fireeyes24

fireeyes24
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MAY 7, 2009 11:02AM

Brush With Death-The Joy Ride Gone To Hell

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My friends and I were at a high school bonfire party out in the country on a Friday night. Chris had finally showed up with his new corvette that his father had bought him for his 16th birthday. He was one of the lucky ones who never done without and had gotten everything he asked for; you know one of those people who are born with a silver spoon in their mouths. He walked up to where I stood talking to Tyler and a couple other friends.


He nudged me on the arm and told me “Hey come see my new ride I got yesterday. It is so sweet!”


I laughed at him and said, “Okay! Just a minute. Come with me to get you a beer and let me refill mine first.”


Then I motioned for Tyler to come with us. Tyler and I refilled our beers and Chris grabbed one for himself. Then we walked over by Chris’s new ride. It was a brand-new 1981 Corvette convertible, crimson red color with white pin stripping. We walked around the car and checked it all out inside and outside from bumper to bumper.


Chris looked at me and said, “I bet it would beat that Mustang of yours.”


I laughed and replied “Yeah right! We will have to see about that one.”


Tyler jumped into the conversation and said, “Hey Chris lets go for a joy ride.”


Chris looked at Tyler and then back at me and asked me “You want to go? We can make room for three.”


I said, “Damn straight! Lets go!”


We all three got into the Corvette I was sitting on Tyler’s lap. We headed out of the long gravel driveway and hit the paved road. Chris drove pretty mellow on the country roads until we got to the highway. Then on the highway it was metal to metal and all balls to the wall. We were flying on the pavement like the wheels weren’t even touching it felt like car had wings. Chris had woven in and out of the small amount of traffic he drove around 120 mph. We all laughed hysterically hooted and hollered like a bunch of crazy idiots, just out to have the time of our lives with no cares in the world.


All of a sudden Chris yelled “Oh Fuck!”


Tyler and myself looked up quickly out the front windshield and we saw that there was a semi truck that had merged on to the highway in front of us.


Tyler yelled, “ Dude! Get over into the next lane. Now!”


Chris looked over his left shoulder and yelled back “I can’t get over there are to many cars.”


I yelled at Chris “Come on Dude! Cut someone off! Get over fast!”

There was a guardrail and huge cliffs on the right side of us, which made for no place to go.


Chris yelled “Tyler throw her on the floor and bend over her as far as you can get down because this isn’t going to be a fun ride.”


Chris tried to slow down and applied his brakes but there was no way to slow the car down that quick and at that high rate of speed. I quickly crawled down onto the floorboard and curled up like a fetus in the womb as tight as I could get under the dashboard covered my head with my arms to protect it. The adrenaline rushed through my body so fast I thought I would have a heart attack at 16 years old. Tyler bent down as low as he could and placed his body over the top of mine with his head covered by the dashboard and his arms.


The smell of burnt rubber about choked me to death as it made it way up through the floorboard. So many thoughts ran through my mind, the main one was that I didn’t want to die. I had no idea what happened above me all I heard was Chris as he cussed up a storm. I heard the high-pitched squealing sound of the brakes as they rubbed against the rotors. I heard the tires as they made a loud rubbing noise against the pavement underneath them. Tyler mumbled something but I could not understand what he said.  It was like time had gone in slow motion it almost stood still.


I heard a huge loud bang and then the car started to shake and move from side to side, it felt like I was on a really horrible scary roller coaster ride. The piercing sounds of scraping metal like nails on a chalkboard made my teeth want to grind together. Bone chilling sounds of ripping and cracking fiberglass made me cringe and my muscles tighten up. Suffocating smoke raged into the car and made me gag and cough I couldn’t breathe. Crunching roaring sounds of mental and fiberglass became affright in my soul. Screaming sounds of my friends stopped my heart with every sound they made. Squealing sounds of brakes and burning rubber of tires as they came to a stop. The hissing sound of air brakes as they were released.


We no longer moved time just stood still and waited for the next moment to take place. The noises and piercing sounds stopped there was a calmness an unexplainable silence like the calm after the storm. I could not move it felt like I was smashed into a small tin can. I could not hear my friends any longer. I was frightened by the thoughts of what had happened. I stayed still and listened for sounds of anything in the world beyond this tiny can I was crushed into. Silence became alarmingly piercing to my heart and brought cold chills through out my body.


I heard worried and alarmed voices as people screamed. I could not make out what they said they were to far in the distances. I had begun to have problems to breathe as the intense thick fog of burnt metal, ripped fiberglass, smoking hot brakes and burnt rubber consumed the air around me. I didn’t feel hurt but I couldn’t move to even start to tell if I was hurt or not. I waited wondered worried about what happened and what was going to happen next. Was I dead? Sure didn’t feel like I was dead, not like I would have known what it felt like to be dead anyway. Thinking oh my God that someone had to find us in this cavern of fiberglass and metal. Thoughts continued to rush though my mind like an avolance rips out the very earth within it path.  


The heart stopping bone-chilling sounds of sirens broke and engulfed the silence. A peace came over me that maybe someone knew where we were and that they would find us in this crushed darkness. I heard people scream and bark orders of what to do but I couldn’t hear the words spoken over the sounds of the sirens. They had to find us soon before it was too late for the three of us. I couldn’t breathe my heart pounded like it would jump out of my chest. My mind wouldn’t stop thinking about the many possibilities of the outcome of what happened. I thought I didn’t want to die I hadn’t lived my life yet.


Roaring sounds of a crane motor and clinking rattling of chains became an affright noise over the sirens. Scraping squealing sounds of metal and ripping cracking fiberglass consumed the silence around me in that tiny tin can. The car started to move as if it would begin to crush the can in more around me. I tried to open my eyes but the smoke brunt them and tears quickly rolled to the surface.

I wanted to yell “Stop moving the car. Stop it is going crush me.” my voice gasped and cracked I couldn’t make a sound.

I heard the many voices become clearer like the cavern had opened up. I still could not understand what they said my heart pounded so loud and my head throbbed, the noises of them pounded against my eardrums and made it hard to hear anything else.


Angry ragged sounds of saws cutting and ripping through the metal, and fiberglass. The smell of smoke and gasoline started to flow into the small area around me. The popping and breaking noises as things begin to be released. The voices consumed the closed silence around me I could almost understand what they yelled in the background. I felt Tyler’s body move upward which opened up a little of the space around me.

I heard the heart piercing sound of Tyler as he yelled out “There is someone else in the car. You have to get her out.” He repeated it over and over “There is someone else in the car. You have to get her out.”

His voice echoed through the air and in my head it was all I could hear repeated over and over. I thought they had to listen to him they had to find me and get me out.

A cold rough feeling hand touched my neck for a few minutes the touch sent soothing chills through out my body.

I heard a man's voice as he yelled out “I have a pulse! She is alive! Bring back the saws. We are going to have to cut her out. Hurry!”

The sound of his voice became like a peaceful heaven to me, as the thought came to my mind, they found me.

His serene gentle voice repeated to me “Honey hang on we are going to get you out.”

Thoughts rolled through my mind I was either dead and my spirit escaped the carcass enclosed in that tin can or I was alive soon to be out of this closed in darkness.


Roaring angry saws ripped and cut through the metal and fiberglass that made the enclosure that surrounded me. Voices yelled and barked out orders which made my head throb worst. I felt the air as it rushed around me as the space was opened up. I felt strong arms that pulled me slowly out of the tiny hidden spot under the dashboard.  

Gentle strong arms wrapped around me as they carried me away from the pile of rubbish to salvation. I moved and tried to look back but the man put his large rough hand on my head and forced my head to his shoulder.

He told me “Honey don’t look back. You don’t want to look back.”

He walked away from the crash as he cut through the thick fog of smoke that engulfed and consumed the air around us.

I opened my eyes and seen Tyler as he laid on a gurney he was alive but where was Chris. The gentle kind man laid me on a gurney and someone placed a mask over my face. Oh air! I could breathe. I wanted to inhale fast and take it all in as quickly as possible.

A voice told me “Breathe slow and easy.”

Tyler and myself were rushed to the hospital for treatment and testing. Chris had been decapitated and dismembered from the chest up. Tyler was paralyzed from the waist down. Myself I came out with bruises, a few broken bones and many cuts through out my body, I was the lucky one that night.

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Gonna have to rename you CatEyes, not FireEyes ... on account of you worked on using up a good number of your nine lives. Scary stuff.

Rtaed
Rated, too. Damn dyslexia.
Scariest story ever, girl! You are one lucky, blessed person. What a horrific experience. No such thing as a joy ride, I imagine. So happy for you and your presence here.
Fireeyes, what a story! It's the first time I have read an account of an accident in a Corvette and the fiberglass body is a feature we often forget about as part of the Corvette's composition. So sorry to hear about the tragic demise of your friend, Chris, and that Tyler was paralyzed from the waist down. You were clearly very lucky in the aftermath of all of that, despite some broken bones and cuts, as you mentioned.
Holy Crap!!! Youth and cars just don't mix. Throw in horsepower and it just gets worse. Been in a few major accidents myself, but nothing like this one. Wrote about one for OS that I was a witness to and had part in the rescue. Same thing. Too much power, too much speed.
So glad you are here to tell about it. Sorry about your friends.
My god, what a horrible story. You have seen so much, my friend, and survived it all. I agree with Boanerges; those nine lives come in handy! Many hugs; this can't be an easy memory to live with.
Boan-It was very scary accident. CatEyes huh? Thank you

JustCathy-It was very horrible to experience. No there isn't such a thing as a joy ride, no this one anyway. I am so happy to be here. Thank you

designanator-Yes we sometimes forget the the corvette's composition is made of fiberglass. It was very tragic about both of my friends, I was lost for a long time without them because they are my best buddies we hung out everywhere together. I was very lucky to have lived through it all and to only come out with a few broken bones and cuts. Thank you

Michael- Yes youth and fast cars don't mix at all. It was a horrible accident and I was very lucky to walk out alive. I was devastated with the lose and Chris and Tyler being paralyzed. We were best buds. I read your story about the mustang you wrote here on OS, it was a great story. Thank you

Ahskw-It was one horrible night and haunted me in my nightmares for years. Well until I wrote this story then they nightmares stopped. Yes I have survived a lot in my life time. Faced death 6 times I think I am running out of those nine lives better be careful and take care of the rest of life. Thank you
Fireeyes! This is harrowing. Some angel yanked you out of trouble.
Zuma- Harrowing Yes! Some angel yanked me out of trouble. Thank you
Sure enough scary and riveting. I ain't driving with ya... : )
--rated--
Mr Mustard-You are driving with me or riding with ? What?? Why?? I am a really great driver and I was driving this night. Yes is was very scary indeed, one night I would never want to relive over again. Thank you
I'm sure I read this story a while ago. Am I experiencing inexplicable deja vu or what?!
Hawley-LOL No you are not experiencing deja vu. Thank you for coming by.
What heroes Chris and Tyler were. Chris more or less sacrificed himself for the two of you.
Thesagejournal- Yes Chris and Tyler are heroes. Chris did indeed sacrificed himself for both Tyler and myself. And Tyler sacrificed himself for me when he covered me with his body to protect me. It was a horrible night and one that will stay with me forever and always.
Thank you
Wow. So could have been there, I remember 'rodding, and loved it so.

So sorry for what you lived through, but so glad you lived.

Keep writing.
Connie- OH! Another Hot Rod Girl. Huh? Oh it was what my friends and I lived for, it was all we done except school work. It was a horrible night and a great lose. Chris and Tyler were my best buds and we went no where without each other. Thank you for you comment.
Did you post this way back when? I swear I've read this before!
Pam- Thank you for your comment. Yes I did way back when. I deleted my blog in April when I was leaving and I have decided to stay so now I am rebuilding my blog back up again. This time I am putting all the stories in order as when the events took place in my life and I will be adding more stories as I go along. Thank you!
I read this post when it was posted before -- but it still gave me chills. SO glad you survived to tell the tale!
Faith -Thank you so much for coming by and reading it again. I am so happy I survived but I was lost with out my friends. Thank you
Jesus, eyes. That had to be horrific and damned near impossile to get out of your head. Sorry to hear about your friends.

When you look back at the incredibly stupid things we did, it's amazing that fewer of us are still around.
Bob- It was a horrible thing that happened to my friends and myself that night. I had nightmare for 20 some years until I wrote this story for OS. Then it was like the nightmares just disappeared. It was like the story I had written about it was the release that I needed all those years. My heart ached for many years for my friends and I was lost without them for a long time. The three of us never went anywhere without each other.
Oh on looking back at the things we did when we were teens and early twenties it is amazing that any of us are here today.
Thank you very much
fe24...I'm so glad you survived. "There but for the grace of God, go I"...teenagers driving is sooooo scary. Well done on your story.
Rated & Cheers!
Bubba- "There by the grace of God, go I." Teenagers and their driving is a very scary thing. I know back then my friends and I were out for speed and the faster a car could go the better. Oh it is by the grace of God that some of are still here.
That was a horrible night and one I will never forget. Thank you very much for your comment.
I'm glad you're reposting the content that was deleted. It made me sad to think that all your work was gone.
Allie- Thank you! I am glad that I have the opportunity to re-post all my stories. And to have people on OS read them all. Thank you very much for such a kind comment.
Fireeyes, they say everyone has an angel that looks after them, most of the time. Your angel must have shit his pants. Great writing.
good stuff.

Re-rated after it was re-built.

Wait, what? :)
Scanner-LMAO!!Yeah My Angel must have shit his pants when he was assigned the duty of me. Because my Angel had to work his ass off to take care of me, because I was no easy case for any Angel. Why I am still here is beyond all my own recognition. But hey we all have our days and some are better than others.
Thank you very much for you comment
Tink- Thank you very much.
This story is like a jolt of adreneline!

The writing is so descriptive. My fav line,"Angry ragged sounds of saws cutting and ripping through the metal, and fiberglass..."
Tai- Jolt of adrenaline is one way to put it all because it really was. Thank you very much your compliment on the writing and story.
I am so glad that you are ok. Beautifully written.
Kathy- Thank you so much for your kind comment.