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Greg Correll
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MARCH 26, 2010 11:30AM

heiroglyphics

Rate: 17 Flag

 

dreamtrampoline

heat on the trampoline

higher bounce higher

grins wide

eyes of cracked blue
eyes of thready black

hands hold slip hold slip

up

up

UPP

land wrong foot footfoot collisions laugh sloppy stops

one: wrong-step-up-fall-over

the other one: try-to-walk-stretched-rubberuprubberdown-fall-over

both: roll over on backs              skooch away some

one: pulls shorts hem a bit; better; adjust

both: settle in

both: shield eyes from glare

the direct sun puts yellow glow worms around the treetops

one: turns a cap brim

the other one: puts an arm over eyes

both: peek at each other

sun puts red lightning neon between fingers eyes adjust just so

both: knees up

both: breathe out

one: looks down at new breasts

the other one: looks at clouds

the glare retreats so long as the arm is like this the cap angle precise

disorder in the white overhead
crushed ecstatic lace in the too blue

"I'm sorry about what I said on Facebook" one says

the other swallows

too hot on the trampoline too hot is nice when the hose is nearby

"I know" the other one says
and rolls onto her side her whole face now in cap's shade
her squint disappears

one: turns her head stretches neck
looks through fingers across her smooth shoulder
cups her palm over brow

her eyes relax

they see each other

cracked blue
thready black

both: smile in fractions

the other one: rolls onto back again

both: return to the imperfect sky

"it's not my business" one says

both: knees lean in, one touches the other
still not falling into the bowl of rubber
but
their arms relax as weight is born now by knees pressed together
no collapse together no tangle

the heat

the white glare

the pressure on young knees

"besides, you don't know what I know" the other one says

inside the dented screen door Mother hears them laugh
says "gazpacho, fried banana sandwiches and limeade
in 5 minutes"

a cardinal drops to leaf litter under trees at the end of the yard

the moon is a pale erasure in the late summer sky

a phoebe pleads with two notes

in the cool of the kitchen the slap and clatter
spoons on plates

one: drops her arm face in the sun arms straight at sides
fingers brush light along her bare legs
squinches her eyes tight

one says:

"besides, if we are just, just the accidental way, or how the whole universe can, like, know itself? see itself?"

-- cicadas buzz --

"I mean, good enough, right? "

the other says:

"either way I'll still love Jesus" 

her eyes on the raveling cloud under her brim

small smiles

 

 

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So much to like about this. You'd get rave reviews from me just for the photos. Found my head bobbing up and down, up and down during the trampoline lines. You bring so much vivid reality to this that you open up a portal that takes me straight through your eyes and heart to the scenes you're capturing. You are an amazing artist. An amazing thinker. Amazing human being. (r)
I love the moment by moment ness of this and I love the pictures!
A Friday morning gift!
This is one of the freshest, sparest, things I've read in a long time. Reads like a lake breeze.
you never fail to astound me.
now THIS is poetry.

what fun. what joy.

thank you.
stumbling upon a truth...
"one: looks down at new breasts
the other one: looks at clouds "

This piece was a great capture and insight of young girls' minds as that one quote above says so well. I could see and feel this scene . Well, done. Very sensitive piece.
beautiful, the poem and the images.
Kind of makes me blue in the way that I know I can't experience it for the first time again.
I don't know what Spring Fever has gotten into you, but I love it. Keep 'em coming.
Two kids on a trampoline and you turn it into a special moment in time. Great Stuff!
a dozen ratings! amazing considering this is a poem an fiction!

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Elisa: you just did. Thank you.

Matt: I made your bobble? Then my wok here is done. I will find a winged horse and ascend to the heavens ;)

Thank you for this exceptional comment. I feel honored.

anna: it was fun to write this with existential curtness. Thank you.

sophie: Thank you.

Owl! love that, a lake breeze. Last one in's buffle-headed duck (splash!) Thank you.

fingerlakes: Thank you, dear one. Be careful out there.

Philip: Thank you.

foolish: gosh! Thank you.

Nikki: all the best truths have muddy footprints on them. Thank you.

Dr, Spudman: what a great comment. I guess I have something to show for having three daughters. (my only other male in our house is our mutant shi-tzu, bear. But he's gay. He and I are pals, despite the wide gulf between us.) Thank you.

femme: Thank you.

aim! oh, don't be blue!

(wait a minute. I want my poetry to cause deep emotions. so go ahead, be blue!)

It is spring fever, smart cookie, you. Thank you.

Cap'n: Thank you.

scanner: It will be time to set up it up again soon. Thank you.
Excellent snapshot of a moment in time.
What Owl said. You just keep surprising us with amazing gifts. Thank you.
A great deal of fun. I never would've taken bouncing on a trampoline to be a place for reflection.
Oh I just loved this so------home----to me.Thank you!
boan: thank you

Sally! thank you, friend

Stim: why not? as we jump to the sky? thank you

Anne: I am glad you saw this. Though a nonbeliever I get it, I really do. thank you