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FirstAwake
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Salt Lake City, Utah, USA
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September 08
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Hierophant
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Three's
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Actor, writer, designer, fortune's fool. Recovering Mormon, recovered overachiever. Currently employed as Wardrobe Supervisor at a big-ass theater in a small-ass town. Except that we hosted the Olympics that one time. So, big-ish town. Also, I ramble. Self-knowledge is my strongest and weakest suit. Approaching singularity from the wrong side of time. Everyone thinks I'm just great. Everyone. Even you.

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FEBRUARY 22, 2009 8:19PM

5 Words--inspired by red_sea_rose

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Here's my version of the 5 word exercise from my current muse, red_sea_rose. The challenge ? To write a poem using five assigned words. This week: Sing, Apple, Tin, Forty, Matchstick. 

 

MATCH GIRL

This time of night, who’s buying matches? No one

Who has the cash to burn—they’re all at home

With fires new-lit in glowing iron stoves

Fat bellies apple-red and satisfied

The cold of morning still nine hours away

When they give birth to ashes, sleep and dream.

 

I pass a clutch of men, their tin can stove

Of pigeon stew, too meager for them all

(Just six of them but might as well be forty)

That bubbles with the promise of a brawl

And makes my stomach sing in tomcat lust.

There are no cats here since the winter came.

 

This story ends in ways you’ve always known:

How each flare of a matchstick’s sulphur breath

Brings with it dreams of plenty, cruel visions

Of family, of the life that’s yet to come

And leaves behind dark heads on bright white wood--

The length that’s left to burn, that never will.  

 

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"How each flare of a matchstick’s sulphur breath

Brings with it dreams of plenty, cruel visions

Of family, "

Mmm :) Fire has that effect on me - makes me feel more 'human', consequently, at once overwhelmed with 'plenty' and with loss.

Peece,
David
David: I feel the same way about the Hans Christian Andersen story this poem comes from--"at once overwhelmed with 'plenty' and with loss." I've got another fire-image poem I'll post as soon as I can find the pic that goes with it...hope you like it as well. Thanks for all your kind comments.
Oh how The Matchstick Girl haunted me as a child. If my parents had known I was reading unfiltered Hans Christian Andersen, they might have saved me some shadow time.

Dense, textured, mythic and pleasing to the senses. I'm glad the words worked, sometimes they don't.