fireeyes24

fireeyes24
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AUGUST 9, 2010 5:07PM

Just Hold Me...

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Dying inisde

No one knows it

But me

Just hold me

For a little while

 
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Yeah. Time to go home, I think.
I wish I could see the video...it won't play for me.
Your words are plaintive.
We all are, darlin', but you put it so sweetly.
Sometimes, that is all we need, take care FE..
Damn, been there most of this year. Just when I am startin to feel better I find out someone else has got it.

Ain't that the way of the world.

Well, sure, hon, heres a ((hug)).

be well.
Plaintive and beautiful
More words is not always more feeling
been there hang on.r
So sweet and sad.
Sweet sad song fits perfectly
Can't play the flash thing here at work, but the poem rates a cuddle or two all by itself!
(R)ated for putting the passion in compassion!
At least it sounds like you have someone to ask this of... I hope the holding never ends.
A big hug and lots of love from me to you.
Girl you are in a morbid mood lately listen to Bob up there change is coming and I would say the poems outstanding if I did not know you really felt that way its still outstanding anyway
It's a wrap....of much love and many good thoughts. Rated and wound with hugs...:)
Not another word is needed. You've said it all.
Pensive moments heal many lonely days.
The clapboard house, weathered and old
The wooden porch with footprints of gold
Contemplative thoughts in the ghostly haze

That metal roof in rain storms sang
Beating cold windows, rain-drummed perfect tune
As the rain falls within, clouds baffle the winter moon
From within this house, my desires and hopes sprang

Screen door opens with a creek, slams with a bang
Young child and muddy shoes make their way
Into the kitchen, fresh hot cookies to grab on the way
Through the house where my memories hang

Sometimes a glance of the past is all you need to keep your future bright.
May I offer you a chair and a cup of coffee. Stay as long as you like.
I am a little late on the commenting. I have been kind of letting the comment thread run, letting everyone feel what they may, and take a way what they can.
Thank you all very much for your thoughts.
Nothing like "Going Home," even if only in the mind, that set the soul in the place where it needs to be..
Plus I have to admit I have enjoyed letting it the comment thread run, because it has given me a little opportunity to catch up on a few of my friends along the way.

Irish- Yes! It was time to go home... I think,... Thank you

Cynthia- Plaintive- Thank you for such a compliment. I have found that sometimes with videos, that if too many are watching it at once that it won't play. But if you come back later it will play for you. Just a little hint.. Thank you very much..,

Matt- Sometimes I think thatal what you might be feeling, someone else might also be feeling that same thing. But each one may have a different perspective and out look on it. "You put it so sweetly." Thank you very much for that compliment.. Thank you... HUGS
Bethbug- Welcome.. Always nice to see a new face. Thank you very much..

Rita- You are so right... Sometimes that is all we need is to just "Go Home," even if only in our minds. You take care also.. Hugs..
Thank you very much.

Eck- "Ain't the way of the world." OH! Buddy you said it perfectly right there. Thank you for that ((hug)), one right back to you.

Token- Thank you so much for such a compliment on my poem. Dearly appreciated.. HUGS

hugs,me.- I think we have all been there a time or two in life, and if not at least the last two years... HUGS to you... I will hang on.. Thank you
Short, sweet, and beautiful. R-
Kind of a country and western Jewel. Similar voice, different accent.
Tink- {{{HUGE HUGS}}} Right back to ya.. Thank you

Snarky- Thank you very much for the compliment on the poem. Glad that you thought it powerful.. Thank you

Xenonit-{{{HUGS }}}} Back to ya.. Thank you

Romantic- Glad you liked the song and the poem together.. Thank you..

Jali- I keep telling myself "Just Breathe"... It has to be okay soon, Please..!
Thank you ! Hugs

BrianB- Thank you very much.. HUGS
Yes, simple, but all the better for it. Words should not beguile but reveal.

Be well
Sorry I haven't been able to catch up on replying to comments.
I have had some computer problems, but thanks to my Great Buddy Tink.. All is okay now.. I am still praying.. and keeping fingers crossed.
I will try to get back to replying tomorrow..
Thank you! Very much for all your comments..
This was a beautiful, moving piece. Thank you-R-
Lunchlady- I know you are... I will pm you if I need to talk. You know I am here for you also {{{{HUGS}}}} Thank you

Kate- Thank you! SO happy to hear that you thought it to be lovely and tender.

Fred- Too bad that you couldn't listen to the too. The post deserve a cuddle to two.. Thank you very much.. {{HUGS}}

Grif Thank you for the huge. You made tears come to my eyes.. {{HUGS}} right back to ya.
askwhatyouwant-Unfortunately I don't have some to ask of this... I wish the holding would begin.. Maybe one day there might be..
Thank you very much for coming over, it is always nice to see a new face.. I hope to see you more around here. Thank you

LittleKate- Thank you so much.. Huge Hug and lots of love right back at ya. Thank you

Jack- You are so right this is honestly how I am feeling these days. Thank you for thinking the poem was outstanding anyway, even if it truly how I feel. Thank you

Susan- Yes lots of love and many good thoughts. One day things will get better.. Wounded in a hug to you also.. Thank you
Steve- Great to see you by here again. Always nice to see you on my post. Thank you for such a compliment, "Not another word spoken because I have said them all. But with only a few would to express the feelings. Thank you very much... and thank you for coming by.

Boomer- "Pensive moments heal many lonely days." Thank you for this.. "Sometimes in life you glance into the past just long enough, to understand where you were and where you don't want to go back too. It is what keeps us thriving for a brighter future.
I am a survivor. and I will keep surviving too..
Thank you

Divorce Bard- Okay I will take a sit and a cup of hot tea.. Stay a while.. Thank you

Dave -So happy that you thought it was beautiful. Sometimes the less word you use in poetry the better the poem is. It leaves the reader to be able to feel there own emotions.
Thank you very much..

Snoresville- Yes you could say a country verse of Jewel.
Bout Maranda has a little wild side to you songs also, with lots of attitude.. Thank you very much.

Whindbagg- Yes you are so right words should not beguile but to reveal. Thank yo very much..

Christine- Thank you so much for stopping by. I am glad that you found it beautiful and a moving piece..
Consider yourself held...:{)
Cheers!
TexasBubba-OMG!!!! It is GREAT to see you around here.. Miss ya!
{{{HUGS}}}
Thank you
as Mr. Who's-ee-whatsis said:
you have to lose your life to gain it.

Meaning,
i guess: resurrection, of the personal variety
while you still have the warm embracing flesh
to enjoy it.
Very nice. I want someone right now to hold. Thank you for sharing this.
Mr Sunshine- You are right on target, with your comment.
Life is worth, embracing to the fullest. Sad thing is that most of us, don't even realize what it means to still have life, and what is means to be grateful to be ALIVE. Thank you very much.. Glad to see you over here in, "Fireeyes24's world," Welcome and hope to see you more. and to also read your posts... {{HUGS}}
James, I am with you on that one. ..I want and need someone to hold me. Nothing else, just to hold me. Thank you
Read your poem, unforunately cannot view the video, and have read all the comments so far. I could do with a "group hug" right now. With you and everyone on this wall. Thank you.