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Greg Correll

Greg Correll
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New Paltz, New York, US
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September 21
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Founder, Chief of Deselopy (small packages); Editor (doesthismakesense.com)
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APRIL 23, 2009 3:29PM

rare elements

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we think

we might have

rare elements in us

 

as if

our personal lab

could reliably trace

 

our subtlest chemistry

our binds and our breaks

and show to us

 

our

coldest retreats

our beatingest hearts

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...and all these elements bind us all together in common origin.

Lovely and penetrating thoughts.
PS - Is that a rabbit or a kitty on your back?
a mutant shi tzu (shudder)
To me, this means that we love to think of ourselves and our situations as unique in this world. In reality, we are more alike than we'd like to think.

What motivated this great poem?
noah: close to what you say. we operate on an everyday level of thinking, believing we can parse ourselves, our behaviors, our motivations, that this is all ordinary. and it makes sense, to us, to others our explanations, even tho we rarely include how common we are and how much is biology. we take for granted our specialness. events that are ours alone, we think, desires that we hesitate to admit to, and thus we preserve the illusion of a central and unique place in the world. and then there are our dreams. rare, we think we are, worthy of a god's eye on us.

but in fact free will is an illusion and we cannot do other than a human can do, or must do, or is capable of imagining. is compelled to imagine. including imagining an edition of human being with true free will.

we are the helium beast, full of float and light, who mistake the invisible urge to move upwards for a transcendent soul, who would prefer not to dwell upon our mere soles, our thick and calloused soles.