fireeyes24

fireeyes24
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I love to write. I write short stories, poems, and articles of my opinion on subjects that cross my mind.

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SEPTEMBER 12, 2009 2:40PM

Stand Tall

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Every ounce of energy
Tiny measure of hope
Grief stricken
Lost in despair
Exhaustion engulfing
Time ticking
Days into night
Secrets locked up
Escaping
Hiding
Give in
No chance
Life exists
World turns
Nothing stopping
Stand tall
Dust off
Keep going
Climb high
Faith strong
Hope big
Love long
Laugh loud
Live well
Walk on
© 2009 Fireeyes24

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Bump for the feed... To my OS friends.. don't give up and don't give in..
BrianB- Welcome! Thank you :)
When you least expect it, something beautiful can happen to erase what ails us. All we need to do is accept it when it arrives.
wonderful. Just what I needed.
Cartouche- You are so right. There is always a ray of sun shine and hope around the corner but we need to be open enough to accept it when it arrives, and it happens when we least expect it. Thank you

Mission- Glad it was just what you needed. This poems goes out to everyone who is down and out right now. I wrote it with everyone in mind not just myself. Hope it helps.. HUGS - Thank you
It's as though I'm sitting under one of those tall trees meditating. Thanks.
Stacey- Funny that you said that, because as I was trying to find a photo to match this poem, that is what I thought when I found it among the hundreds of photos that I have to use. Thank you
Thanks, Sweetie! I needed that right at this moment.
whew! thanks, I needed that! Hope is exactly what we need.
Michael- You are welcome. I think we all need it about now.. Thank you

Fab- Yes hope is exactly what we need right now. You are welcome. Just trying to cheer everyone up. Thank you
Yes! so many suffering today. so little time to comfort all.
Hope... OK, if you say so.
It's been a bad day.
You, or anyone saying so, is good enough reason and reminder both for me to hope. Thanks for this!
Fireeyes- This is beautiful work. I hope you don't mind me saying that your writing has so much more depth and beauty since you first came to OS. Do you feel that, as well?
Rated for beautiful writing
I agree Junk1! Plus, I think poetry is something that you should keep writing!
Your poetic utterance lifted my soul this evening. I really needed to hear something like this tonight. Very beautitul, creative, and thought filled. I think I will go pick a sunflower and drink a hot cup of tea. Thanks.
Hope is the only thing they can't take away from us. If we lose it, it's because we decide to give it up.

Thank you for reaching out to everyone in your time of exasperation. I hope it gave you a measure of solace.
Beautiful! Just like you! ~hug~
Zuma-Yes so many suffering and there isn't enough time to comfort all. Thank you

Trig-Hope is always around the corner if you look deep enough. Sometimes it is just on the surface, but we chose to not except it. Sorry you had a day bad. Thank you

Sandra- Glad I could offer you a simple reminder to always HOPE. Thank you

Junk1- I have been told that it has more depth and beauty. I do feel it too. Glad you like it. Thank you

Tai- I am writing more poetry, but most of the time they just come to me, then I write them down. Not thinking about it, straight from the heart to the keyboard. Thank you also for agreeing with Junk1 and for your comment.

Lionspride- Glad I could help lift your soul last night. Picking a sunflower and drinking hot tea, sounds pretty relaxing. I think a few of us needed to hear something like this.. Thank you very much

Carolinablue- Yes hope can't be taken away from us, and we can't let it, just like we can't give in or give up.. Yes you gave me some solace.. Thank you

Tink-AWE Thank you so much.. HUGS!!
This was really good! Thank you. It was so nice finally meeting you last night, also!
PatriciaK - Thank you. It was nice to have finally met you also..
Very nice, fireeyes. Well said and important message.

Monte
Monte- Thank you- an important message indeed..