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" The Flood on the Darling River "
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Iron Poet Challenge # 11
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Keen of the Darling River
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Füsun Atalay
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My bed has shrunk; blue surface - a memory of my past
The scorched plains are bare; skies - the colour of brass
No kookaburra above, no breezes through bronze grass
Silence has crept and hangs above like a ghastly shadow
No longer flowing in the glory of my heydays - alas !
Snaking from Queensland to northern New South Wales.
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Death and ruin are what I see everywhere I crawl;
All that bears witness to the flood of eighteen hundred and nine-zero
Is but a murky stream advancing on the grey-black mire;
While quagmires quiver and in debris salt-springs bubble,
Sojourner, if you pass by, listen: You may learn a lesson dire
And take heed when you hear the keen of the Darling River.
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Füsun Atalay ~ Copyright © Will of my Own - 2012
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This is my first participation in the Iron Poet Challenge. I was planning to read and admire the entries of the super-talented poets here, but I just couldn't ignore Little Kate's invitation this time. So, doubtful as to if I joined the flow or followed my own path, I rolled up my pants and jumped into the river of my choice, let's say.
Here are the rules we were given:
1. Write a poem, in any form, from the perspective of a river ... not about a river ... but from the river's own outlook. Become the river!
2. The river's name must be included in the poem AND the name must be that of an Australian river! (A list of Australian rivers and creeks can be found here. By clicking on the name of the river or creek you will find a wealth of information which might be useful in your poem!)
3. There must be at least one word beginning with the letter 'q' in the poem.
4. A number, OR date, OR year, should also appear in the poem.
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Fusun, what made you ever think of yourself as not up to such challenges? It's stunning. Absolutely breathtaking.
Rated
While quagmires quiver and in debris salt-springs bubble,
Sojourner, if you pass by, listen: You may learn a lesson dire
I love these lines and the river's message.
The Darling is our longest river system ... one of the largest in the world, I think ... and spread out through much of inland New South Wales.
Fusun, I know you don't normally write for these challenges but I am so glad you did. I can't thank you enough! You have a wonderful talent, my friend.
Thanks to all who came and read the lament of Darling River.
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I love the illustration you chose.
Your take on this reminds me of our great ( anthemic) Dorothea MacKellar & her "I love a sunburnt country ..."
Rising from springs & monsoon rains in the north, our Darling struggles across some of the most inhospitable country on earth, south to the Southern Ocean.
You've inhabited her journey, & described the stages so well.
Thank you.
* VA - Your visit and comments are much appreciated.
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* Kim Gamble - Half of this was based on "guess work" between the time I read about the challenge and I wrote this post. To be validated by comments such as Kate's and yours mean much since you are natives of the country and know much more about your land, its history, and literature. Now I'm going to look up more on Dorothea MacKellar, of whom I hadn't heard before. Thank you!
* Thoth- You are always so encouraging, thank you!
Oh wait....because no matter WHAT you write...it is outstanding!!!!
FusunA --- so darned well done...and thanks for joining in. Makes this challenge thing so darn much fun!!!
Yes, please do look up Dorothea MacKellar ...and My Country.
Oh and I see JD asks the question too ... Just why exactly don't you write more poetry? 'Cause I think you write beautiful poetry!
What fun it is to have you join in. Thank you again, dear friend.
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Thank you all for your visits and comments. It's so nice to hear new voices and see new faces. ☼
* Kate - Thank you for the lovely PM. My Country is on my list, for sure.
Here in Greece, is 8 o'clock in the evening, and when we meet, we say " Kalispera'' (goodevening) at this hour.
So my Kalispera to you, with many thank you for your dreamy work.
Rated.
Makes on ache for all the things now lost
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It also took me back in time... can water move backwards?
In any case This was great!
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