fireeyes24

fireeyes24
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Missouri, USA
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August 03
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I love to write. I write short stories, poems, and articles of my opinion on subjects that cross my mind.

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AUGUST 6, 2010 9:08AM

As We Dance....

Rate: 20 Flag

As  We Dance

Breathe...

Inhale deeply…

Exhale slowly…

Feel the release..

That smile that

Melts me

I am all yours

Moonlight flickering

In your eyes

Lighting the room

So perfectly

In the still

Of the darkness

I can feel the

Warmth sensation

Your body next to mine

Moving gently to lying

On my stomach

Slowly and barely touching

My skin you

                                                   Slowly teasing every inch

With your lips

Feeling nothing but

The Warmth

Of your breath

As you move

Your way

Down my back

Slowly tracing every

Curve of my canvas

Sending tingling sensations

I feel your body

Pressing against mine

Oh the body heat

Skin on skin

You gently

Rollin me over

I gracefully follow

Your every movement

I summit to your

Every motion

Moving with every

Movement you make

Lost in the moment

As if the world

Didn’t exist

Silent conversation

Between two

Elegantly dancing

Under the covers

No words need spoken

Life stands still

As we dance.

 

© 2010 Fireeyes24

 

 

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Glad to see you back and rated with hugs
Wow, FE, this starts the engines. Sensuous and intimate. I love the cadence, an easy swinging rhythm. Nice.
there is so much music here in your manuscript. wow, what a melody. and gently rocking rhythm.
Beatifully done.
Wait a minute...is THIS what you were doing on your birthday??!!
Linda- I feels great to be back. I have been going crazy(ier). HUGS right back to you..
Brian B- That is a great compliment... Thank you glad you liked it.

Snarky- Great to see a new face. Glad you thought it was sexy... Thank you very much. HUGS
Boan1- Thank you very much for that Whoa..
Matt- Sensuous and intimate. I love the cadence. Really happy to hear that you like it.. Thank you for such a compliment
Cynthia- Great to see new face here in my world. You have given me one of the most elegant and beautiful compliment I have ever from. Not just on my posts and any post... Thank you very much.
Chuck - thank you so much for you wonderful comment and for coming by... HUGS
Suzie- This is my imagination working here. On what I wished I was doing on my birthday.
But nope... Me was sitting in the Hospital from Early Sunday Morning to Wednesday at 4:30pm.
Trust me I would have rather been doing the above then where I was. But hey! I survived another birthday, and I have lived to tell about it.
HUGS
~gulp~

catching my breath now...
Cappy - What you got something suck in your hand/opppsss I mean throat/Okay both then..... Thank you
A steamy poem to launch a Friday night! Great timing!
Susan- That was the whole idea- to launch Friday off, with a hot steamy poem. To start the weekend right. Thank you for coming by and for such a great comment.
Great Poem and I love to dance!!
Welcome back, with your sensuous poetry, you!
beautiful! ...and it's getting a little warm in here....where's Hubby? : )
I want to dance like that again! Beautiful, really beautiful
Another beautiful poem on the authors long resume
Thank you everyone. Glad you all love the poem, and hopefully it put a little heat in your weekend.. Grins!
Sorry late on commenting back. Been having a few obstacles a long the way, the last few weeks. Will maybe one day see the light of day..

Thank you.. Love and hugs to you all...
I want that in my life! This was so sexy yet beautiful..
Lunchlady- Thank you for coming back and commenting again. I am with you on what you said, I want it back in my life too. The beauty of passion between two people, can never be underestimated.