fireeyes24

fireeyes24
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I love to write. I write short stories, poems, and articles of my opinion on subjects that cross my mind.

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MARCH 29, 2011 7:53PM

Winds Of Destiny

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I had this poem up yesterday but due to computer problems I had to remove it. I am reposting it now to share with everyone.
I hope you all will enjoy it.  Thank you! Have a nice evening.

 
 
 
Winds Of Destiny
 
 
Winds of destiny blow
Least expect
Gust of fury
As a hurricane
Barely fans one's cheek
As a cool summer breeze
Bringing a future
Impossible to ignore
Winds of destiny
Cannot be denied
 
 
Winds did not anticipate
Gusted more strongly
Ever imagined possible
Protect one's self
As a cautious traveler
Lost the soul instead
Foolish to ignore
As a clown in the mirror
Come to realize
Can not deny
Winds of destiny


                                                                        
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This is the first post I've read from you, and well, just beautiful!

*nodding*

Thank you for sharing this!
Very very well written! I like it very much Chica!! :)
Sayin' a mouthful here kiddo, but you know that ;).

Good FE, I like the feel and flow of it.

Rated for times of no choice.
I decided to read this again with some music. I chose the "Meet Joe Black" theme and it was stunning.

Golden Zuma for poetry!
Daniel-Hello! Welcome to 'My World, ' glad to have you around here and hope to see more of you. Thank you very much for compliment of the poem being "just beautiful."
Me LIKEEEEEE!!!! Rated with all four paws and my tail!! ;D

~Wanders off into the thorn bushes to keep away from that damn wind~
Sobersteve- Thank you thank you thank you!!! Glad you like it!
Seer-- "Sayin' a mouthful here kiddo, but you know that ;)." - yes it is a mouth full, testing my limits.. "Quickest way to learn something new about one's self is to explore one's limits."
Thank you very much for the compliment.. hugs
xenonlit- "Golden Zuma for poetry!" WOW!!!! AWESOME!!!
I will have to go back to the drawing board and kick you out some more. Since you are loving them so much.. Thank You! For the song idea.. I couldn't find a song for it..
Thank you! hugs
Tink- Hey !! Alright! All four paws and a tail.... AYAY!!
Thank you
Sometimes I feel like a speck of dust in the wind of destiny!!
Nice poem~
rated
Subtle idea, well told. R
Susie L. -- I can so relate. I feel like a speck in the winds of Destiny sometimes too. I am hoping one day it will notice me... grins.
Thank you
Thoth- Subtle idea. Thank you very much.
Your poem creates its own music. Like a wind of destiny, it enraptures the reader. Thanks.
I am carried away; bewitched

best regards,
Leon- Thank you so much for such a great compliment. One thing that a poet wants to accomplish is to have a flow of words like music, and to be able to paint a picture with as few words as possible.
Thank you
ume- Welcome to 'My World' here on OS, hope to see you around. Thank you very much for such a compliment, one I have never received.. Thank you
quite well put:
Come to realize
Can not deny
Winds of destiny....yet...Least expect
Gust of fury
As a hurricane
Barely fans one's cheek...

one must be damn secure in their karma to do so.

you are: cuz you see the clown masquerading as your "me"
in the mirror, disturbing your
"I" in fruitless attempts to
create a body
which completely
symbolizes your strong soul
in flesh and blood.