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JULY 14, 2011 7:40PM

You Gave That To Me

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In the beginning

I couldn’t help but to think

We were brought together

For some Divine purpose

Still unknown to us today

 Help one another to heal

Gain our hearts back

Like to believe

We achieved that

We can move forward

In our search for the

One in a million

 Taking only

Fond memories

When they cross my mind

They will bring

A smile to my face

A peace to my heart

Even if our paths

Never cross again

 There is a part of me

That wants to hold

Onto you forever

Can’t help but to think

That would be too easy

Loving someone else might

Diminish the memories

 Though I have grieved over

What might have been

I am thankful

That you came into my life

Even if only for

A short period of time

It is possible to

Bounce back and move on

Without you even

Being aware you had done it

You made me believe 

True love can not be denied

 Where there is love,

There is hope

Love leaves us

With only one choice,

To forgive

You gave that to me

 

 

 © 2011 by Jackie S. Gordon , aka Fireeyes24

 

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:-( Beautiful!!!!

Of course, rated!! Happy tears!!!!
Ah, you're a hopeless romantic. Someone has to do it. ;-)
Tink--Thank you!! Happy tears, is better than sad tears.. hugs
Cappy- LOL!! Yepper!! Someone has to do the job of being a hopeless romantic. I seem to do the job so well. giggles
Thank you!!
Glad to see you again. It was a love worth having when it hurts in the end.
Beautiful poem!
R
Susie- Yes it is a love worth loving if it hurts in the end. All love stories end with someone being left behind, it doesn't matter why or how, there is someone left behind. But without loving in life, is not living at all. Thank you very much..
Glad to see you too..
Yum!!

Made my toes tingle and my spine curl.....

(Mmmmm, maybe that should be toes curl and spine tingle.....?)

*sigh* - love is soooo confusing.

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Beautiful poem
I felt that pain when my first love died
I felt it again when my next one walked away
it is the same pain
I gave up on forgiveness
could not figure out how to forgive someone for dying
could not understand what good it would to to someone without
remorse
Thank you for your wonderful words of love
rated with love
There is a divine purpose in all so much of our lives...and the happenings in them.
It is well that you see it and watch for it in yours.
Lovely to read and a boost for all we hopeless romantics.

Rather reminds me of the 'Reason, Season, Lifetime' philosophy which always makes me cry.
Sounds to me like your romance with that cowboy guy may have ended. This is a really good send off in any case as the cliché go’s its better to have loved and lost that to never have loved at all.
I like these lines a lot: "Where there is love, there is hope

Love leaves us with only one choice,

To forgive"

Love, genuine love, the kind that pulls us out of self-involvement and into other-involvement is a sign of absolute trust, and that is a wonder, and for that we should be grateful.

Very nice poem--bracing and thoughtful.
Beautiful, Jackie. And good news you feel confident now in outing your name. Truly good news.
Thank You! So much for all the great comments. You all are so awesome! I've missed everyone.

I will be back on later to reply to each one individually. Have to do the thing we call life, and work.

Note to Jack- The cowboy and I are only friends. It is hard to have a romance with memories.
This poem was actually kind of inspired by a friend of mine.
A lot of peace and acceptance in the tone of this poem. I love wistful feeling memories when you get to where your okay with moving on. It's sweet to look back and enjoy the little twinge of a moment that will never be again.

You captured that so well here.
"Where there is love, there is hope"

Indeed!
I like this.. that standing in-between place, when we first realize that love is undefinable, indefensible, and impossible to confine or destroy.

Rated for we're going to love even when we actively resist.
skypixie- Yes Love is very confusing. I not sure which way sounds best...lol
Thank You!
RP- The pain really is the same pain. It doesn't matter if they left by choice, or by no control of their own, the pain and emptiness one feels is the same no matter what.
Forgiveness is a very confusing thing at times. One someones has to forgive within their own hearts, in order to heal and move forward. That kind of forgiveness the one who done wrong doesn't ever have to know that you forgave them for what they have done. You're not fogiving them for their benefit and to help them, you are doing it for yourself, to heal and find peace.
It was something I had to learn to do 4yrs, to find peace, heal, grow, and go forward.
It was a feeling I have often tried to put into words, but haven't succeeded yet.
Thank you
JD- Yes there is a divine purpose in everything that happens in our lives. Thank you
Linda- YaYa!! I am not the only hopeless romantic in the bunch.. (see that Cappy? I'm not the only one)
I will have to look that one up. It rings a bell, but I just can place it right now.
Thank You
Jack- I answered part of your comment in my reply this morning. I will add though, you have a really great memory. Especailly for a man, teehee. hugs
Yes- it is better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all.
It is also better to feel pain, than feel nothing at all.
Thank You
Jerry- You are so right. That kind of love is the love we all seek, male or female, and some hardly ever find.
I will admit, I have never loved that deeply, or been loved that deeply in return. Neither have I ever lost so deeply.
This poem was inspired by a good friend, who has loved and lost so deeply. In the short time we have talked I have learned, what it most feel like to have, loved and lost so deeply.
Maybe one of these days, this hopeless romantic, will at least know what it feels like to have loved so deeply.

Thank you
Matt- Huge Smile!! Yes good news for the name thing. I had come out with it because someone stole some of my poetry. Sage said to be pissed and flattered both, not in those exact words, but you get the point.
But on the second hand it does feel really great, to not have to hide behind a screen name, to be safe. It feel kind of like remove some of the bars to my prison cell.
Thank you
Bobbot- Hey There!! Happy to see you. Thank You
When are we going fishing?
Hugs
Rebecca-Thank you!

Charlie- That wistful feelings that you get at the point where you have found peace, and are comfortable with moving on, is worth all that you felt before. Some times the memories are what helps us through, even if they are painful or joyful.
Thank you so much for the compliment on the poem..
Kit- Yes indeed!!! Thank you!!
Seer- We can actively resist all we want, but love will happen.

"that standing in-between place, when we first realize that love is undefinable, indefensible, and impossible to confine or destroy."
You are so right on the money on this.
Thank you!
very good prose...rated~
What a great tribute to the power of the human spirit to rebound and seek love again. (It is great to see you back on the boards.)
Note to Jack- I was rereading comments. I remember that back in March this year, I had posted a post about dating a cowboy. Thought well dang it, maybe Jack meant that cowboy.
So here an answer on that one. He turned out to be a HUGE HUGE player. One of those that I tell, "You can ride out on the same white horse, you think you rode in on."

I sometimes think it would be so much easier to just be my, hopeless romantic recluse self, hide from the world, and write and draw. But that would be giving up, and I am not good at that. smiles
Ollie's - Thank You! Higs
Sheila- Romantic is the only way to go..smiles
Thank you! Hugs
Bell- So happy to hear that you thought it was a great tribute.
I don't think we pay enough of a tribute to the power of love, and the strenght to rebound, to love again. Thank You!
It is great to come on here, I miss everyone dearly.
Huge hugs
Sad lesson to learn but also a good lesson...beautiful
I think many of us have felt this way. I know I have. Thanks for the memories.
you gave me a warm fuzzy.

thanks
Truly lovely, J. Bittersweetness that love can be.
Lunchlady- The saddest lessons that we endure, are sometimes the most important lessons to learn.
Thank you! hugs
Mary Ann- You are so right.. We would never learn and grow, if we didn't love and lose, and feel the deepest human emotions that pierce all the way to the soul.
You are so welcome.. Thank you! hugs
That is just so excellent.Thanks for sharing and writing it but not in that order.
Beautiful fireeyes! Isn't it nice when someone can bring hope back to your heart?
That was very beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with me!
I have been wondering when the next new post is coming...keep the fire in those eyes burning bright.
Lovely and romantic! We all keep coming back for more; it's what makes us human.
I'm a bit late, but very nice!

-r-

kurt