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SEPTEMBER 22, 2009 7:47AM

I Sing of Elysian OS!

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I sing the body of electronic OS! the corpus delectable, the blurs of pain and sweet joy on the activated phosphor on the scratch-resistant glass; the orderly diodes, emitting light and heat and mess, the human mismatch and hurly-burly and kiss-kiss and disaffection and Original Glamour and peerless camaraderie

and here we are momentary love and the flounce of prevention and we are not ghosts in the aisles. Here we turn tap tap tap into feel and caress and blithe and horror and OUTRAGE and effort and 

I sing the OS effort! the writers becoming, the writers who build their craft with the right rite: writing, just writing. 

I sing the Voice! I sing the ears, I sing the full throat and the open heart, I sing the mindfulness and the inane and the twinkle; I sing the lark and the snark and the skewered trolling shark; I sing OS!

I declaim: not posting is a grey, treeless plain. I declare: I love OS! I murmur: I love what my life is with OS.

I fly here, I lie here, in Elysian leisure, god of tap tap tap, with all the gods and goddesses and bodhisattvas and demiurges, drunks and tailors and crofters and fluffers, all-powerful, all-knowing, all-seeing tappers who fall corrected and rise dejected and go at it again, cramped by the lust for Cover -- but indifferent when it counts, when despair mounts and must be described, when memory urges, when sly insists and taptaptap is the only antidote,

and o yes, OS will know, and will not let me languish.

I sing antidote! to brats and failure and distraction, to ignor-a-muses, to the perennial sense of nothing, to the illusion that we have nothing, not even nothing, that we have holes where nothing might have lived

I sing in OS: of surgeries and lost romance and runner's high and awful moms and cruel fathers and beloveds who die and loss and grief. I sing redemption and political pie, high slices full of cherry-picked facts,  juicy dishes of public go-figures.

And political balls, played where they Lie and Lie, endlessly...

 I sing: more than scribble, more than scrabble, more than scramble for the EP "A"! I sing the real deal, even with the marked cards we're stuck with. I sing fears played on, worried at, til they are familiar, frayed at the edges, and then set aside, commented away.

I sing Personas slicked back, scanned by shrewd OS, revealed as momentary affect only; teased, deflated, made to stand after-bathos, dripping, unruly, sheepish, just another OS monkey, hooting in the ancient OS temple at midnight.

I sing OS souls like twists of wind, momentarily well-formed, our shapes visible from our words, the leaves that define our movement upwards, beautiful in the OS light, doomed always to fall apart, right at the height of our power, goddamnit.

I sing the search for a new draft, to carry us up again.

I sing forearm hairs, hairs on the back of our necks, faint and precious, rising unbidden when brushed by another's words and how good is that? what magic that your taptaptap becomes me here? swooning, over your words, the kitsy rise, the swirl again and again, hypnotized by your human Voice, your OS Voice, your ache and beauty and heartbeat, felt here

a million million miles away, just beyond the phosphor, the glass, the enter-face, in my taptaptap roots, embedded deep in the nourishing and ambrosaic gardens, the personal plots, the Elysian Fields, of OS.

 

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Inspired by the estimable JKBrady (http://open.salon.com/blog/jk_brady/2009/09/21/are_you_kidding_me_cover_gripers_-_click_here)
Okay.

But occasional howls of outrage too...
Myriad: agreed; added to the 2nd graf
If this ain't a Front Page quality post what is?
White House cook recipe for one Okra bushel!
This read like a fig on a silver tea service plater.
And I sing with you! xox
This says it all. The only difference is, is that this says it all so magically well. HIGHLY rated.
"ignor-a-muses" - jazz music there.
You give Whitman a run for his money.
Art: a fig indeed, a ripe one, green and red pulp inside, the hoary mudplum skin outside

Robin: tra-la! xox

cartouche: thank you

Stacey: love that you note that

Lea: If only. Thanks
Lovely in its site-specific way. Especially the "God of Tap, tap, tap" phrase which is what it's all about. May have to borrow that...
dickens: taptaptap: pat pending, all rights reserved, copyright 2009. You can use taptap, or tap tap or tap or tap.tap.tap. Or tap tapta-taptap -- two bits!

JK: I love it too, the (excuse-the-woodstock-woowoo-new-age-phrase) "synergistic" effects.

As to "flounce..": see above, but for you? go ahead, t/h appreciated
I'll sing harmony, and add a bass line (as in bass guitar, not the fish). This made me smile.
ah hitting the Whitman again I see.
Owl: then again, if I were merely fishing for comments, you would be the only one who delivered the reel thing. You're probably a pisces, working for scale. D.S. al FIN-e, viz the music.
Ben: and poor Walt is helpless to hit back. Left in the grass, as he is.
this.is.perfect.

loved the comment on jk's; so glad you expanded it here.
So is there a CD that I might purchase of all this singing?

Seriously, well done, Greg. Although I had hoped someone would try to fit the whole OS experience into "The Jabberwocky".

Thumbed. This should be an EP, but since it should be it won't be.
channeling Walt, how cool
"I sing the search for a new draft, to carry us up again."

Yes - twists of wind, always granted a new draft. I never thought of it that way before, but I recognize the feeling, which you, my friend, are an ace at delivering. Keep on tappin.'
"I sing forearm hairs, hairs on the back of our necks, faint and precious, rising unbidden when brushed by another's words and how good is that?"

I think we just found out (again). This is just sparkly with something I can't quite put my finger on ... more emotion than feeling, made of bent light and whispers ~ whatever it is ... I love it.
femme: thank you

Bill: or Edward Lear:

There once was a poster from the Internets
Who blogged on OS for the tete-a-tetes
His pieces were so-so
His prose even less so
But commented lest they would all forgets

Roy: a grey and flipping channel, I suspect, like UHF

Jeremiah: that line and the graf above it? the best part

Owl: stop LOLly gagging

Mother: "bent light and whispers"...sigh...

Let's all go to Greece and read our poems to each other, perched idly on whitewashed villa walls, draped in hammocks, the sounds of a blue surf down below, with wine and hashish and sharp pencils, til dawn...
I just loved this and keep coming back to read. Thank you!
Mary: I have started to re-read lately. I keep finding things that required close read, like Roy's incredible blend of modern Spanish picaresque, a dash of original swashbuckle, and authentic plaintive consideration of existence itself, seeing itself thru us/through the eyes of an oddyseus of the dark: kept imprisoned since birth, left to encounter the world AND the most intense moral tests, in full strength, all at once, forcing him to be CONSCIOUS -- enforced by beings who can't manage it themselves. Us. (http://open.salon.com/blog/roy_jimenez/2009/08/16/being_is_believing. And this (http://open.salon.com/blog/rich_banks/2009/09/22/how_do_you_like_them_apples_not_very_damn_much, an elegant grouse about the experience of fresh apples, post-green revolution. And this: A shaggy and exuberant run at Karma and looking after the mutts among us. And a fine period piece with a huge heart (http://open.salon.com/blog/gary_justis/2009/09/21/karma_old_dogs_and_fine_men
greg this is great. thanks for the morning pick me up.
As long as you write, I'll continue to "hoot in the OS temple"...and maybe even scribble---taptaptap...how typing THAT resembles a systolic...diastolic...ppppush to expel, expand, exhale.

Thanks!
This is just wonderful. Very well written.

Rated.
So OS is where Usenet has retreated?
I like this so much I am coming out of the shadows.
I'm late arriving at this party, but OS doesn't mind.
~R~