fingerlakeswanderer

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Lorraine Berry lives in the Fingerlakes region of New York, although it's her transplanted home. On weekends, she can be heard throughout the area, cheering on her beloved Manchester City F.C. When not writing at Does This Make Sense? or Talking Writing, she can be found hiking with her two dogs, hanging out with her two daughters, eating what her beloved Rob has cooked for her, or teaching creative writing at a small college in the area.

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FEBRUARY 13, 2009 12:30PM

Icarus

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Picture yourself on a boat on a river
With tangerine trees and marshmallow skies


Perhaps it's the phrasing of the question, but when I picture myself in a world in which transportation has become green, I imagine flying. Not drug-induced, like those women in the 10th century who believed they flew with Hulda, going from house to house cleaning up disheveled households; nor do I think of individual jet packs that zip us from place to place.


I think, instead, of Icarus and Daedalus, who longed to slip the chains that bound them by making wings of feathers and wax. We know what happened to Icarus: he flew too close to the sun and burned up and crashed. But Daedalus, he had the knowledge, he knew what it was to fly, and he watched in horror as his son abused the privilege and drowned.


I have long envied birds. I stop and hold my body still when a hawk soars above me. We have so many here: marsh hawks, red-tail hawks, sharp-shinned hawks, the occasional bald eagle, and in fantastic news, the peregrine falcon has made a successful return to New York state. We now have more breeding pairs of peregrines than any other states in the east.


I imagine myself on a hot day, picking up a draft, and flattening my wings so that I might glide. What would I see? If I was graced with the eyes of the raptors, I would see the tiniest vole knocking down individual grass blades as it searched for food, or, if the peregrine falcon, the pigeon flying below me. I would aim myself at 200 miles per hour and snatch that pigeon from the air, take it home to my nest and eat until  was sated.
In my green world, I would inhabit space where no one could touch me, just the wind, feeling the ripple of air against my wing tips, hooding my eyes against the sun, screaming my delight so that the goddess might hear my joy.

peregrine-falcon
At daybreak, I would watch the swirling pinks and blues paint over the dark of night, and in that netherworld between light and dark, I would begin my journey, marking my territory, reminding those who lived below me that I would take them only if hungry. And at night, like it was last night, I would soar against the mushed pumpkin waning full moon, breathing in the smells that signal the end of day: the drying mud, the alfalfa dancing in its fields, the smell of life, and of living.


The tree I would perch in would be a snag, some old tree that despite its hollowness, stands tall,  and I would build my nest at its apex, raise my babies there, teach them the wonder that is all around us.


In a green world, I could transform myself from a slow, clumsy biped into a aerodynamic raptor, queen of all I survey, but a humble monarch, keeping watch, protecting the earth.

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Icarus was the son who crashed. Going to finish reading now.
I love to watch hawks ride the thermals. My spirit soars with them, gliding just because they can.

Icarus is the appropriate title. %;-)
Mrs. Michaels, I switched the names:
"Daedalus managed to get out of the Labyrinth - after all, he had built it and knew his way around. Daedalus decided that he and his son Icarus had to leave Crete and get away from Minos, before he brought them harm. However, Minos controlled the sea around Crete and there was no route of escape there. Daedalus realized that the only way out was by air.

To escape, Daedalus built wings for himself and Icarus, fashioned with feathers held together with wax. Daedalus warned his son not to fly too close to the sun, as it would melt his wings, and not too close to the sea, as it would dampen them and make it hard to fly."
but I agree, Icarus is the title. He's the one who fascinates me. I'd fly too close to the moon, however, not the sun.
Gorgeous. We live in a woodsy area and see hawks fairly often and hear owls at night (never see'em though) as well as huge number of "ordinary" birds. I love watching and hearing them.
This is really great. We have many fish hawks (ospreys) around and they are magnificent. I've witnessed many catching fish. Very cool. I spot Bald eagles every other week or so and have trouble taking my eyes off of them. I consider spotting one as a good luck omen. I saw one about two weeks ago flying in circular formation with about twenty turkey vultures. Awesome!
I haven't spent a day in the wild since I was a young boy, up till a few moments ago. thanks for the imagery.
A beautiful imagining of flight. Lovely writing.
Thank you for the compliments. When I saw this week's contest question, my head filled with colors, and I could only see myself in the sky, soaring free. Probably not a realistic view of what's possible, but a hope maybe, that some day, we'll be able to transport ourselves without harming the environment. Perhaps even becoming a part of that environment.
Nice to see you soar. You do it well.
I share the sentiment.

I love my dreams where I get to fly. Usually they involve me having some super power that allows me to fly like superman (but usually not as fast). Sometimes my flying is like the way I swim in water. I have to move my arms to make me go forward, up, and down. I love flying in my dreams. Thanks for reminding me of those dreams.

Maybe I should get a bird feeder so the birds will remind me of my dreams of flying.
Beautiful!

I was working on the 16th floor of a building on Riverside Drive in NYC one day when a hawk began flying around right at my level. I think he knew I was completely fascinated by him because he stuck around to the point I thought he might be someone I once knew.
beautiful, to fly as in a dream
oh, this is a stunning piece. your use of language is magical. i often dream of flying but it's not the poetry that you envision.
thank you for sharing this. but, please, stay away from the sun, girl.

love love love and gratitude and rated for amazingness
YES!!!! That is the true spirit of green