolutely different reasons. One might have sorta bled over into the other one, if you know what I mean.
This was hot and cool, like you.
Interesting dynamic.

The guy. His eyes never made it to the espadrilles.

Of course, we know. We know.
lea, you oughta know, you know, that hot/cool thing. you could give lessons.

hey, nick. we know you do. we just let you think you're being all sly and stuff. and the guy *started* with the espadrilles. :)
This was a pearl of a piece. I love it when a good writer captures a snapshot in time like you did here. This detail was excellent: "a gold ring on his left hand, a fast sparkle. Was that a little ruby?"
As far as Miss auburn hair, I agree with greenheron, little too much queen bee is shown for we realists.
spud, i'm with you on all points. she had a really beautiful bum, though. (that wasn't fiction). thanks for the compliments, friend.
"I didn't mean to rock us like that"---I love that. For all sorts of reasons.
An occasion when the Greek sculptor's approach would not have been best--because this was. Not sure we escaped the heat all that much.
All it takes is a second.
All it takes is a second.
Well. I love your "fictionalized fiction." ~r
You are a spectacular writer. Period.
Fiction or a slice of real life, it sounds so romantic and intimate.
My car is looking really dirty.
rated with love