Here's my version of the 5 word exercise from my current muse, red_sea_rose. The challenge ? To write a poem using five assigned words. This week: Sing, Apple, Tin, Forty, Matchstick.
MATCH GIRL
This time of night, who’s buying matches? No one
Who has the cash to burn—they’re all at home
With fires new-lit in glowing iron stoves
Fat bellies apple-red and satisfied
The cold of morning still nine hours away
When they give birth to ashes, sleep and dream.
I pass a clutch of men, their tin can stove
Of pigeon stew, too meager for them all
(Just six of them but might as well be forty)
That bubbles with the promise of a brawl
And makes my stomach sing in tomcat lust.
There are no cats here since the winter came.
This story ends in ways you’ve always known:
How each flare of a matchstick’s sulphur breath
Brings with it dreams of plenty, cruel visions
Of family, of the life that’s yet to come
And leaves behind dark heads on bright white wood--
The length that’s left to burn, that never will.


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Comments
Brings with it dreams of plenty, cruel visions
Of family, "
Mmm :) Fire has that effect on me - makes me feel more 'human', consequently, at once overwhelmed with 'plenty' and with loss.
Peece,
David
Dense, textured, mythic and pleasing to the senses. I'm glad the words worked, sometimes they don't.